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Author Topic: You In or Out? - Chapter 6 - Jeepers Creepers Keepers UPDATED: 12-6-07  (Read 6657 times)
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« on: August 27, 2007, 01:16:00 am »

Hi everybody I have made a sim story so I hope you'll like it. Smiley
It's my first story so be easy please lol ok here I go.
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"You in or out?"
"Introduction"

Clover: Oh my god! Where are we?!

Lexxi: I don't know but mabye we can find it in there.


Trixie: Look we have been through so many lies can't we rest? I mean my skin is dry my hair needs washing we all need a shower. I'M OUT!

Lexxi: No Trixie you can't quit not here not NOW!
We came all the way here to get it and you drop out!
You know what that guy told us and you know what he would do if we don't get it for him! You are staying in no matter what! End of Discussion!

Clover: AHHH its so bright! Lexxi! Trixie! LOOK! What is it?!
 
They were all scared and did not know what to do but just to stand there and look at it and thinking should they go inside or not? I bet you are thinking should they or should they not?
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« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2007, 07:30:00 pm »

That was a good start!  I'll be following this one too!
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« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2007, 08:34:03 pm »

good work!
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« Reply #3 on: December 06, 2007, 04:56:29 am »

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                            "Chapter 1 :Just a regular day : part 1"


Lexxi: Hey time to wake up!
We can't go to school looking like the way ya'll bimbo's are!

Trixie & Clover: WE ARE NOT BIMBOS!
So the girls got ready for school they gussy up in the mirror
and sit down to eat breakfast Clover was kind of upset
but she didn't know why.
Trixie always teases her when the prom comes around.

Trixie: So has lucky Clover found her prom date yet?
I see you got a short skirt + make up + hair done
you are seeing someone aren't you?

Clover: HaHaHa funny Trixie really funny I can't wait though.

Clover: Hey Lexxi I had a dream and its bothering me like it could
really happen. It was us in woods and there was a house
well more like a cabben and you were saying "we could find it in there"
and Trixie said "she is out!" and ya'll are argueing and you saying
"your in no matter what you know what that guy would do if we don't get it for him"
and I was pointing to the little house there were like lights in there
and one was so bright its like you could not see it was that bright
and I am kind of scared.
Lexxi: Clover Clover Clover.......... its just a dream thats all it was
don't worry about it your dream will pass.

Trixie: Yo! Lexxi! Clover! we are not going to school today!

Lexxi: How come?
Trixie:Mom just got a call from the school and said
that "there was a meeting with the teachers today!" so no school!

Clover: Well all my hard work on my clothes , hair and make-up
was shot to heck! I am going back to bed!

Lexxi: But if they had a meeting
wouldn't they have told us yesterday
while we were there?
I'm calling Aaron to see whats going on.
Trixie: Whatever.
Trixie and Clover really didn't care about the situation
but Lexxi always has that knot in her stomach
that she can't let go of.Clover is asleep and Trixie went swimming
Lexxi calls her friend Aaron they have been friends since
1st grade but she was calling him to see if he recieved the
same message.
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« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2007, 04:57:16 am »


Lexxi: Hello? is Aaron there?

Aaron: Oh hey Lexxi! How ya doin'?
Lexxi: I am fine did your dad get a call from the school
 telling you not to go because of a teachers meeting?
Aaron: uh no as a matter of fact the bus is about to arrive in 4 minutes.

Lexxi: What?! oh Trixie is in so much trouble
sorry I have to go.
Aaron: ok bye but don't hang up!
Lexxi: why?

Aaron:What color panties are you wearing?

Lexxi: oh shut up! *laughs*
Lexxi knew something wasn't right
and just starts ranting to Trixie.

Lexxi: Trixie you told us there would be no school today.
I called Aaron and he siad the bus is about to be there
you lied to us!

Trixie: I didn't lie! Mom told me that herself and
 if you don't believe me go ask her yourself!
Lexxi: FINE! I WILL!
Lexxi was just so mad but she still went
to her Mom to ask and to Lexxi's surprise
Trixie didn't lie.


Lexxi: But when I called Aaron he told me
 the bus was almost there!

