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-Little-CJ-
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« on: March 18, 2007, 12:46:23 pm »

Hi people, I've been seeing some really nice stories and I desided to make my own

Introduction:

This story is about a girl called Lauren, her husband died when her daughter was a kid and after her husband died she descovered she was pregnant...
Then she meets a nice guy when her daughter is a teen...


Chapter 1, The talk.

It's breakfast time and everyone is sitting down to drink there strawberry milkshakes,



Laurens daughter, Taylor says something very unusual,
"Mum, why have you only had one boyfriend since dad?"
"OI! Taylor! Stop bugging mum!" Replied her little brother Jason.
"Shut up, brat!"
"MUM! She called me a brat!"
"Settle down you two, Jason she was only asking a question and it's about time I answered it. The reason I have only had one boyfriend since your dad, is because I loved your daddy very much and my other boy friend, left me with a broken heart."
"Thanks for answering my question mum."
"Thats ok."
Everyone got down from the table and Lauren and Jason sat down to talk,



Lauren starts a conversation,
"Jason,"
"Yes mum."
"I think you shouldn't butt in when your sister asks me a question, she didn't do anything wrong."
"I know but, I couldn't help it, it just came out."
"It's because your like your dad, always over protective."
"I know. Can I ask you something mum?"
"Whats that darling?"
"Well you know when Taylor brought up that thing about the boyfriends and stuff like that."
"Yes darling."
"I think she means that you should get out and find someone that you like."
"She probably did darling, What do you think about that?"
"I think it would be nice."
"Ok, off to bed now. Goodnight, Taylor will come and tuck you in."
"Night, mum."


After a while...

"MUM! Come here! Please!"
"Coming Taylor."
"What is it...?"
"Jason said your under pressure, I need to talk to you, in my room."
"ok."

Taylor and Lauren walk into Taylors room.

"Mum, Jason's been saying your thinking about getting a boyfriend?"
"I don't know."
"You need to relax, let me give you a backrub."
"Ok, sounds good."


"Right, im going to tell you this straight."
"Ok Taylor."
"Your not getting any younger and you need somebody to help you cope. You can't have a job because of us. I want you to walk out of this door right now, and have a good night out! Don't worry about Jason i'll look after him."
"Ok, just for you."

End of chapter 1,
Hope you liked it.

I'm only online on weekends sorry Cry
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« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2007, 04:31:17 pm »

Good start... I like it!! Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2007, 12:59:21 am »

cute! This looks like it will take an interesting turn. ^^
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« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2007, 11:54:27 am »

Thank you people,
The next chapter will be on the weekend because my sims 2 is at my dads,
I promise an update on friday x
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« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2007, 11:24:07 am »

Sorry it's a day late, had school worl lol. anyway, Here's part two,
Kiomi.

So, Lauren walked throught the door and got into the car.

She silently said to herself:
"It's been a long time since I went out on my own, All I have to remember is 1. Come home as late as posible, so the kids don't know I stayed in the car and 2. Try and get out of the car if possible, It's freezing, I have a convertible car and I am very cold."
(Car ignition starts.)
Lauren waves to her kids and silently wispers in the cold winter air:
"If it wasn't for Taylor, I would never have got my feet on the ground again, my baby."


At the community lot Lauren heard a guy named Kiomi say:
"Nice car, how did you afford it?"
"I used the money from my late-husband." Replied Lauren.
"I am so sorry... I hope you don't mind if I ask you your name?"
"No.. My name is Lauren, what is yours?"
"Kiomi, I live on baker street."
"Cool, I live in Riverbottom Dream Close."
"Erm.. I did come over to ask you if you wanted to erm..."
"To what?"
"Go on the karioke together.."
"That would be wonderful."

They sang a song called my love, by Adreain Dream, The founder of Riverbottom Dreams.
They became best friends and then Kiomi said something that, a girl could not risist...
"Hey, Lauren I just wondered if you wanted to dance?"
"Yeah, sure it's my night out, what the heck!"
"Hang on Kiomi I have an even better Idea, Why don't you come round to mine, we have a Hot Chocolate machine!"
"Ok, sounds fun."

