Golden Flames Updated[2/20/12]

[dancer]

Ellyn Granger has somehow been able to escape her past as Mackenzie Doberman. When she meets a family that is willing to give her the love and support she hasn't seen in over 15 years, she can't help but love them back, some more than others. Unfortunately, she can't hide that fact that her present and her past are on a collision course, and its only a matter of time before the train, that was once gaining an overwhelming amount of momentum, derails.

This is a mixture of the simfic50 challenge and Qui's Fairytale challenge. This is the Adult remake of Goldie Locks and the Three Bears. I know this is like 30 years late but better late than ever!

Feedback and Comments are appreciated!

Prologue - Lost (.004)
One - Safe (.116)
Two - Strangers (.025)
Three - Home (.074)
Four - Friends (.008)
Five - Hatred (.015)
Six - Sin (.023)
Seven - Sanctuary (.041)
Eight - Paranoia (.050)
Nine - Taste (.039)
Ten - Door (.005)
Eleven - Memory (.043)
Twelve - Fragile (.026)
Thirteen - Past (.019)
Fourteen - Imperfection (.034)
Fifteen Secret (.024)
Sixteen - Smell (.036)
Seventeen - Love (.022)
Eighteen - Betrayal (.011)
Nineteen - Conspire (.017)
Twenty - Touch (.038)

[dancer]

Sorry for not updating like I should but here's the rest of the updates!

[caffeinated.joy]

I've removed Dancer's update demands. I'm sorry for not catching these when I should have. As a note, it's quite all right to post a polite question asking when the next update will be, but please don't hammer people with demands. For example:

Good:

"Hi there.  I'm really enjoying your story and miss reading new stuff. I know you're probably busy, but I was curious to know when you were hoping to update next."

Not good:

"Update!"

"Update!!!"

"UPDATE!"