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« Reply #15 on: March 29, 2008, 01:09:12 pm »

Awww. thanks guys, and bruno (for the cute pj's)
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« Reply #16 on: March 29, 2008, 01:35:25 pm »



"We were able to pinpoint the new toumor. Surgery is scheduled for tomorrow."
The words went strait through Rachel not even bothering to register. Her mother began to cry. "I- I'm going to go tell Nikki." Rachel managed to stammer.
She got up and hugged her mother.




"Everything will be okay. I promise." and with that she left the room.
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« Reply #17 on: April 20, 2008, 08:45:25 am »

Sorry for the massive delay. I had a bit of a writers block and just didn't have time.



 "This is silly. I'll see you after your surgery."

 "yea."

 "I'll miss you."

 "me too. Nikki?"

 "Yes?"

 "Will you take care of Edward?"

 "sure."

 "Well, goodbye then."

 "Not forever."



"I promise, Rachel. Not goodbye forever."
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« Reply #18 on: April 20, 2008, 11:54:59 am »




Rachel's head hurt when she woke up. She felt tired and it was hard to open her eyes. Her mother was sitting next to her bed and several docters stood behind her.

 "mommy."
 
 "Oh baby. It's okay. Everything will be okay.




 "I know."

The docters came over and handed her a package. Inside was a small diary. In the front page was each docter's signature. She noticed also Nikki's neat cursive scrawl and her mother's own smooth quick scribble.

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 Today I woke up from surgery. I haven't been allowed to see anyone except my mom and lots of docters. It was rainy outside today and I wished i could wear my wellies and play outside. The nurse said tomorrow we would go for a walk, but i never actually get to do any walking. They just push you around the block in a wheelchair. The nurse told me Nikki is much better and she's going home soon. I really wish i could go with her.

Rachel
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« Reply #19 on: April 20, 2008, 12:00:43 pm »

Aw, so sad.  The picture of Rachel hugging her mother (the second one) is a beautiful shot.  It captures so much emotion and is so powerful.  Well done!
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« Reply #20 on: April 20, 2008, 12:03:06 pm »

Thanks Astral. I think between the light and darkness is amazing.
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« Reply #21 on: April 20, 2008, 03:08:24 pm »

Today is my last day in the hospital. Last week was my final treatment and now I'm finally going home.

Rachel
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 "Well i guess this is goodbye." Nikki looked at her feet.

 "Not goodbye forever. I promise Nikki."







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   THE END

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« Reply #22 on: May 18, 2008, 09:33:11 am »

.....................................................

"Oh excuse me!"

"That's alright Nikki."

"Wel- wait how- Rachel?



"Yup"

Nikki was shocked, she had not heard from Rachel in a least a year or two in which Nikki had been back in hospital several times. Nikki opened her mouth to say somthing but her brain was having trouble locating the words.

"I- "



"How've you been?"

"Alright i guess. How bout you?"

"i've been great! Iwentonmyfirsttripsincegettingoutofhospitalitwassocool!" Said Rachel attemting to shove far too many words into one sentance.

Nikki had to laugh at the sight of Rachel, whose face had gone bright pink from trying to say so many words in one breath.



"You wanna grab some coffee?" Nikki ventured shyly.

"Sure. I was supposed to meet my friends at the coffee house, i'll introduce you."



"Great."
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« Reply #23 on: July 19, 2008, 11:33:37 am »

Oh, I like it! Good job, and you had better update soon!

By the way, thanks for the comment on Skin Deep.
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« Reply #24 on: July 20, 2008, 10:27:34 am »

Oh, i was using that as the end but i can update it if you want. currently i have a new story though, http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?p=1310445
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« Reply #25 on: July 20, 2008, 10:49:23 am »

Oh, sorry. I thought there was more. ^^

Anyway, I updated Skin Deep in case you want to read it.
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