Undead: Serene's story ~The end~

[cool10172]

yay

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[Stacy Poiss]

WOW WOW WOW!!! Very great story!!!

[The_French_Sim]

cool10172, the admins will make a fuss if you bump.

[cool10172]

bump?

[The_French_Sim]

Bump : Post lots and lots of useless stuff instead of just editing one's message. See also : spam.

I'll stop now because I don't want to spam Lolli's thread with my rant.

[Queen_Maddi]

Whoa! That was awsome Lolipop! I hope you're able to write more! you've got heaps of talent!

♥Maddi♥

[ladyrose]

(eeery voice) I will you to write mooooreeeee!!!!!!!!

heh. man that story is so great! its taken me like an hour to read all the way through! Serene and Victor should totally get it on at the end!

-----excuse my filthy mind!

[Lollipop_Girl]

Lol that comment made me laugh ladyrose! Well....bloody kitchens are *so* romantic those two sure love eachother,three bolts of chemistry!

Thanks for reading guys

[Queen_Maddi]

No problem it was worth my presious time lol!

[hotrod50s]

wow is about all i can say and was disappointed when i ran out of story to read lol.well put together plenty of pics and suspense leaving us hanging like that.

i read every last word looking for a catch or a loop or something lol(typos never count)i agree with whoever said write it all out and sell it as a book you have a buyer right here.

i'm sure if you keep this up others will also.

btw how did you get the blood to show?ihaven't seen any except for some skins but oh well nevermind that lol it will spoil the story.big congrats on this story,i really enjoy see the talent displayed on this site,,and makes me really wonder why they call it "just a game"

[Lollipop_Girl]

I found the bloody walls on modthesims2.com, as i dont have any photoshopping software whatsoever!

Wow I think I am on a flattery overload here lol! I have had some really nice comments here and on sims2community! Thanks again!

[ladyrose]

are you going to finish it, or will we all be in suspense?

and if you do finish it you should do a 'few years later' thingy!

[Lollipop_Girl]

Well I am going to finish, dont worry guys! And I have considered some bonus chapters, but I dont know yet.

Its just exams have stressed me out so I have been unable to focus.

[hotrod50s]

wait until your able to focus so it will stay great,although we will have to stay in suspense till then lol.and to think i wasn't going to read this story cause with the title i thought it was a zombie tale .vamp stories i like much better.

btw i forgot to mention i love the way you offed andrew lol

[BaneKane]

This story is awesome! Deserves a A++++++++++++++++++++++! Ehh... maybe an A++++++++++++... But its awesome! And please update!