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Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy this is my story called LOST about young Amilela Love Tear whos a ghost. She had a tragic story to tell so i shall begin......:sleepy5: :sleepy5: :sleepy5:
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Chaper one, the death
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Young Amilela had died of the black death and her grave was at St Sebs Church. Amileas spirt whatched her family sobbing full of gref. Her mother,Janesa with her foral dress,her father,Albert in his smart new suit,her husband Tomas,grefing with his new wife,Mina. She was crying,indeed,but she had a nasty smurk on her face. Tomas was know a welthy widower and she now had all of Amilea's money and welth. TRATOR! thought Amilea as a blood tear dripped down her cheek.
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October 28, 2006, 06:04:36 am »
*waiting for someone too say how good her story is*:sleepy5:
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Young Amilela had died of the black death and her grave was at St Sebs Church. Amileas spirt whatched her family sobbing full of gref. Her mother,Janesa with her foral dress,her father,Albert in his smart new suit,her husband Tomas,grefing with his new wife,Mina. She was crying,indeed,but she had a nasty smurk on her face. Tomas was know a welthy widower and she now had all of Amilea's money and welth. TRATOR! thought Amilea as a blood tear dripped down her cheek.
How could this be happing? Why did she die?Why?
A the dawn rose,Amilea faded away.... NEXT TIME ON LOST THE DEATH PART 2
Amilea finds that know matter how hard you can hate someone,she shall always forgive them.
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October 28, 2006, 01:19:20 pm »
Nice beginning. Pictures would be lovely, as would longer chapters. For easier reading, I would suggest using a program that helps with your spelling. For example, Word Perfect or some program like that. I use those myself, so I don't misspell quite as much. I like the concept, though. I am looking forward to reading more.
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October 29, 2006, 12:36:46 am »
Mandie's right, but it sounds very interesting. Pump it up a bit and it'll be an awesome story. Also, may I suggest that you edit your previous post rather than quoting your own post to add more? Less spammage that way.
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October 30, 2006, 11:41:57 am »
as i was sayin' Ps sorry guys, i don't KNOW HOW to put up pictures!:dontknow:
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Chapter 2 hatred and lies
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Amilea watched Tomas kiss Mina. She felt lonely inside."I hate YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU" Amilea screamed and the wind batterd the air,Mina hugged him tight.
"oh thomas ,darling,I'm soo happy." Mina Smurked.
"god",Amilia thought, Give it A rest!
Good! Tomas was proud.
Amilea turnd away,back into the grave,sobbing.
Tomas grinned at His wife,his mother and father inlaws and the grave. He,and Mina placed two red roses on her grave.
"to the woman i never knew." Mina cried,smileing.
As Mina placed her rose on the grave,it slipped off.
"Oh-" began Mina,but Tomas placed it back quickly.
"just an axedent" he said slowly.
Amilea popped her head outside her grave. She laughed.
"More like I did it!" She laughed agian.:toothy5: (hehe)
To be coutiued................
Sorry to the focks, but i NEED i a hand rest.
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How To: Post Pictures
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How To: Post Pictures
yay! now i can do it!!!!!!! (i think:lol: )
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lol good luck
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in case your trying to spell amelia cause thats what it looks like... its amelia
i would know...
its my name.
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I like this plot but I would like pictures
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Quote from: omggitsameelia;422061
in case your trying to spell amelia cause thats what it looks like... its amelia
i would know...
its my name.
It dude, it the same thing...:devill:
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