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Author Topic: Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom  (Read 65644 times)
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« Reply #30 on: February 13, 2007, 05:08:14 am »

AHH!!!! Cliffhanger!!!! More!! More!!!! Please? Very very good.
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« Reply #31 on: February 14, 2007, 05:21:26 pm »

Ahh yes, cliffhangers are the spice of life.  You wanted more?  You got it!
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« Reply #32 on: February 14, 2007, 11:40:53 pm »

ooh I like his new girlfriend!  Finally a normal woman?
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« Reply #33 on: February 16, 2007, 06:35:14 am »

Just found this, and I'm liking it. I'll be keeping up with this story Smiley
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« Reply #34 on: February 16, 2007, 11:11:35 am »

Wonderful update again Vita!
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« Reply #35 on: February 17, 2007, 03:29:46 pm »

Many thanks to all who took a moment to leave me a comment in the past few days.

Starlucid: In response to your question, "finally a normal woman?", well, yes - Raven, also known as Rae-Rae, is a 9 to 5 professional woman with a degree, BUT, Raven, has dropped into Ronnie's life with a twist:

1. She's the best female friend of Ronnie's one and only long-term, secret gay lover, Chan.
2. She's the abortion counselor for Ronnie's ex-girlfriend, Cheena.  Ronnie regrets Cheena having the abortion.
3. She the sole witness to a murder by Raheem's son, Jamal, who is locked up in juvie. Ronnie works for Raheem, as you know.

None of the parties involved - Ronnie, Chan, Raheem, Cheena, or Jamal, knows of their connection through Raven (also known as Rae-Rae to Ronnie).

Worse, Raven is clueless that she's connected to all these parties.  Plus- Raheem has placed a hit on her. I smell a head-on collision.

Diesel: Not all is as it appears regarding the alleged molestation, as you'll see soon.  But yes, Raheem is a ruthless mo-fo. What he did to his daughter is even worse.

Mwahahaha!
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« Reply #36 on: February 17, 2007, 03:59:38 pm »

Wow, that's so awesome how they're all linked together and don't know it! ^^
Great work vita! I loved that last chapter!
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« Reply #37 on: February 19, 2007, 09:04:05 pm »

Man, this story is dark!  Sinister!  It's a regular 'hood of horrors, just like where I chill.  Your gangstas look hard too, like in real life, especially Crazy 8.  I like the way everyone is connected, and how hard men think instead of only the usual woman's point of view. I can relate to that big time, especially the nagging.  I might have cut her lose too. Or why guys in the 'hood start dealing in the first place. Or why we chill with our dangerous homeboys.  I'd like to see you do a little more on Junior's sister, though.  Can't wait to see what happens next.
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« Reply #38 on: February 20, 2007, 07:56:22 pm »

Wow! Great update vita! I still can't belive no one's figured out how "Rae-Rae" is  connected to all this. It's kind of funny to see Ronnie getting caught up in it too, and he still doesn't know it. I guess he should have gotten to know her a bit more! lol. Please update soon!
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« Reply #39 on: February 20, 2007, 11:08:04 pm »

Vita, with every update you drag me in even deeper.
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« Reply #40 on: February 24, 2007, 02:08:38 pm »

Okay guys, you asked for it, and I've updated!  Getting the right photos takes longer than writing, so here's a few chapters for now, more to come very soon.  Wear your seatbelts, 'cause the crew's ready to ride hard.
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« Reply #41 on: February 26, 2007, 09:51:05 pm »

Wow! That last chapter was amazing! You are an awesome writer Vita, Some of the people who've written books could take lessons from you! ^^ Absolutely incredible! Please, keep them coming. It's even more interesting now that Ronnie and Raven have figured out their connections.
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« Reply #42 on: March 03, 2007, 01:20:28 pm »

Thanks for the compliments, PMs and emails everyone!

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« Reply #43 on: March 04, 2007, 01:41:18 am »

Wow. Amazing chapters vita! I love them! Honestly, I just don't know what to say but that they were probably the best few you've written so far. Keep it up! We all love this!
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« Reply #44 on: March 04, 2007, 10:41:57 pm »

*shiver* Vita... you amaze me with each and every episode.
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