Mom: hmmmmmm well mabye its just for ya'lls
classes and not Aarons.

Lexxi: Mom me and Aaron are in the same classes.

Mom: well I don't know what to tell you then
so just stay here and don't go to school.

Lexxi: Wait I am so confused right now here you told
Trixie we weren't going to school because of a teachers meeting
I call Aaron to see if the same thing happened to him
and he is going to school and your telling me to not
go to school and left the teachers meeting out of
the confirsation.
Mom:like I said I don't know what to tell you
my carpool is here I have to go to work.

Mom:..........OH! One more thing,
 have dinner on the table when I get back!
Their Mom was just really short and sarcastic
to Lexxi she has never acted like that before
as if something was bothering her and took it
out on Lexxi in a bad way.But Lexxi prepares
dinner and cooks while Clover is lying in her
bed thinking about her dream it just felt so real to her
then she heard her name and Trixie's name being called.

Lexxi: Trixie Clover time for dinner!
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« Reply #5 on: December 06, 2007, 04:57:57 am »


as Lexxi puts a plate at every chair
Trixie ,Clover and their Mom
are waiting so Lexxi can eat too.

Lexxi: Mom does dinner taste ok to you?
Mom: Oh yes its delicious dear A+!
They kept on eating nothing much was said
all you could hear was forks hitting the plate
and rain pouring outside.

Mom: Oh almost forgot ya'll can go to school tomarrow.

Lexxi: Oh good, I hope we did not miss a call
from the school saying "Don't go to school
because the cafaterias food has been poisoned"
Mom: Stop being sarcastic and eat and after
you eat take a shower and go straight to bed.



Trixie: Yes SIR! hahahahaha get it "SIR"?
and my mom is a women!
*chuckles* I guess that was not funny.
*sighs* yes Mam.
Dinner was eaten the girls took their showers
and went to bed and thinking whats going to
happen at school tomarrow.
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hope you liked it!
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« Reply #6 on: December 06, 2007, 05:13:09 am »

So the girls get up and Lexxi again
wakes up the bimbo's the same way
as yesterday.

Lexxi: Get up you bimbo's or we are going to be late!

Clover & Trixie:Once again WE ARE NOT BIMBO'S!

So they all got dressed they all ate breakfast
then the bus arrived to pick the girls up
they got to school but had no idea
what is headed their way.

Trixie: Where is my pen?
Clover did you take my pen?
Clover: Why do you blame everything on me?
Your pen is underneath your desk retard!


Lexxi: Aaron so good to see you I.....why are you looking at me like that?
Aaron: Huh? oh just thinking.
Lexxi: About what? May I ask?

Aaron: About uh um... Oh my god what is that behind you?!
Lexxi: WHAT?! WHERE?!

Aaron: catch ya later Lexxi!
Lexxi: Awww You chicken!

Lexxi got in her class Trixie and Clover however
are in different classes because they are
one grade lower than Lexxi.Nicole is one of
Clover's best friends so is Jade, Avonka and Leo.
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« Reply #7 on: December 06, 2007, 05:13:58 am »


Nicole: Hey everybody listen up! Our teacher Ms.Halland
could not be here today because she has a very bad virus!
Trixie: Oh my god you mean like a virus you can catch?
Clover: No! A virus you can throw! Lexxi was right you
are a bimbo!

Trixie: Oh? Is that so? Well you are a BLONDE BIMBO!

Clover: NO I AM NOT! You were too at one point your such a big baby when you have to do homework!
Trixie: *gasp* FUN RUINER!
Clover: Llama Lover!
Trixie:Llama Lover? How dare you!

Nicole:Both of you shut up! You both are big babies!

Clover: I'm the cutest one!

Trixie: No I am way prettier than you!

