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Author Topic: Unseen {Chapter 3: The First Cross Over}  (Read 12048 times)
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« Reply #30 on: September 06, 2008, 04:09:53 pm »
Skori, you may be right... Cheesy
Next chapter up soon, I promise!
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« Reply #31 on: September 10, 2008, 07:32:54 pm »
She had a crush on him and he kept pushing her away
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« Reply #32 on: September 10, 2008, 07:38:59 pm »
WAIT!
She was his girlfriend but died and now won't let anyone else near him.
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« Reply #33 on: September 10, 2008, 09:35:27 pm »
OMG i LOVVEEEE IT!!!!! iTS SOOO GOOD! CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!! yOUR THE BEST PUNKROCKER! xDDD
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« Reply #34 on: September 24, 2008, 01:27:49 pm »
Hehe! Hopefully I'll get the next chappie up soon! I just need a few more pictures!
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« Reply #35 on: September 28, 2008, 07:12:08 pm »
Ooh, it's really good so far. I love stories like this. I bet the girl was someone who loved him, but he didn't love her, and now she's all jealous and stuff. You did ask for us to point out spelling and grammar mistakes, so you should know that in Chapter Two, in the third paragraph, you typed 'your' when it should be 'you're.' Other than that I didn't notice any mistakes. Nice job, Alice! Smiley
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« Reply #36 on: October 03, 2008, 05:32:15 pm »
PLEASE POST NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! please!!!!! *does puppy eyes* im dying here!
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