Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~

[Cluedo]

Ratings don't depends on your age. They depend on your maturity level. If you think you can handle it, of course you can read it. If you read it and can't handle it, then that's a lesson for next time.


I mean, why would somebody put up a story, then say that certain people can't read it? No. By putting it on a public forum it's inviting readers to view their work, and the rating is simply a warning is there so that you can't complain if you get offended.

[Astral Faery]

I appreciate your input, Cluedo.

Unfortunately, there are a couple of scenes that I can't post on this forum because they are considered 'adult material'.  However, most of the story would fall closer to a PG-13 rating, which would mean I could post it here.  I originally decided to do it elsewhere, so I could have the freedom to express the story the way I wanted to.  But I don't want to lose readers who are enjoying it, and would not be able to follow.  The story doesn't suddenly get very 'R' - it's really just a couple of scenes.  But that's enough to ban it from this site.

So, what to do?  I could try to 'tone it down' for those couple scenes, or I could leave them out and give a brief synopsis of what happened.  I'm not sure what would work out best.  Input, anyone?

[Lola136]

you could have toned down version of the secnes on insim and the real version else where?

[Astral Faery]

Yes - I could probably do that.  I'd hate to lose you and any other younger readers I might have.  I appreciate your loyalty, Lola - you've always been there reading from the beginning.  :happy8:

But for the older set - I'm still going to do those scenes differently at Blogger, and I'll let you know which ones they are when I get to that point.

Thanks all, for your support!

[Stelio Kontos]

Yes - I could probably do that.  I'd hate to lose you and any other younger readers I might have.  I appreciate your loyalty, Lola - you've always been there reading from the beginning.  :happy8:

But for the older set - I'm still going to do those scenes differently at Blogger, and I'll let you know which ones they are when I get to that point.

Thanks all, for your support!

You're welcome.
*predicts uberswerve coming up*

[YHsims2003]

oh man, that was intense! Love your battle pictures, goes with the story soo well!! aghhhiwantmore! haha.
Oh please PM me, i would love to continue reading your story!

[Fercho]

Oooohhhhh Excellent!!
This chapter made me feel like I was watching one of those epic movies!, fantastic!!; of course I´ll be following it, this story gets better with every update and, you know; if it´s getting more violent I´m gonna like it even more

[Lola136]

Yes - I could probably do that.  I'd hate to lose you and any other younger readers I might have.  I appreciate your loyalty, Lola - you've always been there reading from the beginning.  :happy8:

But for the older set - I'm still going to do those scenes differently at Blogger, and I'll let you know which ones they are when I get to that point.

Thanks all, for your support!

Ooohhh yay! i still be able to read it

[Astral Faery]

Thanks YH - glad you enjoyed it!  I really had a good time with this chapter.

Fercho - thanks for all your kind words and support.  They really mean a lot.

Lola - you know, it's funny.  I was very sure that I would leave Insim after a couple more chapters.  But now...I just can't do it, and you'll be able to follow a slightly diluted version.  Don't worry, you won't miss much - I'll try to make sure I get the idea across clearly.

[mpb4l1fe]

Oh wow, just read that last chapter, and it was simply amazing!!! Love it! =]]

[vickylougrl]

Astral chapter 13 was awesome your story is the only I'm following right now.  Please don't go!

[Astral Faery]

Thank you, mpb4l1fe - I appreciate the compliment and I'm happy you liked it.

Vicky - aw, I tried, but I just can't leave, lol.  So don't worry, I'm not going anywhere.  And I'm sincerely flattered that you're following only my story - that puts me on a little cloud - now I can float around all over the house, lol.

[vickylougrl]

Well float on as long as you don't float away from insim LOL!  I have a contest bug now so I haven't been reading stories I teeter between my love of stories and competing...lol!
But I'm already in love with your characters so I have to keep up with your chapters!

[Devomuffins]

eeek! i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more!

[steelguy]

Well, this is cool.  Did you raid every available alien skin for the cast here?
(And co-ed cells? What kind of race is this? :-P )

What are you using for the fight choreography? Do you have a battle pose Mod?