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Author Topic: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!)  (Read 8772 times)
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« on: May 12, 2007, 09:52:44 pm »

This is the second part of Naive Ambitions.  I wrote it to be an individual
story and included a lot of the backround from the first part.  If you want the
complete history of these characters please read Naive Ambitions.
  As always if you read this please leave a comment and if you really like it
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« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2007, 05:54:31 am »

I like it ... keep it coming
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« Reply #2 on: May 13, 2007, 07:46:18 pm »

I'm going to update tonight because I'm not sure if I'll have time tomorrow.
Thanks for the comment.

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« Reply #3 on: May 16, 2007, 07:51:38 am »

Sorry this update took a little longer than planned.  Enjoy!
As always comments are appreciated.

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« Reply #4 on: May 17, 2007, 07:19:30 am »

Thanks for the comments everyone.

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« Reply #5 on: May 17, 2007, 04:36:59 pm »

your settings are perfect i love the way you set each room for every segment to work with the storyline,you either spent a great deal of time building each set or downloading lol either way it works great.

the character development is easy to follow and story flows well great job will be waiting for more
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« Reply #6 on: May 18, 2007, 07:59:45 am »

Thank you so much for the compliment.  I do set up each scene according to the story.  No sets, usually.  Just build a house and photoshop in what I
can't find.  

  Again thank you.
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« Reply #7 on: May 19, 2007, 09:21:34 am »

UGH i don't know what is wrong with my computer, it won't let me see the pictures! i am sure it is a great story though!
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« Reply #8 on: May 19, 2007, 12:31:54 pm »

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« Reply #9 on: May 27, 2007, 08:58:33 am »

Will update soon.  Painting my home.
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« Reply #10 on: May 27, 2007, 03:10:37 pm »

MORE.MORE.MORE

SUCH A TALENTED WRITER
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« Reply #11 on: May 28, 2007, 07:13:34 am »

I love it. It's brilliant that she's having babies. And bringing in Geromes daughter was most unexpected! More please!
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« Reply #12 on: May 29, 2007, 07:27:43 am »

Thanks for the comments everyone.  I'm glad you like it.  I'm going to do pics tonight so hopefully update tomorrow sometime.
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« Reply #13 on: May 29, 2007, 05:51:36 pm »

Yay!! Where did you get your inspiration from?
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« Reply #14 on: May 29, 2007, 05:53:41 pm »

I'm not really sure where the idea came from.....it was just easier to use a vampire as a villian in the sims.
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