Insimenator.org
March 29, 2024, 08:14:10 am *
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
News:
 
  Home   Forum   Help Search Calendar Login Register  
Pages: 1 [2] 3
  Print  
Author Topic: Beguiled updated chapter five  (Read 13211 times)
0 Members and 1 Chinese Bot are viewing this topic.
starlucid
Member

Posts: 442


View Profile
« Reply #15 on: January 20, 2007, 02:42:41 pm »

I going to update this hopefully some time today.  There doesn't seem to be much interest in the story unfortunately though maybe I can change that with a good update.
Logged

If you like ghost stories read my new Sim story..
Solitario's Don't Die..
http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=30329
Elven_Song
Member

Gender: Female
Posts: 735


=3


View Profile
« Reply #16 on: January 22, 2007, 02:15:02 am »

Aww.. I didn't even notice! Well, I love this story! And I'm sure there's plenty of people reading who just haven't commented. A lot of people tend to do that.
Logged
starlucid
Member

Posts: 442


View Profile
« Reply #17 on: January 22, 2007, 09:44:43 pm »

going to update this finally tommorow we redoing our mortgage and welll the paperwork ugh....cringes...
Logged

If you like ghost stories read my new Sim story..
Solitario's Don't Die..
http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=30329
babyblueheart
Member

Posts: 891


View Profile
« Reply #18 on: January 23, 2007, 12:47:35 pm »

OOOH!! Its sounding awesome... I love how you are so good at making the suspense build! Good luck redoing your mortgage! Smiley
Logged

"out of all the lies you've told, i love you was my favorite."
"And he's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar/the only one who's got enough of me to break my heart"

Rest in Peace, Caleb Joshua 1/10/04-4/6/08
Join "America's Prom Queen" on NOW
starlucid
Member

Posts: 442


View Profile
« Reply #19 on: January 23, 2007, 10:31:28 pm »

thanks baby the appraisar came and went today so i can get back to my sim addiction and hopefully update this tomorow.
Logged

If you like ghost stories read my new Sim story..
Solitario's Don't Die..
http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=30329
Elven_Song
Member

Gender: Female
Posts: 735


=3


View Profile
« Reply #20 on: January 24, 2007, 12:07:29 am »

That's great to hear Star. Mortgage is a pain in the butt, and thankfully I don;t have to deal with it (yet). But the day will come.. -cringes in fear-

lol. Can't wait for the next part! ^^
Logged
starlucid
Member

Posts: 442


View Profile
« Reply #21 on: January 26, 2007, 02:19:47 am »

ok I have done a small update to the story I'm going to try to keep it all together on the first page.  As soon as the three contests are done I will update more and longer chapters.
Logged

If you like ghost stories read my new Sim story..
Solitario's Don't Die..
http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=30329
summer_wine
Member

Posts: 512



View Profile
« Reply #22 on: January 26, 2007, 12:09:19 pm »

great job! Smiley well written and awesome pics!
Logged


The Price of Redemption ~My Sim Story! Check it out!
StellaBaby
Member

Posts: 1502


View Profile
« Reply #23 on: January 26, 2007, 12:16:47 pm »

more Cheesy
I <3 it!
Logged

::smilieiforgetwhi::lol ::smilieiforgetwhi::
vita4all
Member

Posts: 344


View Profile WWW
« Reply #24 on: February 10, 2007, 08:17:30 pm »

Hi Starlucid,

I took a break from my own writing and just finished your Chapter 4.  I get the impression that the scene took place in the 1940s, like the movie you mentioned.  Is this right?  It would explain why Marta didn't call 911.  It didn't exist back then.   Incredible as it sounds, "decent" women didn't get raped, and were ostracized if they did.  I'm wondering if your heroine will get pregnant from this?  The possibilities are endless.... your time to write it is another matter (lol).  
Logged

For a few nice downloads, visit our site, http://gangstersims.com.
starlucid
Member

Posts: 442


View Profile
« Reply #25 on: February 10, 2007, 09:16:06 pm »

Hi Vita!
Thanks for reading my little story!
I just closed this morning on our refinancing so maybe....I can get some very very wanted expansion packs at least nightlife I want vampires so bad!  I will get an update on this soon.
On Marta calling 911 a lot of women do not report rapes on men they know.
Logged

If you like ghost stories read my new Sim story..
Solitario's Don't Die..
http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=30329
babyblueheart
Member

Posts: 891


View Profile
« Reply #26 on: February 11, 2007, 12:55:20 am »

Can't wait for next update! Smiley
Logged

"out of all the lies you've told, i love you was my favorite."
"And he's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar/the only one who's got enough of me to break my heart"

Rest in Peace, Caleb Joshua 1/10/04-4/6/08
Join "America's Prom Queen" on NOW
starlucid
Member

Posts: 442


View Profile
« Reply #27 on: February 11, 2007, 01:32:38 am »

will do a update tommorow Thanks for encouragement it really does help keep our momentum!
Logged

If you like ghost stories read my new Sim story..
Solitario's Don't Die..
http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=30329
babyblueheart
Member

Posts: 891


View Profile
« Reply #28 on: February 11, 2007, 01:58:22 am »

Awesome!!:)
Logged

"out of all the lies you've told, i love you was my favorite."
"And he's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar/the only one who's got enough of me to break my heart"

Rest in Peace, Caleb Joshua 1/10/04-4/6/08
Join "America's Prom Queen" on NOW
starlucid
Member

Posts: 442


View Profile
« Reply #29 on: February 12, 2007, 06:27:10 pm »

Thanks diesel!  I'm going to try to do longer updates
Logged

If you like ghost stories read my new Sim story..
Solitario's Don't Die..
http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=30329
Pages: 1 [2] 3
  Print  
 
Jump to:  


Powered by MySQL Powered by PHP Powered by SMF 1.1.21 | SMF © 2015, Simple Machines Valid XHTML 1.0! Valid CSS!
Page created in 0.042 seconds with 31 queries.
SimplePortal 2.1.1