Leo: Oh shut up please! You are identical twins which means
you look exactly alike!Stop worrying about your looks and start
worrying about if we get another teacher that looks 90 years old
and that snores really loud!
Meanwhile in Lexxi's classroom it was more quiet
and not so weird.
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« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2007, 05:14:45 am »


Lexxi: psst! psst! hey Shandle
did you go to school yesterday?
Shandle: uh yeah, how come you weren't here?
Lexxi: My mom told me that there
was a teachers meeting and that we could not go.
Shandle: huh? hmmm I don't know
why she would do that. oh well.
But then 5 minutes later the lights cut off the phones
where dead nothing worked the students are
scared out of their minds, the doors could not open
even from the inside because they locked by themselves
Something weird happened something evil was in
the school.

Clover: WTF?! AHHHH we are going to die and
the sad part is I have to die with Trixie!
Trixie: YEAH! HEY! THAT WAS MEAN!
A womens scream came from the halls
loud noises were heard its so cold
you could see your breath
your heart and mind are racing.

Lexxi was brave enough to knock out
the door to help the women but it was to late
the women was sucked dry dead on the floor
in the hallway,
Lexxi was looking in front of her and
beside her to see what caused this women's death
but she never thought to look behind her

She could feel the cold air and a icy
touch on her shoulder a touch that felt painful
and then she heard a voice whisper
"Only you can see this." All these images of people that were killed
and their life being sucked out of them,
just one flash after another it was taking her breath
out of her because of everything that happened at once.

Lexxi: NO! NO! NO! GET OUT OF MY HEAD YOU
SICK PERSON LEAVE ME ALONE GET OUT NOW
MY HEAD IS KILLING ME STOP IT STOP IT NOW!
I FEEL.....I FEEL......I.......
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« Reply #9 on: December 06, 2007, 05:15:32 am »

Lexxi passed out the other students could
not get to her because of the evil force
that was surrounding her she was still
breathing but very lightly.A voice was saying to Lexxi
"You in or out?" Then the force dissapeared
the lights came back on the phones were working
and the doors unlocked and flew open.
Trixie and Clover was so scared to think they
might have lost their sister.

Clover was trying to wake
her up she would not wake up Trixie calls 911

They arrive and manage to wake her up and she
was doing fine.The women was identified as
Ms.Halland Trixie's and Clover's teacher.The
pricible announced over the intercom
"Students please leave the school now
we will call your parents to tell them
what happened don't come back until everything
is under control we will mail you to tell you when to come back."

Clover: OH MY GOD LEXXI! ARE YOU HURT?
DO YOU NEED ANYTHING?DO YOU WANT ME
TO KICK TRIXIE?
Trixie:HEY!
Lexxi:Nah I'm fine I just feel weird thats all
sorry about your teacher.
Clover: yeah I wished it would
have been me instead of you
going through that type of terror.
Trixie: I wished it were you too!
Lexxi: lets go home I'm tired.

So as Trixie, Clover and Lexxi walk
home heaven for bid the bus could
drive them home they all go to bed
and rest poor Clover is thinking whats going to
happen next you will find out next in
Chapter 3!
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« Reply #10 on: December 06, 2007, 05:16:51 am »

Ok Chapter 3!
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The girls went home and went to bed but Clover kept on waking up
through out the little time they could rest except this time she woke
up in a different place it was pitch black
everywhere she couldn't see
but she could hear people screaming in
the black that was surrounding
her.She could feel like something was going to
kill her she heard banging noises echoing around
her it was all nothing but black.Not the empty black
the bad feeling you get like when someone is watching
your every move you feel like they are breathing right in
 your ear and making you feel so afraid.

"Hello anybody here? Who ever you are stop this!"
Clover said with a quivery tone.She could hear the
screams getting louder and louder.

All she knew to do was run even though
she wouldn't go anywhere she could feel sopmething pulling her back inside.She ran faster but the noises and screams
were only getting louder it was after her.
The more scared she got the more weaker
she got until......................


BAM! she fell and couldn't move she
would cry for help she was thinking to herself "Is this a dream or reality?" that is the question that could set
her free.Then the noises and screams stopped
to a screeching hault but that's the worst part.The next thing
she knew was she was being pulled
by an unseen force and then the voice Lexxi heard was whispering to Clover "You In or Out?"


