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« on: November 22, 2006, 05:43:29 pm »

If any of you have read Alone and A Fathers Sacrifice then you will know this family already. This is story number 3 staring Morgan and Adams daughter Vanessa.


I apologise for the quality of part one, i forgot to turn my settings back up. All other parts should be normal standard.

I love it when the evenings are just giving into night after a hot day. When the last of the summer breeze is just blowing by without a care in the world. Carrying the scent of fresh cut grass and barbeques from earlier in the day.



I love listening to the sound of laughter heard from the surrounding houses as the remaining family and friends stay and enjoy just one last drink. The sound of the crickets hiding and playing their games in the dark garden at the back of my house.




I stood outside after a busy day with my daughter Robin, I loved her so much, she was my life, my reason for living, but I loved to just stand outside alone and take it all in while she was safely tucked up in bed. It was nice to let my body relax after a day of paddling pools and sandcastles.




Smiling to myself I took one last deep breath of fresh air and went back into the house. It was if Bexley knew that I wanted to be alone. He was curled in his basket watching me, waiting for me to finish so that he could get up.




"Hey boy" I said as I bent down and ran my hands through his grey fur. Bexley was our dog, well Siberian husky actually. I had never wanted pets, didn’t really have time for them, but my aunts dog had had pups and Robin had begged and begged, she even enlisted the help of my grandfather to persuaded me into giving in. The pair of them had driven me mad until I finally said yes.




I had to admit though its nice having him around. Sometimes it’s as if he is more than just a family pet, he was more like a fury friend.

I filled his bowl before going back to my studio and he gave me a happy wag of his tail. I swear sometimes he smiles.




I am a painter. Mostly I paint pictures from photographs. Sometimes I paint them exact and other times I like to put my own ideas into them. Like the painting of my mother and father on their wedding day. They never got married, they didn’t live long enough. My mother died three days before her wedding and my father on the actual day, but on my canvas it’s another world.

In my picture they are together, happy, smiling. My mother in her white dress, her long red hair piled neatly on the top of her head and my father in his tuxedo, no hat though, just his blonde hair casually flopping nearly covering one of his bright blue eyes.







I suppose my paintings; my art is just a way of me sharing my childhood hopes and dreams. Hope that somewhere my parents are happy together.


I don’t remember either of them. I was only two when they died. My grandfather brought me up. Don’t get me wrong my childhood was fantastic, but there was always something missing. Some part of me that had a hole in it that could not be filled.





I started at my half finished painting. It was a painting of my grandma. Taken just after my mother was born. Her hair was blonde then. Her face perfect and floorless. Not like now. Now her life showed on her face, the years of worry over my mother and all the things that had gone wrong. Her hair too silvery grey shimmering like the stars on a bright night. But her face in the picture seemed to hold sadness. It was as if my grandfather had captured what she was feeling as well as her image.




The soft beep of my alarm rang out and Bexley’s ears stuck up. It was bed time. I have to have an alarm when I am painting otherwise I get lost in what I am doing. I would paint all night if it wasn’t for that clock and that is not a good idea when I have a bright bubbly six year old to get up to. And Robin does not know the meaning of a lie in.





After closing the house down for the night I slipped on my shorts and t-shirt that I wore for bed. They had been a birthday present from Robin, she knew I was mad on teddy bears, any thing she ever gave me was teddy bear orientated. I must have been a lot more tired than I though, I fell asleep almost as soon as I shut my eyes. Bexley was curled up in another one of his baskets just out side our bedrooms. He always slept there at night, like our protector.




“Mummy.” Said Robin as I tried to decide if the voice was real or if I was still asleep. “Mummy wake up.” Whispered Robin again gently rocking my shoulder this time.
“What is it baby?” I said my voice still heavy with sleep.
“It’s Bex, Mummy he is whining. I think he needs to go out.”




I let my arm drop from her shoulder and gave a sigh, he chose his moments. “Alright.” I said. “You get into bed and I’ll go sort him out.”
“Please don’t tell him off Mummy.” She said.
“I won’t.” she always said that if Bexley had done something, I don’t know where she got the idea from, I very rarely shouted at him or her.




I left Robin in my room curling her self up in my bed. Looks like I will have company for the rest of the night.

Bexley was by the back door of the house when I found him, his snout was raised and teeth barred. “Bexley?” I called gently. “Bexley what’s the matter?”




He seemed to not hear me; either that or he was ignoring me. I crept up to him, not wanting to make him jump and have him turn those teeth on me. He was a gentle thing, had never hurt anyone, but they say that it’s in every dog and with Bexley basically being a wolf, I bet it was in him more.




