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« Reply #75 on: April 20, 2008, 07:36:45 am »

"Rimochka, I beg you to forgive me, I cant live without you"  she felt that her cheeks  were wet from her tears.
"Why? Why are you doing this? Go home, she is waiting for you there."
"Rima I know  this was a long time ago, but please give me another chance."
He fell on his knees and hugged her knees. For a moment Rima fell in to the different world she was feeling his cold cheek in her stomach and she spread her fingers through his hair. But than she came to the love less and cruel reality.
" I have never done something like this to any woman before.I love you,  I know it sound dumb after all these years, but I do with all my sin heart."

"Let me go, I am not there for you anymore, it is an end, and get up dont make a fool of yourself. I am sorry but nothing will work. This is our destiny"
Tolik  was looking at her like a child that did not got his desirable Christmas toy. His white skin was shining in light of the moon.  She notices that he didn't even change a bit.  She was desiring to hug him and kiss and tell him that they will be together for ever and more. But when she remembered that night everything inside of her began to hurt, she did not want to return to the sentence where she have put a dot.
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« Reply #76 on: April 20, 2008, 11:40:56 am »

I finally got a chance to get caught up with your story.  I hope you decide to continue - I find it quite intriguing so far.  The evening Rima spent with Tolik was very dramatic - and I'm dying to learn more about him.  Why those things happened and why he pushed her away.   And I also hope to learn why he's suddenly trying to pull her close, after all this time.  And what was in that diary!  I laughed when he told Lollipop girl to go away.  Unusual and interesting story so far!
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« Reply #77 on: April 20, 2008, 12:32:06 pm »

tHANKS BUT i'M NOT DONE WITH IT YET AND  BECAUSE i WILL PROBOBLY PUBLISH IT AS A BOOK IN RUSSIAN STORES i WILL HAVE TO TAKE MY TIME
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« Reply #78 on: April 20, 2008, 08:44:17 pm »

I agree 100% with Astral, it is VERY interesting and it's such a great story.
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« Reply #79 on: April 21, 2008, 06:28:33 am »

thanks *blush
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« Reply #80 on: April 21, 2008, 06:52:41 am »

"It is a time fro me to go" she sayed
"Just let me walk you so I will be sure nothing happens to you"
"Ok, but it will be the last time when you will see me"

They were walking quetly for a rew minutes but then Tolik broke the deadly silence.
"Do you have somebody else?"
"It dosent matter, you better tell me where in heaven you got my pictures from?"
"If there is somebody just tell me I wont be mad"
"I am not worryng that you will be mad, I'm interested where you got my pix from."
"Than if you not worryng than tell me."
"You escaping from the  answear"
"So do you"
"Lets close this topic?"
"NO"
"YES!"
"As you wish" mumblet Tolik
"Look I didnt see you in 5 years, and now you here  showing up in front of me and trying to crush me down woth a questions? Dosent it feel to hot behind the shoulder( it is russian saying when person takes or says something that he is comfy with and you are not that means he feels warm and you ask "Is it hot behind the shoulder?)
"I understant tha you are angry on me now, thats why you going trough some level of stress, thats why you can say bad things to me now and somethings that you dont want to."
"Oh look on this smart one. Here is the  bus stop you can now go back"
'I will wait untill the bus comes"
"You dont have to nobody will steal me from a bus stop"

"Oh my how rude can you get?" Asked Tolik grabing and huging her.

Rima could not fight anymore, she just flew with the tension of their bodies...
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« Reply #81 on: April 21, 2008, 08:21:37 am »

awww it's like fate brought them together again.

Wonderful update!! Smiley
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« Reply #82 on: April 21, 2008, 08:33:02 am »

thanks you again and again and few million times again
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« Reply #83 on: April 21, 2008, 08:33:47 am »

we will see what is gonna happen next I dont even know myself yet lol
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« Reply #84 on: April 21, 2008, 01:05:31 pm »

Ooh, a kiss!  I like the conversation they had, too, how they're both talking about different things - very realistic.  Nice job.
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« Reply #85 on: April 21, 2008, 04:32:33 pm »

i agree with Astral again Smiley And you're welcome. Your story is very good and it'd be a shame to NOT compliment it =]]. I can't think of a single bad thing to say about it, it's that good.

Keep up the really great work!
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« Reply #86 on: April 21, 2008, 07:22:04 pm »

Thanks but I really do have a trouble translating, in inglish there is not enough words, well in russian neather I speak 7 languages and when I write books I use 6 of them to write.
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« Reply #87 on: April 23, 2008, 05:35:11 pm »

Quote from: OwlM;1220259
I speak 7 languages and when I write books I use 6 of them to write.


Oh wow, that's pretty cool :]]
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« Reply #88 on: April 23, 2008, 07:51:08 pm »

Not really my family is international and they were trying to teach me like 15 lang but although I still try to learn them I do not know any of them completley and my grammar sucks in all of them.
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« Reply #89 on: April 23, 2008, 10:30:48 pm »

But that's still cool. I only know english. But im trying to learn Spanish at the moment :]]
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