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Charamei
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« Reply #15 on: May 22, 2008, 06:26:27 pm »

It is better. Even just those few extra sentences have added a world of depth to the characters. Keep it up! Cheesy
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« Reply #16 on: May 27, 2008, 05:46:28 pm »

Thanks Charamei.

Sorry chapter 3 is taking a while. Long story short I have to move them into a new house for a couple of reasons.

It should be up soon.  =]
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« Reply #17 on: May 29, 2008, 12:40:02 pm »

I totally agree with Charamei! that was much, much better! YAY! hopefully we get to read chapter 3 soon Smiley
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« Reply #18 on: August 07, 2008, 04:52:26 pm »

Okay so I am super frustrated.

I was just about done with as the world turns chapter 3 on live journal and I went to click preview and my pop upblocker froze the page. and me being the stupid person I am didnt save it so  it deleted the whole story. This one was actually a lot better then the other 2. But hopefully I can retype it 2 moro if I have the patience lol.

Thanks for understanding guys and so sorry that I havent updated it in forever.

much love,
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« Reply #19 on: August 07, 2008, 07:37:17 pm »

Haha. Yeah I heard of that after I started writing my story im like wow same title haha. The first 2 chapters are kind of bad but the third one is going to be better. =]
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« Reply #20 on: October 08, 2008, 09:28:28 am »

Yo! update! Now!

*grins*

Seriously, i miss this story ^_^
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« Reply #21 on: October 08, 2008, 04:17:47 pm »

Ok I will be sure to.

The sad thing though is Ash is going out with another one of my guys now haha.

and I am still mad at my computer for freezing when I was writing the story. :[
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« Reply #22 on: November 15, 2008, 08:25:07 pm »

Finallyy, I got up enough strength to re-write chap 3.

So here it is.

Hope you enjoy it.






Betrayal...
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« Reply #23 on: November 18, 2008, 04:38:42 pm »

I really like the story so far and your sims are scrumptious. Cheesy
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« Reply #24 on: November 18, 2008, 09:09:36 pm »

Thank you<3
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« Reply #25 on: November 24, 2008, 05:31:25 pm »

New blog up.

Give me your opinions on what I should do.

Please and Thank you.

Cheesy
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« Reply #26 on: November 24, 2008, 09:03:43 pm »

Okay so here is my new story called  Into the Past. (I know lame title but I couldnt think of anything I was blank xD)



Chap 1.

Side Note:  Okay so I realized that me , being the mean person that I am, accidently sent Echo off to college and now I have to remake her for the story. Silly me. SO I will try to get that done ASAP so I can write the next chap.
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« Reply #27 on: November 25, 2008, 08:30:23 pm »

I like it. Smiley
Where did you get Lyric's hair...? And is that Pumpkin/Ferris from Dreams Made Of Glass, or am I seeing things?
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« Reply #28 on: November 25, 2008, 09:54:09 pm »

haha yeah it's the same hair as her and I didnt mean to do that lol.

It was just one of the only hair's I havent used so yeah..

and Lyrics hair is from GoS.


and thank you!
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« Reply #29 on: December 10, 2008, 09:34:54 pm »

Alright so I have a new blog up for this if you guys want to read it.

http://xxkatiegorexx.livejournal.com/

I have info on AWT and ITP.

and also 2 pictures of Jayden and Ash.
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