A shadow danced across the glass of the door, almost forcing my heart to smash out of my chest. Bexley saw it too and his snarling seemed to escalate.

I grabbed my fire extinguisher; it was the hardest weapon I could find. Grabbing my keys off the hook I nervously tip toed over to the door. I don’t know why I was tip toeing, Bexley was making enough racket as it was. The back garden was covered in darkness when I opened the door.
“Hello?” I called out into the night. “Is someone there?”




Bexley’s growling went down to a whimper and I stared at him watching as he seemed to shrink into himself as he backed away from the door. I couldn’t see what ever he could see. I flicked on the kitchen light, but there was still nothing. Just Robins swing gently moving too and fro in the night breeze. There were no shadows, no one hiding. “Stay there Bex.” I said as I ventured out. “Hello?” I called again.




The shed stood in shadows at the bottom of the garden. I should have brought a torch, but too late now no going back. I walked slowly up to it, never taking my eyes of the small dark window. The shed was unlocked when I reached the door. Maybe I had forgotten to lock it. I opened the door and flicked on the light. Nothing there, just my lawn mower, and various other gardening tools. I closed the door again and this time locked it behind me.




I walked the parameter of the house, there was no one there. I don’t know what had set Bexley off, all I could see that possibly answered what I saw were some of Robin’s clothes still hanging on the washing line.




My heart rate seemed to slow down as I reached my back door again. The back door was shut when I reached the back of the house. Weird, I was sure I left it open when I went out.




Robin!

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« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2006, 08:50:53 pm »

I read this on that website fliddy!
Wooop I need more!
(P.S. Were is Keller hmmm?)
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« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2006, 02:57:59 am »

Yay! Flid, thanks so much for uploading another story like this! I adore Morgan and Adam's whole story and a continuation is the next best thing. ^^ Awesome first part. Too bad those darn settings were messed up. I know how it feels, I've done it countless times when I've had to take my contest pictures. ><
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« Reply #3 on: November 23, 2006, 03:34:08 pm »

Wow, I love Vanessa and read Morgan and Adams story from A Fathers Sacrifce, a touching "tribute" - this sequel, I mean. Anyway, now that she's grown up with Robin, it'll be great to see the DNA carrying on (Vanessa already looks like Morgan)
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« Reply #4 on: November 23, 2006, 05:47:06 pm »

I raced up the steps to the house and through to my bedroom. Robin was laid in my bed already half asleep. “Hi Mummy.”




I leant against the door frame, relief flowing over me. “Hi baby.”
“Is Bexley ok?”
“Yeah, just barking at nothing. Personally I think he just wanted some attention.” I said lying. Truth was I had no idea what he was barking at, even reasoning with my self that he had seen the shadows of the clothes in the wind didn’t help. And it didn’t answer how the door closed by it self. The floor under the kitchen is slightly un even and the door always catches, there was no way the wind could have done it. Maybe Bexley knocked the door shut?




I did a once over of the house before going back to bed, checking any possible hiding places. All the windows and doors were locked. Bexley obviously had a case of the heebie jeebies.

I let Bexley sleep in my room. Robin was already in my bed, so he may as well be in there with us too and personally I liked having him there.
“Get some sleep now.” I said to Robin as I lent over and placed a kiss on her forehead.




It didn’t feel like I had been asleep long when the phone rang on my bed side table. Blindly I reached out and grabbed it.
“Hello?”
“Vanessa?” said the voice on the end. “Vanessa its me.”
“Macey?” Macey was my best friend. She lived in the flat above my gallery. “Macey is everything ok?”
“Oh Vanessa I’m sorry.” She started crying. “I went out to that new club and when I came home…well.”
I heard her take a deep breath; I could hear that she was crying.
“Macey what is it?”
“It’s the gallery. Someone…someone has broken in.”

damn.




I crept out of bed not wanting to disturb Robin who was sprawled and snoring across the bed.
“Just a second.” I whispered into the phone.”

“Ok I’m here. Someone broke in? Is any thing taken?”
“No, but…”
“But?”
“Oh Vanessa I’m so sorry, I locked up, I set the alarm, I shouldn’t have gone out.”
“Macey stop it. I’ll be right there, you call the police.”
“I did, they are on their way.”
“Good, go to your flat till they get there.”

With that I hung up and rang my grandfather to ask if he could come and watch Robin.




The police were already at my gallery when I arrived. Three police cars in total. I could see Macy through the glass as I walked over the bridge to the front door. The water underneath gently lapped, normally it was calming, but after the night I had already had it was far from it.




