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Author Topic: My first ever sim story - The Diary of Laura Smith - Chapter 20 - part 2!  (Read 39467 times)
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« Reply #75 on: November 05, 2008, 05:42:06 am »

Couldnt make you wait any longer, so here is the next chapter...
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« Reply #76 on: November 05, 2008, 06:45:13 am »

Dear Diary,
       I woke up this morning and Dylan was sick, he cried for me..
"Mummy i'm sick"
"Okay sweetie, i'm coming"



Poor little thing looked shocking, i cleaned him up and sent him back to bed.
Caleb was eating his breakfast.
"Caleb sweetie"
"yeah mummy"
"Dylans not well today, he isnt going to school, will you be okay on your own?"
"Mummy i'm nearly 8 years old i'll be fine"
"Good boy"

So Caleb has just set off for school and Kyles at work so I am going to clean around and make Dylan soup.
                                 Laura x


Dear Diary,
       The most horrible thing has happened. Caleb hasn't come home from school!
I waited outside at 3pm for the schoolbus to pull up but it drove straight past.



I ran in and told Kyle what had happened and he rung the school, he spoke to Calebs teacher...



"Good evening Mr Jones, is everything okay?"
"Um I was just wondering if Caleb is still at school?"
"Caleb Smith? No he went at the usual time"
"He hasnt come home, he wasnt on the school bus"
"Just a second Mr Jones, I will go speak to the staff who were on duty at hometime"
................Kyle seemed to be waiting for hours...........
"Mr Jones, There seems to have been a misunderstanding, a man approached a new member of staff, he told her he had come to pick Caleb Smith up, the teacher asked who he was and he gave your name Mr Jones. The teacher called Caleb over and Mr Jones walked off with him. I'm sorry Mr Jones, have you alerted the police?"
"No but I will do immediately, i cant believe this. You know the situation, you know I would never collect Caleb without telling you first. It was Calebs dad who took him wasnt it?"
"I dont know Mr Jones, would you like to speak to the staff member who dealt with Caleb?"
"Yeah please"
........................More waiting, Kyle was starting to feel sick now.............
"Mr Jones I;m really sorry, i'm new, i had no idea.."
"What did he look like?"
"He was tall with brown hair and grey eyes. Um I dont know anything else sorry"
"I have all the information I need"
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Kyle dialed the next number, he had a lump in his throat as he listened to the ringtone
"Police please, my son has been kidnapped by his biological father. Yeah...1 Sim Lane. Okay thanks"
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The policeman turned up within minutes.



I ran up to him crying

"Please you have to help me, my son has been kidnapped"
"Caleb?"
"Yes thats him, by his father"
"Tony Clarke?"
"Yes"
"I have alerted all the officers in the area, they are looking for him, Mrs Jones, do you have a recent picture of Caleb?"
"Yes, here, i havent stopped looking at it for the past 3 hours"
"Mrs Jones is Caleb Tonys only child?"
"No he has Dylan too."
"And where is Dylan?"
"He's upstairs asleep, he took the day off of school because he wasnt well"
"Okay, and has Dylan or Caleb mentioned seeing their father lately?"
"No, Dylan was only a few months old when me and Tony split up and Caleb wouldnt recognise him now, not after this long"
"Okay Mrs Jones, we have everything we need, we will be in touch, we will d everything we can to find your son"
"Thankyou"

As soon as the officer left I broke down.......
"Kyle wheres my boy? Why would Tony do this? Oh god where is my boy?"
Kyle pulled me into a hug
"Its ok baby, we will find him"



Dylan is so upset that his brother isnt around...

"Mummy where is Caleb?"
"Hes....on a schooltrip sweetie"
"How long for?"
"A week or so hunni"
"He's missing isnt he, i heard daddy on the phone"
"Yes Dylan, your brother is missing, but we will find him ok?"
"I miss him mummy"
"So do I baby"



Oh god, why would Tony be so cruel, after all these years to just uddenly decide to do something so evil.
Wheres my baby?Huh?Huh?Huh??
                                 Laura x

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« Reply #77 on: November 05, 2008, 10:00:34 am »

Wow.  That's pretty tense stuff.  I've been following this story, but not commenting like I should (sorry).  I'm really enjoying it so far - lots of twists and turns, believable characters, and enough suspense to keep me coming back.  Nice job!
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« Reply #78 on: November 05, 2008, 10:19:14 am »

thankyou, im glad your enjoying it
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« Reply #79 on: November 05, 2008, 03:20:54 pm »

I Love this story, you did a really good job.x
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« Reply #80 on: November 05, 2008, 03:54:20 pm »

Aw thankyou poppy, that means alot.
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« Reply #81 on: November 05, 2008, 05:32:36 pm »

Stupid Tony has to go off and ruin a perfect family

ugh...


good chapter though Smiley
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« Reply #82 on: November 05, 2008, 06:29:37 pm »

ugh i hate tony he always has to ruin the story and laura's life hasin't he already ruined enough life's i wish tony is gonna die soon

Btw i love your story
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« Reply #83 on: November 05, 2008, 07:03:32 pm »

that bastard i hope they find him and lock his behind up..
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« Reply #84 on: November 05, 2008, 09:31:49 pm »

Tony is an a** and he is a really f*cked up child. xD
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« Reply #85 on: November 06, 2008, 05:32:02 pm »

Noooooo! Where the @#*$ is CALEB!!! Hurry and update!!!

