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Author Topic: Carna| [Part One]  (Read 3977 times)
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llamapiccolo
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« on: December 12, 2006, 11:04:41 pm »

Newest series I've written:

Carna|

Main Entry: car·nal
Pronunciation: 'kär-n&l
(1) Relating to physical appetites.
(2) Worldly or earthly; temporal.
(3) Of or relating to the body or flesh.



[Part One]

Excerpt:
A lone wolf drew himself inside from the storm, his thawing paws sinking into the lush sapphire carpet. The wolf shook his generous coat, noticeable strands of gold and caramel glinting in the firelight. He bent his head, the narrow golden eyes covered by slightly furred lids.
"Welcome home, monsieur."

Pale, heavily lashed lids lifted, revealing two inky black pupils rimmed with gold. A man unfurled his equally pale nude body to stand confidently on two legs. He ran an elegant hand through his shoulder length brown hair, the silky strands reflecting an array of colors akin to a sunrise.
Seemingly unaware of his nudity, the man strode through the room to a nearby loveseat, stretching his long limbs on the plush support.

"Anything I can bring for you, monsieur?"
A sensual mouth stretched into a wolfish grin. "A glass of red wine please, Rupert. As of tonight, I believe a celebration is in order."
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starlucid
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« Reply #1 on: December 13, 2006, 09:21:27 am »

hmm very suspenseful!  Looking forward to part two!
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« Reply #2 on: December 20, 2006, 05:22:18 pm »

Very interesting intro, can wait for more! I love the story banner too Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: December 20, 2006, 06:15:09 pm »

Sounding good Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: December 23, 2006, 01:40:30 pm »

I love the story so far!
Keep up the good work!
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« Reply #5 on: December 26, 2006, 01:11:02 pm »

Hmm,I think it will be interesting
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« Reply #6 on: January 04, 2007, 06:29:38 pm »

suspensfull
I liked it
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