Macey ran over to me and threw her arms around my neck as soon as she saw me.

“Vanessa, I am truly sorry.”
“It’s not your fault.”
“No, the painting.”
“What do you mean?” I asked.
“The one of your grandfather? They destroyed it, cut his face out.”




I didn’t know what to say to that, who would break into a gallery and just wreck a painting.

“Not just that one though.” Tears were forming in her already red eyes. “They destroyed the one of you mother too and your grandmother.”

“Miss King?” a voice called out from behind us. I turned to see one of the officers; the others appeared to be just looking around. I had no idea what police did in this kind of thing, but they didn’t seem to be doing much.



“Yes. I’m Miss King. Vanessa.”
“I’m PC Thomas.” He said in a police sort of way, they seemed to have one voice. No matter what officer you spoke to their tone was always the same as if you had done something and they were looking right into you and reading more than what you were actually saying.




“We need you too look round and tell us if anything is missing, but please don’t touch anything. Miss Holden here has already said that nothing has been taken, but we need you to confirm that to us.”
I just nodded. I had no idea what to say. I didn’t even know what to think. It was like I was dreaming and I was going to wake up any moment. It was so much that they had destroyed my work, after all only copies were on view in my gallery. Especially the ones that meant more than just art to me, but it was the fact of who they had chosen to destroy.

I followed the officer to the upper level. There was an officer with his back to us taking notes, well I assume he was taking notes his clipboard was in his hand and his pen seemed to be going ten to the dozen.


 

“Kel?” said the officer that had accompanied me upstairs “I have Miss King.”
“Vanessa.” I corrected.
The officer smiled at me. “I have Vanessa the owner here for you.”




The other officer, Kel turned. My stomach nearly fell through the floor. Oh god.
“Hi Vanessa.”
“Hi Keller.”
I could not believe it was him. I knew he wanted to go into the police force, but I never imagined he was back in town. The last time I had seen Keller Graves was as I left uni, he was heading for the bright lights of London, or the better crime of the capital he used to say.
“Long time.” I said mater of factly.

“I’ll be downstairs Kel.” Said the other officer.
“Sure no probs. Josh.”




“So how have you been?” he asked as Josh vanished down the stairs.
“Fine.”
“You look good, Nessa.”
“Please don’t Kel. It’s been a long time.”

His blue eyes looked me up and down like he was taking me in. Those blue eyes that I had fallen for one lonely night at uni, but that was in the past been and gone and I couldn’t, wouldn’t let myself go back there. It wouldn’t be fair.




“I’m sorry Nessa, I was just being friendly, that’s what you do isn’t it when you see someone you haven’t seen for years?”
“Sorry.”
“Still guarded I see.” He said with the hint of a smile going across his face.

He was still just as good looking as I remembered, better actually. Men always seem to look better with age and I guess that was what had happened to Keller. His hair was thick black. It still stuck up, in uni he used to spike it up like the pines on a hedgehog, but now it just seemed to be reaching out in every direction.




“How’s Mark?” he said his firmly defined jaw setting in place as he said the name. He looked tired, his face held a day’s growth of hair on his chin, but I suited him

“I have no idea. I haven’t seen him since…”

His face seemed to look angry at my reply, I had expected him to happy to be honest, but then this was Keller I was looking at not Mark. Mark would have done the happy that it had not worked out look. I should have realised Keller was too sweet for that.

“I’m sorry Nessa. I assumed after I left that you and Mark would have worked it out. I’m sorry I ruined it for you two.”

“It wasn’t your fault.”

“It wasn’t? And how do you figure that out?”

“I slept with you, I was the one that came onto you.”

“I could have said no. I could have pushed you away.”

“Could you?”

His expression relaxed, the creases in his forehead softening. “No.”






“Shall we get on with this?” I said.

Keller walked with me side by side through the two floors of my gallery. My paintings hung on the wall looking untouched. A large empty gap stuck out. The white tiles walls bare except for the three hooks. On the floor was a mass of wood and paper.




I knelt down and picked up what was left of my paintings. My grandfathers picture was completely destroyed. They had cut out his face only, leaving his shoulders, neck and hair in the frame. His face was in pieces next to it, shredded like someone had torn it up into as many pieces they could manage.

“Who would do this?” I asked looking at Keller for the answers. He stood next to me and took the damaged picture out of my hands.




“This is what we are going to find out.” He said. “I remember you painting this. I remember whenever I went into your room your grandfathers face would watch me from your easel.”