Clover: AHHHHHH! Oh uh it was....just a a a dream? Oh holy moly!
Trixie&Lexxi: Clover Whats wrong?!
Clover: Oh just another dream.
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« Reply #11 on: December 06, 2007, 05:17:49 am »


Clover got dressed for the day and sat down on the couch in the
livingroom and turned the tv onto the news channel.What she saw
was unbelieveable a girl was all alone in a place a few blocks
from her house to be killed by an unknown reason."My dream!
That was my dream!" Clover screamed out with a cry she couldn't
stand to think of it anymore she turned the tv off and ran to get her
a glass of water.

After that she decided to lounge on the couch
and she fell alsleep and dreamed a nightmare.

She dreamed that there was a prison and car had crashed into the building
one prisoner escaped there were 4 people in the car 1 of them was
still alive the prisoner stole a gun from one of the gaurds and shot in the car.

Clover woke up screaming and falling off the couch.Lexxi and Trixie were outside
argueing so they couldn't hear her.A couple of seconds had past and the phone rang.

So Clover rushed to get to see if it was her Mom and to her surprise a man on the other end said "Hi Clover." and in a very threatning way.
"Who is this?Leo stop pulling pranks!I know it's you!" Clover said with a frightened voice.
The man on the other end laughed at her and said.
"Leo?Oh Clover emember the dream about 3 girls being in the woods all alone
and a you pointing to a light?Remeber the dream where you were sleeping on the couch?
I can finally meet you since I know where you live now that I'm out of this prison.
See you in your next dream Clover or face to face." and hung up.Clover didn't
know what to do she stood there just in shock and hung the phone up.
7 minutes later Lexxi and Trixie walk in and see Clover on th couch
staring into the wall."Clover whats wrong?" said Lexxi but Clover
wouldn't awsner back.Lexxi sat beside Clover and Trixie sat across
from them.
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« Reply #12 on: December 06, 2007, 05:18:43 am »


Trixie:Oh come on Clover stop joking around!
Lexxi:I don't think Clover is joking something is wrong.
Clover: He knows.
Lexxi: Who know's what? Clover your scaring me!
Clover: He knows where we are.HE KNOWS! The guy on the phone he knows!
Lexxi:Clover what guy on the phone?
Trixie: OH PLEASE! CLOVER YOU SOUND LIKE YOU ARE IN THE NUT HOUSE!
Lexxi: Trixie go away and shut up do something else instead of torturing your sister like that just go away!

Trixie: ALRIGHT! ALRIGHT! ALRIGHT! YEESH! But I'm not the sister with the mahogony
hair color thats going to have natural black eyeshadow by an insane blonde head!
Lexxi: UGH! Ok he know's? I need to know who know's where you are?
Clolver:The guy on the phone from prison.
Lexxi: OH MY!Did you...dream? Your dream when you woke up screaming this morning was he in it?
Clover:The second one.
Lexxi:What did he look like? We can get a sketch artist so they can draw him and lock him up.
Clover: You promise?
Lexxi: I promise.

Clover felt beter inside so she went to take a bath Lexxi
cooked dinner again and Trixie was in their room playing on the
computer Lexxi called them for dinner they talked about things that happened to them that day.
They played video games after dinner and got sleepy so they went to bed Lexxi and Trixie
fell straight asleep it was hard for Clover to go to sleep so she got up to get her a glass of water.

When she walked out of the room her door shut behind her by itself she ran downstairs as fast as she could to
turn the light's on but they wouldn't turn on she started to panic but calmed herself down enough to get
her a glass of water.

She went to the sink and saw the reflection of a man in the sink she looked up at the window and there he stood the man from her dream looking at her and said
"Hi Clover."
She dropped the cup and glass shattereed everywhere all over the floor Clover really didn't care if
her foot was all scratched up she was to worried that he would get inside the house so she ran to lock all the windows
and doors and she could hear him laughing while following her.She tried to call the police but the phone was
dead and her cell phone was in her room.

