Undead: Serene's story ~The end~

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~Angel~

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« Reply #75 on: July 24, 2006, 01:18:57 pm »

I have just finished the story, and I gota say....Wow, its really good

I really enjoyed reading it


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meedle

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« Reply #76 on: July 24, 2006, 10:51:18 pm »

that was good, and I don't think the romantic part was awkward, I feel that way while writing too. You just can't go into detail. That was very good, I can't wait to hear what Serene does. She should take the knife and kill herman, or bite him or something lol.


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« Reply #77 on: July 24, 2006, 10:52:03 pm »

wait lol, didn't see the last bit. srry lol.


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« Reply #78 on: July 24, 2006, 11:49:47 pm »

Just finished. Wow. Five Stars. You could like publish this as a short story (without the sim pics obviously). Its a great story, even without the sims. In reflection, I think that Serene made the right choice by turning Victor. Awesome work Lolli! That was very satisfying!


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« Reply #79 on: July 29, 2006, 01:12:53 pm »

Thanks guys

Its so nice to see I get comments here too. Thanks for reading!


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Yume Lupine

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« Reply #80 on: August 05, 2006, 11:09:02 pm »

Just one thing to say. I loved it. It was executed well and that d**k, Herman deserves all that your imagination can throw at him. He's a meanie. Lillipop Girl, I bow to you, for your great vampire tale!


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Elven_Song

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« Reply #81 on: August 11, 2006, 07:10:23 pm »

Wow! I really enjoyed that story! The gore scenes in the kitchen where a bit more than I'm used to, but I got through it! ^^

It was an awesome story line.. I had a hard time moving onto the next chapter. I wanted to read the chapters all over again! =D


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Lollipop_Girl

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« Reply #82 on: August 16, 2006, 04:53:18 pm »

Yume Lupine: I always love reading people's comments on how they hate Herman, its just what I wanted...him to be completley unlikeable! Thanks for reading

Dirtyreek: Those gorey downloads were a nightmare to find, but I was pleased with that set when I finished it. Thanks for the compliment, I'm happy you enjoed the story!

Always great to see new comments! I do miss writing this story, so I love to see people still read it.


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Why beeing a teenage vampire can really suck! Undead: Serene's story

Silent Angel

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« Reply #83 on: November 11, 2006, 11:06:01 pm »

This was a really good story.


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Hellkat7

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« Reply #84 on: November 13, 2006, 09:45:43 am »

Ooooh so where is the ending? What a fantastic story you put so much time and hard work into it. I love Selene Thank you


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Lollipop_Girl

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« Reply #85 on: December 11, 2006, 08:08:22 am »

Heh I hadn't checked here for a while, thanks to x.Sienna.x, Silent Angel and Hellkat7 for your comments!


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Sam the T-man

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« Reply #86 on: December 12, 2006, 11:34:25 am »

That was a great read; I really enjoyed it :thumbup: I love the message at the end too, it's so true.


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Lollipop_Girl

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« Reply #87 on: January 24, 2007, 08:05:18 am »

Thanks for the comments taunyajo and Sadie79.


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Why beeing a teenage vampire can really suck! Undead: Serene's story

~*Jax*~

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« Reply #88 on: January 24, 2007, 02:41:23 pm »

This is great! I'm sorry it's ended too.

Keep up with the great writing! I know I would love to see more from you here.