Lauren drove home and by the time they got home the kids where at school, To Lauren's supprise Taylor cleaned the house for her.
"You have a very nice house Lauren."
"Why thank you, what's your house like."
"Well it's a one bedroom apartment, it's pretty squashed in, not like your house."
"Kiomi, would you like that dance we were talking about?"
"Yeah."

To Kiomi's supprise, Lauren put her head on his shoulders right away. For once in Lauren's life she felt, soemthing that couldn't be described on paper or computer. Now she knew what her daughter really ment.

After the dance, Kiomi was in his own fantasy world, he felt loved again, and like the whole world hadn't stopped after all.

Then Lauren reached out and gave him a kiss

He said "The first time I set eyes on you, I knew you were the one...

Thats Part two,
There will be another one Tommorow or Next Friday.
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« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2007, 12:16:03 pm »

Good job...I look forward to seeing the next chapter! Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: March 24, 2007, 02:30:41 pm »

I'm bored so I am going to do the next chapter in a minuite lol.
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« Reply #7 on: March 24, 2007, 02:46:51 pm »

Well I am bored so, I may as well do it now, I have all the pictures:

Part 3
The Change.

When Taylor came home, she saw her mum kissing Kiomi, but she felt like she knew Kiomi from somewhere, but she didn't count on it, after all her mum is happy. Taylor didn't want to spoil that, when her little brother Jason came home, she went to bed and quietly spoke to herself,

"I know mum is happy but I am sure I have seen him before, where the hell have I seen him from?"
Just then her little brother came in.
"TAYLOR'S TALKING TO HERSELF, SHE'S A SADDO!"
"GET OUT OF MY ROOM YOU LITTLE A******E!
"MUM TAYLOR SWORE AT ME!"
But there mum wasn't listening instead she was hugging Kiomi.

She was talking to him in a sweet manner.
"Kiomi, you are the best thing that has happened to me, since.... Johney, I hope this lasts and I don't know if you can feel it, but I feel our love burning inside of me."
"I do too Lauren, how about we go and talk to Taylor, she is in the hot tub."
"Ok"

"Hi Taylor." Taylor didn't reply, Lauren and Kiomi started cuddling...
"Mum! Knock it off will ya, your like an animal!"
Taylor storms inside the house.
"Don't worry Kiomi, she will come round."
"I know..." Replied Kiomi in a sly and suspicious voice.
They all got out of the hot tub and Kiomi said to Lauren:
"There is something I need to give you..."

Kiomi swings over and gives her the biggest kiss she ever had.
"Good bye, Lauren."
"Good bye, Kiomi, please come tommorow."
"I will see if I can." Said Kiomi in a distant voice.
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« Reply #8 on: March 24, 2007, 03:13:32 pm »

Very interesting....can't wait to see what happens next.
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« Reply #9 on: March 24, 2007, 06:13:15 pm »

thank you for reading babyblueheart.
My next 2 chapters will be supprising, but the last chapter will be where Kiomi confesses to doing something....
No more clues!
lol
xx
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« Reply #10 on: March 25, 2007, 12:14:55 am »

You're welcome! Haha....guess I'll just have to wait.... Smiley. This is a very interesting story, I love it! Cheesy
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« Reply #11 on: March 26, 2007, 03:59:39 pm »

Excuse The Loss Of Pictures I Didn't Get To Take Anymore On The Weekend, Stupid Computer Crashed :@

Part 4
Marriage and a new life.


After a few weeks Kiomi and Lauren were really close, She started asking him round more often, and the more he came over, the more Taylor got suspicious.

She loved her mum, but she knew there was something strange about him, he never talked about his job or friends. He just flirted with Lauren and Kissed her a lot.

They all sat down to the table and Kiomi proposed to her, when they were at the table, Jason was so shocked he almost had a panic attack. Taylor and Jason are not stupid, they both now knew what it was about him, they shook their heads at their mum, but she was too busy staring at the dazzling ring, she said yes.


