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« on: February 21, 2010, 09:55:12 pm »

I made a family today, and made up a little story about them in my head. I thought I would share what I have so far, and if people are interested then I will continue it Grin (Sorry my pictures may not be the best, I try my best Tongue)


My name is Ellie Wilder. I'm 13 years old and I live with my mom, sister and brother. We are triplets, and our father left our mom when he found out she was pregnant. I guess he wasn't ready to handle children.
I suppose you might be wondering what happened to my eyes. Usually this is when someone says "it's a long story," but it really isn't. Last year, my mom was cooking bacon, and I got too close. Grease leapt off the pan and burned my eyes. My mom brought me to the hospital, but the doctors said there was nothing they could do. So, since then, I haven't been able to see a thing.
 

I'm really self-conscious about my eyes. My sister and mom say they are creepy and that they freak people out. They say I look like a monster. I used to have beautiful bluey-green eyes like my mom. But now I'm a hideous monster...


This is my sister Ashley. Usually she doesn't wear glasses. She only puts them on when she has to. She's my mom's favourite.
"No, parents don't have favourites!" People say. But they do.  I'm blind and I can see it.
It's always, "Ashley" this and "Ashley" that. She can see. She has blue eyes. She's perfect. I'm just a monster.

The young woman you see here is my mom. She's only about 35.
There isn't much to say about her. She isn't around much; she's usually out partying or dating some random guy. We mostly fend for ourselves around here, unless Ashley complains. Then she starts yelling at Nick and me, asking us why we can't be perfect like Ashley. I never want to be like her. Ever. She seems perfect to anyone. Even my mom falls for her "little Miss Perfect" act. Only Nick and I know what she is really like. Evil.

Speaking of Nick, here he is. My brother and best friend. Ashley doesn't get through to him. He has a steel shield that her tiny mind can't penetrate.  He just laughs off whatever petty insult she throws at him. I don’t know how he does it. She always gets to me. Mainly because I let her. Nicky says I shouldn’t, but I’m not sure how…

Like this evening for example.


My mom was leaving for her “friend’s” house, and of course little Ashley the suck-up was right there at the door saying good-bye, telling her how “pretty” she looked.
“Bye Mommy! I hope you have fun!”  She makes me sick…
When she left, Nick and Ashley went to their rooms to get their pajamas on. I stayed in the living room, because I needed Nick’s help getting changed. I don’t trust Ashley.  But I didn’t hear Ashley walk to her room. Strange… I thought.
Lo and behold I heard her footsteps behind me, and soon I heard her  shrieking at me in that nasally little voice of hers.
“WHAT ARE YOU STILL DOING OUT HERE YOU LITTLE FREAK?”
Okay, That’s all for now  Let me know how I’m doing so far. Any improvements? Tell me! Don’t be shy.
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« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2010, 10:32:11 am »

I like it! I think you could go somewhere very interesting with you character. YAY

And by the way, your sims are gorgeous!!!  Goodjob
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« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2010, 04:11:53 pm »

Thank you  Grin I hope you'll like the next chapter even more  Hug2
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« Reply #3 on: March 01, 2010, 10:00:04 pm »

I have no doubts that I will like it. Do you know it will be available?
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« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2010, 10:19:35 pm »

ew. Ashley's a b**** hope she gets what's coming to her
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« Reply #5 on: March 05, 2010, 10:19:42 pm »

I'm sorry I haven't updated in a LONG time. School is hectic for me right now...
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« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2010, 12:35:22 am »

I'm loving this! Smiley)

Please more?
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« Reply #7 on: March 08, 2010, 05:28:44 pm »

Ok, a less stressful day today, I figured I'd write a bit more Smiley
+For anyone that reads LFB, LILY!!! NOOOO!!!! Sad Sad SadSad Sad




Anyways,


I ran to the direction of my room. To my humiliation, I bashed off the wall and fell on the hard floor. This made Ashley howl with laughter. I picked myself up off the ground and managed to get into my room.


I tripped again and collapsed on the rug in my bedroom. Embarrassed, I started crying, until Nick stepped in.
“Hey, come on Ellie. Don’t let her get to you like that. Let’s get your pajamas on. It’ll be ok.”
I stepped into my pajama bottoms, realizing they were an old pair of Ashley’s. I started to cry again. Hot, angry tears fell down my cheeks. Everything that is mine was once Ashley’s. I don’t know if I’ve ever owned something that was all my own.

Nick led me into the living room and sat down on the couch.
“I can’t lead you around every day sis; see if you can find your way to the sofa. Follow my voice.”
I stood in the middle of the living room, feeling like a fool. I didn’t know the way to the couch in my own house. Ashley’s thunderous footsteps felt like elephants stampeding through the house.
“Freak!” she shrieked. God, sometimes I swear she’s a banshee. “Why are YOU wearing my pajamas?! I didn’t say you could have them!”
“Hey! Little miss psycho! Leave Ellie alone! She can’t tell what she’s wearing!”
“Shut up Nick! I can do whatever I want! I’m mom’s favourite you know.” I wanted to scream. She is so stupid!
“Wipe that look of your face you little freak!” Oh crap. She saw the smile I get when Ashley gets told.

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« Reply #8 on: March 12, 2010, 06:54:52 pm »

I hope a satelite falls on Ashley  angry
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« Reply #9 on: March 13, 2010, 10:02:16 am »

She'll get what's coming to her  Evil
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« Reply #10 on: March 27, 2010, 08:26:44 pm »

I agree with Aquarius.
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« Reply #11 on: March 28, 2010, 03:40:18 pm »

Nice to see you back Katie Smiley Mind if I call you that?
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« Reply #12 on: April 02, 2010, 10:03:01 pm »

Of course! I dislike being called 0BretttterB0 as I didn't pick the name (*sigh- brothers)
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« Reply #13 on: April 03, 2010, 10:21:54 am »

Haha, I know what you mean.. I wonder when I'll have time to work on this more... Ugh.
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« Reply #14 on: April 07, 2010, 05:27:56 pm »

Do it now!!!!

I know how you feel though, you want to write more there's just no time, and no patience, and then you gotta take all the pictures, its overwhelming and stories can get left behind...
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