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« on: September 16, 2008, 04:11:14 am »

Sixteenth Sorrow
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“Dolores Seize is just one of the treacherous and menacing cybernetic corporations that are desperate to get their hands on pyrons, one of the most important components on making cyborgs and androids. They would do everything, and will destroy anything and everything that would get in their way.”

Clerysse is the only known existing Ecton in our planet. In her veins are the most important component of a robot: pyrons.
She has spent years trying to avoid every cybernetic corporation, but Dolores Seize has eventually captured her. With the help of a young FBI agent Seth, she has to make sure that her pyrons wouldn’t fall in the wrong hands.

But after all of these years, what if she realised that they are not her real enemies? What if the main antagonist was something even bigger?[/font]
 
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Constructive criticism and feedback warmly welcome :] It might not as good as you expected, but I am just new to story-writing. : ]
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« Reply #1 on: September 16, 2008, 10:17:02 am »

Ooh...update, please. Sounds juicy.
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« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2008, 11:47:23 am »

ooooh! Good story Smiley
looking forward to the update(s)

it's really good for being your first story!
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