I ran my fingers along the rough texture of the painting. My grandfathers hair bubbled out under my skin from where my brush had added stroke after stroke. On the walls in my gallery I had some originals and some copies. This one however was just a copy, but I reached over and pilled the one of my mother out from under the debris. This one was an original.

I had cried sometimes when I painted it. Her oval face appearing on my canvas was like having her appear in front of me. Who ever had done this had taken something sharp, a knife probably, and slashed it many times across my mothers face making it look like a lattice. The strands in my mothers long red hair torn.




Keller reached over and took my hand in his. His skin was soft and warm, not what I would have expected from a police officer or any man in general for that matter. His hand went round mine, squeezing it lightly. “We’ll find them. I promise.”

My eyes searched his and I wanted to believe him, but I knew he was just saying that, Not as an officer of the law, but as a friend.

Looking at him I felt the prickly feeling build up behind my eyes, pain pulling at the skin on my face. My eyes filled up and I closed my eyes trying to blink away the tears before they fell. I could feel my eye lashes were wet when I looked back at Keller.

“You shouldn’t promise something that you can’t do.”

“No, but I promise that I will do everything I can to find them”

“Why these three paintings? And why this one of my mother? Of all the pictures they could have chosen, they chose these ones.”





“It could be someone that you know, or that knows you. Do you have any idea who would do something like this? Is there any one that has a grudge against you?”

“No one. Except maybe Jekinsons down the road. I used to work for that gallery before I got my own, but then...”

“I’ll send someone to talk to them.”

“I don’t know Keller. This...” I said pointing at the mess. “This just seems petty. I don’t think Jenkinson would go so low.”

“Its worth checking them out though. They are the competition after all.”

“I guess.”

My Private gallery phone started to ring.
 



“Just a second.” I said to Keller as I walked over to it to answer.

The display said withheld, I clicked answer on my phone and put it to my ear. The voice on the other end didn’t even give me chance to respond.

“Listen to me very carefully.” Said the deep male voice. “I am at your home. In your house. I can see your daughter in front of me. If you say a word to that pretty boy in front of you I will kill her do you understand?”




“Yes.”

“Good, now walk away from him and listen very carefully.”

“Ok”

“I’ll cut right to it. You have 72 hours to get me one million. I will call with details when you are alone. If you fail I will take your little girl and send her back to you in one million pieces.”

“I don’t have that.” I said.




The voice down the other end laughed at me. “Your daughter has very pretty blonde hair doesn’t she? And the pink pj's really suits her dont they?”

“If you….”

“I said do not say a word. If that officer gets word of what I am saying she will die. The game will be over.  Now do you understand?”

“Yes.”

“One million.”

“How?”

“You’ll find a way.”

“But…”

“One million Vanessa. You have 72 hours.” With that the phone went dead. I kept it to my ear; I had no idea what to say. I was too stunned to move. There was someone in my home with my little girl; they were there with my grandfather. What had they done to him? How could they get in without Bexley barking and giving them away? How could I turn to Keller and not show him the horror on my face, how could I not give anything away?

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« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2006, 08:37:52 pm »

oooh.. suspense builds! I'm hooked already. Cheesy Keep it coming Flid!
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« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2006, 11:42:44 pm »

you have no idea how happy i am that this is up. only two updates so far and you already have me on the edge of my seat begging for more! AGGHH! great job so far!
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« Reply #7 on: November 24, 2006, 09:02:38 am »

Fantastic! You have great attention to detail and your writing style is exquisite!
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« Reply #8 on: November 24, 2006, 11:43:50 am »

This is really good flid
You havnt lost it!!
(P.S. Keller is tottally the coolest character lol)
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« Reply #9 on: November 24, 2006, 12:58:08 pm »

he he glad you like it I wrote this in 22 days 50,000 words lol as part of a writing completition Smiley
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« Reply #10 on: November 24, 2006, 02:23:43 pm »

Aaahh! Oh my gosh, this is so good already!
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« Reply #11 on: November 24, 2006, 06:51:33 pm »

Hey flid in the first update when she is in that room and she is surrounded by pics, those two guys , they wouldnt happen to be Keller and Mark would they

hmmmm?
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« Reply #12 on: November 24, 2006, 06:57:03 pm »

well spotted and yes thats them in uni Smiley also if you look at the pics of the gallery you can see various pics of Morgan and Adam Smiley
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« Reply #13 on: November 24, 2006, 07:20:44 pm »

Yep I noticed that
HaHa cant get anything past me flid
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« Reply #14 on: November 24, 2006, 08:15:39 pm »

Quote from: oddball011;438586
Yep I noticed that
HaHa cant get anything past me flid


you wanna bet???


Say that agin when you have read the end of this
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