(Lol, go on and take your time!)
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« Reply #86 on: November 07, 2008, 05:40:49 am »

LOL madi I always wait for your comments before i update, it always makes me laugh :-P
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« Reply #87 on: November 07, 2008, 11:33:43 am »

good. good.
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« Reply #88 on: November 07, 2008, 12:10:32 pm »

Dear Diary,
       It has been a few weeks since Caleb was taken and it is so hard. I know I need to keep going for the baby and Dylan but it is just so hard. I want to scream and cry and hit things, I just want my boy home safe with me, where he belongs. I miss him so much it hurts. We try to carry on like normal for Dylan but i know he is hurting too....
       At the dinner table last night Dylan just blurted out....

"Mummy is Caleb in heaven with Grandma Elizabeth?"

Kyle was quick to answer....

"Dylan, Caleb has gone away for a while that is all, he is still alive and well"

Kyle must have guessed that i didnt have a clue what to say. After all we dont know it Caleb is alive and well! We know nothing!



       I am so worried, i just need to know where my boy is!
                               Laura x

Dear Diary,
       It has been many months since i wrote in here, I didnt have anything to say, my days are filled with Dylan screaming and carrying on because Caleb "left him". I dont know what to say to Dylan anymore. The police have no leads as to their whereabouts...
                              Laura x

Dear Diary,
       I went into labour this morning, I didnt want to leave Dylan and go to the hospital so I called the midwife and I had the baby at home...



Meet our gorgeous baby girl - Mia Elizabeth Jones.

                        Laura x

Dear Diary,
       Mia is growing by the day. She is such a beautiful girl. Mum would be so proud at having her granddaughter named after her (Elizabeth)....



She is always wanting plenty of cuddles....



Kyle absolutely adores his little girl......



But I am so worried about how Dylan feels about his sister. He has to sleep in Calebs room now so Mia can have his old room. Its not like he sleeps in Calebs bed, he has his own brand new bed. But he just says "I hate the baby, its not my sister, im not sleeping near her" because his bedroom is next door to hers, so he keeps falling asleep on the sofa....



I just dont know what to do, I make sure he gets lots of attention and plenty of cuddles so hes not left out....
                                  Laura x

Dear Diary,
       Mia is 1 year old now, she had her birthday the other week....



Dylan still wont talk to his sister. He will pass things for her but he wont ever lok at her or talk to her, he doesnt mention Caleb anymore either which is worrying....it just feels like he has given up caring...
                         Laura x

Dear Diary,
       I got quite a shock the other day...
I could hear Dylan talking so i went to his room but he wasnt there so i went to Mias room and he was sat on the floor with Mia laid on the floor next to him.... He didnt see me and this is what I heard....

"Hi Mia, your my little sister y'know. I'm your big brother Dylan. I have a big brother, he is called Caleb. You havent seen him yet but you will one day. Hes nice and hes funny and he always looks...lookED after me. I miss him, one day when we see him again you will love him as much as I love him. Dont forget Caleb. Mia, I love you because your my sister and Caleb wanted a sister so much"

He looked up and saw me....



"Um Hi mum"
"Hi sweetie, you ok?"
"Yep just talking to Mia"
"Ok sweetie, shall we put Mia back to bed now? and its your bedtime too mister"
"Ok mum"
We tucked Mia and shut the bedroom door and went to Dylans room, i tucked him in and kissed him goodnight as I left the room I said...

"Dylan, your a good boy and a nice big brother to Mia, me and daddy are proud of you and Caleb will be too"
"Good, love you mummy, night night"
"Love you too sweetie, night night"

I am so glad he has started to bond with his sister finally.
                               Laura x

Dear Diary....
       Just a quick update to say we are all doing fine, still no sign of Caleb but we keep positive, one day we will see him again....
Dylan is doing alot better in school, he still needs extra support but he is really improving. Mia is 15 months old now... and I have just found out I am pregnant again! Dylan is suprisingly excited, Mia doesnt quite understand and Kyle is over the moon...I just wish Caleb was here too....
                 


When i found out I am pregnant...

         
                                   Laura x

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« Reply #89 on: November 07, 2008, 04:52:24 pm »

wow laura s pregnate agian and mia is so pretty great upload =)
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