She ran as fast as she could to her room banging on the door yelling
"Lexxi!Trixie! LET ME IN!" but they couldn't even open the door from the inside.Finally after 3 minutes they got it open
and Clover called the police

"HELP THERE IS SOMEONE TRYING TO BREAK IN AND KILL US!"
she said screaming into the phone they heard glass breaking downstairs so they ran into the attick.
2 minutes later they heard a knock on the door should they dare to go downstairs?
It was quiet to quiet.But they took the dare the girls slowly creeped down the stairs and opened the door.

To see the police officer standing there.Their minds were releived Clover was crying and telling the officer what happened
all the girls were.He understood and asked the girls to come in his office tomarrow so she could give the details
to what the man looked like."I will have our officers surround the house to make sure you feel safe." he said with a comforting voice.
Their mother got home at 2:00 a.m. and was happy to see the girls alright.But all there is left to do is wait for tomarrow.
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« Reply #13 on: December 06, 2007, 06:05:16 am »

Hey everybody I decide to go ahead and post chapter 4 I hope you like it!_________________________________________________________________

It was morning and the girls were still tired and stressed out,
but they had to get up. They didn't eat anything. Their Mom
dropped them off at the police station on her way to work.
It was a rainy and dull day and it was going to get worse.

The officer saw the girls and invited them into his office.
The sketch artist was already in his office as well. They all took a seat
and it was show time. Clover was giving out all the details that she could.
While Lexxi was comforting Clover as much as she could; Trixie was
quiet which is the oddest thing you'll ever hear.
"Thank you for doing the best you can Clover." the officer said.
She was shaking and cold.
Officer: We can have this man identified in a couple of hours, if you feel like staying here that long.
Clover: I'd rather be here than at home.
Officer: Ok. Well, have a seat out there and we’ll call you when we have the results. Is there anything I can get you girls?
Trixie: A clean pair of underwear? A boyfriend?
Lexxi: It was so nice when you had your mouth shut. It was like you weren't even there. Sorry officer, she just gained consciousness.
Officer: Uh, it's ok, just have a seat out there please.
So the girls sat outside his office and the whole time Trixie wouldn't shut up for nothing.

Lexxi:TRIXIE, PLEASE BE QUIET! JUST ASK LEO!
Trixie: He is already taken you idiot!
Lexxi: How am I supposed to know? I’m 2 years older than you! OH! By the way; what is that you are drinking?
Trixie: Coffee.
Lexxi: OH GOD! NO WONDER YOU ARE MORE HYPER! THROW IT AWAY!
Trixie: UH! You don't tell me what to do.
Lexxi: I bet you would if I rammed this chair up your butt!
Trixie: Where is the trash can again?
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« Reply #14 on: December 06, 2007, 06:06:00 am »


It was still raining outside. Like the saying goes "when it rains it pours."
After awhile, It was time to see the shocking results.
"Clover, Lexxi and Trixie please come here." as he let out a big sigh.
Officer: I don't know how to tell you, but we know the man you saw.

Lexxi: GREAT! So you can catch him?
Officer: We did catch him. Two years ago.

Clover: You let him out?
Officer: No, he was…
He took a pause and finally said it. “Girls the man you saw was sentenced to death
row and was killed 2 years ago. The man you saw is dead."

Clover didn't know what to say. She felt her whole body go cold and light.
"What?" she said with a whimper "WHAT ABOUT THE PHONE CALL?!"
It was all so confusing, especially when Lexxi said "What phone call?"

Clover: WHAT DO YOU MEAN 'what phone call?’ YOU WERE THE ONE WHO SAID THEY WOULD CATCH HIM!
Lexxi: Catch who? Are you ok?
Clover: STOP JOKING! THIS ISN'T FUNNY!


All of the sudden Clover began to feel weak and began to see black spots. She felt paralyzed.
Suddenly, she fell.
Knocked out cold on the ground. She could still hear her surroundings but they began to change from hearing keyboard key's being typed to hearing the wolves in the woods and leaves brushing against each other from the trees in the night. Where could she be this time? Suddenly, she heard Trixie and Lexxi saying "OH MY GOD CLOVER WAKE UP! WE CAN'T LOSE YOU!
She woke up screaming, it is all so confusing to her.

She took a
second to look at her surroundings and she realized that the dream she had about the woods.It wasn't a dream after all it was reality.
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