So after all the excitement Lauren went for a bath, she decided that they were going to get married tomorrow, when she went to the bedroom she found both of her kids in her bed

There was a note on the side table it read:
It's unlucky for engaged couples to see each other before the wedding,
Kiomi will sleep in Jason's room and you will sleep in Taylors room,
We love you mummy,
Jason. Taylor.

After a great nights sleep.
Lauren and Kiomi woke up refreshed,
They heard rattling down in the kitchen, so Lauren went to check it out.

When Lauren got down, she found that her daughter had cooked pancakes for breakfast, and tided up the house.

At 12:00pm everyone was ready and the wedding was carried out,

They made there vows and went to there new house.



The first thing Lauren said when they got to the new house was, wow, it's like a mansion.
Thank you.
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« Reply #12 on: March 27, 2007, 06:46:11 pm »

Great update!! Can't wait for the next!! Smiley
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« Reply #13 on: March 31, 2007, 12:07:39 pm »

Part: 5
The beginning of an end.

When Lauren had gone to work, Kiomi laid the table and cooked the dinner.
The kids weren't eating

'Come on, kids eat up!'
'We know your game Kiomi, give it up.' They repeated in sequence to each other.
'What are you on about?'
'You, we know what your game is and we are not going to let you spoil our mums life. Not after everything she has been through.'
'Kids, I am the best thing that has happened to her, you two little stirrers weren't even assposed to happen.'
'WHAT!'
'Your mother told me, Johney wasn't your father, Taylor, you were from the other relationship, that your mum had before, Johney.'
'NO!'
'Oh yes.'
'Don't talk to my sister like that you, ginger freak!'
'Shut your fat mouths and get on with your dinner.'

Taylor ran out the room, her eyes streaming.
She could hear Kiomi laughing.
She ran to her room, and did something she loves.
She played on her drum and made up a song.

'As, I stand alone,
along theese washboard lines,
I see my shaddow,
The one that you banished and cast away.
I knew someone would fre....
what the hell was that!'
Taylors song was interupted by a banging sound coming from the attic,
'Jason, is that you, you know Kiomi told you not to go in there!'
Taylor walked up to the attic floor and was shocked at what she found.

One boy and one girl playing together happily.
They looked so like Kiomi.
Taylor twigged!
'So this is what he is hiding.'
The kids got up.
'Hi, My name is Selma Tellerman and this is my Brother, Kyle Tellerman, who are you?'
'My name is Taylor, what are you doing here?'
'Were waiting for daddy to bring us up some dinner.'
'Who's your daddy?'
'Kiomi.'
She had heared it all,
She had the proof.
It was all starting to come together,
But why didn't he tell mum, she wondered.
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« Reply #14 on: March 31, 2007, 03:44:17 pm »

Part 6,

Lauren was acting a bit strange the next morning, did she know or didn't she. Taylor wondered.
Lauren was throwing up, eating more and taking more baths. She didn't speak to Taylor at all that day. Or anyone else in fact.
The next morning.

Kiomi gently woke his wife up.
'Good morning, My beautiful.' He said softly.
'Good morning Kiomi, can I have just 5 minuites, please.'
'No, I want to give you a kiss, and then you can go back to sleep.'
'Alright.'
Lauren made an effort and got out of bed.

'Good morning, Mrs. McKensie.'
'Good morning, Mr McKensie.'
'Oh my god Kiomi, I have just remembered it's Jason's birthday.'
'That's what I woke you up for, he is having his birthday party now.'
'Oh My Lord, why didn't you tell me?'
'Don't know, forgot.'
Lauren dashed out of her room,
She saw, Taylor and Jason, in the room, where the party was.

She had just got there when,
Jason was about to turn into a teen.

Then....
She herself felt like it was her birthday.

She popped like a great balloon,
She was pregant, and knew it.
When Kiomi got home he was quite shocked.
'You were pregnant and didn't tell me?'
'I didn't know.'

'Don't worry Lauren, everything will be perfect now.' With that sinister look on his face.
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