HOW COME I ONLY GOT A FEW REPLIES!IS THE STORY REALLY DUMB!?
It all depends on traffic and how talkative people are. Readers are probably less likely to say anything, yet they likely enjoy your story very much. Your story definitely isn't dumb.
You mention not getting many replies. Perhaps I can give you a few pointers.
A) Your title "My Story" doesn't say anything about your story or what it's about. When someone browses the story forums, it doesn't really get one's attention. You ought to be a bit more proactive when concerning titles.
B) A short description on what your story is about will help keep readers' interest. Is your story about romance, adventure, horror? They say never to judge a book by it's cover. However, a book with an illustrated cover and brief description will get a reader's attention over let's say, a book with a plain orange cover and no text.
C) Your pictures are okay, but that's all they are. Try taking them with the walls drawn up (not down) and add more objects to your scenes. Also, try experimenting with angles, lighting, etc. You may need to take several shots and choose the best one to add to your paragraph/page.
D) Most stories follow some sort of plot. Your story, as far as I could tell doesn't seem to follow a particular one. Back to that description, you ought to briefly summarize it. Check the link in my signiture. There is a mini description on my upcoming story. Readers need to know what they are getting into by reading your fiction.
Anyway, that is my two cents. So far, you are doing well. Just thought I'd give some tips. It's what my English teacher told me when I wrote stories in class. Thought I'd pass the info on.
