The Box Ending up Now!

[starlucid]

INSTALLMENT SEVEN


At Pleasantville Jail...


Guard:  Louie Thomas your attorney is here!
Louie:  I have an attorney?
Guard:  Apparently Louie....come with me.

Elizabeth Merrell:  Mr. Thomas....My name is Teresa Cain I'm with the law firm Russell, Caine and Tate.  I'm here to represent you on these rape charges.  Please have a seat.
Louie:  Are you a Public Defender?  I haven't hired any attorney.
Elizabeth Merrell:  I was retained by an anonymous friend of yours that did not wish to identified he has paid my retainer if you are uncomfortable with that then I understand I will inform your friend and  give back the retainer.
Louie:  I'm not uncomfortable with a freebie it's just that I don't have any friends so I have no idea who is footing this bill.
Elizabeth Merrell:  Apparently......the person who retained me feels differently Mr. Thomas.
Elizabeth Merrell:  So what's it going to be Mr. Thomas?  Do you want an experienced Criminal Attorney or would you like a Public Defender with 50 cases for the same pay as a 100?
Louie:  OK....Yeah I want you as my Attorney!
Elizabeth Merrell:  Good choice Mr. Thomas.....I'm going to set up a bail hearing for tommorow Mr. Thomas
Louie:  I don't got no money or friends to put up bail!
Elizabeth Merrell:  No worries Mr. Thomas I find a way to get you out of that cell by tomorow.
Louie:  Really?
Elizabeth Merrell:  Mr. Thomas I always get what I want.



Detective Alvarez:  Carla....I'm going to question Louie Thomas on the rape case I think it would help if I had a female with me it might loosen him up and maybe we will get lucky.
Sargent Ryland:  Does he have an attorney yet?
Detective Alvarez:  I don't think so let me check I'll call down to lockup.

Guard:  Teresa Cain?
Elizabeth Merrell:  Yes?
Guard:  The detective handling this case would like to know if you will be present during questioning of Mr. Thomas?
Elizabeth Merrell:  One moment guard I will be right with you.
Elizabeth moved forward and lowered her voice...
Elizabeth:  Mr. Thomas did you commit this crime?  It will be to your advantage to be honest with me because I will do my utmost either way but in order to defend you properly I need to know.
Louie:  I did NOT do this I swear!
Elizabeth Merrell:  Good then we have no need to be uncooperative go ahead and speak to the detectives I now have to get to work on your bail.  Since you are innocent there is no worries of what you might say that will implicate you.  Just don't sign anything OK? Or accept any deals until we speak again OK?

Elizabeth Merrell:  My client waives the right to have me present during questioning he will answer the detectives questions truthfully and cooperate fully.  We maintain this is a case of evidence mishandling and mistaken identity.  As long as the detective does not badger my client then we have no objections.



Detective Alvarez:  Louie....How do you know this woman?
Take a look at her picture Louie.
Louie:  See that's the thing I never seen this broad in my life!
Detective Alvarez:  How do you explain your DNA being recovered from her on rape kit Louie?
Louie:  I don't know!  I'm being set up or something!
That woman isn't even my type she looks like a frightened deer!
Sargent Ryland here is more my kind of woman she looks like she got more meat on her bones!
Sargent Ryland:  Was that suppose to make me hot Louie?
It's no wonder you have to force ladies cause your moves suck!

Louie:  I didn't force Nobody!
Detective: Settle down Louie!
Let's go over your whereabouts again for that day...
Louie: Damn it! I told you I was home!

Just then an Officer knocked and entered the room...
Officer:  Detective may I see you for a moment?
Dective Alvarez: What's going on?
Officer:  The FBI is here...they want to talk to you.
Detective Alvarez:  Damn it!

[starlucid]

I have more but I'm having company this weekend so I probably won't be able to update til Sunday.  Have a great weekend everyone!  And thanks for reading my little story!

[hotrod50s]

can't wait till next update this story gets better every update

[Elven_Song]

Another awesome update! ^^ The twists just keep comin'. I can't wait to see what comes next.. and I can't wait to see the end!

[starlucid]

LOL! me too!  I have written up to installment nine but got to do the pictures I think the pictures absolutely make the story come alive somehow.
At this point my favorite character is Elizabeth Merrell she is does sinester really well!
I almost made the Lt.General a male I'm so glad I didn't this woman is better at being an Evil Jackboot.

[starlucid]

Ok heres most of 8 was able to get some time to take my shots.


INSTALLMENT EIGHT


Agent:  Good morning Detective Alvarez I am Agent Cruz and this is my partner Agent Hayek we want to question your suspect Mr. Thomas on an investigation that is unrelated to your case I'm afraid we are on a very tight schedule we will need to see him now as we cannot get back in the area for a few days.
Detective Alvarez:  You know I'm in the middle of questioning this suspect myself can't you come back tommorow?


Agent Hayek:  Detective if you feel you cannot accomodate this today we will remove this prisoner and place him in a federal facility we rather not do this but if we have to play hardball we will.
Detective Alvarez: Fine!  The suspect is already in the interogation room go ahead and question him.
Agent Cruz:  Detective we have already spoken to your Captain and a room has been set aside for our questioning of this suspect please have him moved to that space we will be up shortly.
Detective Alvarez was seething mad...Damn Feds he had had it with them coming and taking over his cases.
He would work for months on a case sometimes 12 to 16 hours until he was sure every t was crossed and every i was dotted only to have these bastards come and pull rank on him and all his work lost.  Oh and his interrogation room wasn't good enough for them! No...ugh!


Agent Cruz:  Mr. Thomas do you remember Leeza Gomez?
Louie:  Yeah that whore!
Agent Cruz:  She has been found dead in an abandoned buiding in Strangetown.
Louie:  That don't suprise me she was a crack head!
Agent Hayek:  Louie her throat was cut.
Louie:  Probably bad drug deal.  She was a sick mother..
Agent Hayek:  Louie...we know you lived with Leeza's Mother and that allegations were made that you....molested Leeza during her teen years.
Louie:  I Was not convicted of anything on that!  Leeza was 17 and she jumped in my bed!
Agent Hayek:  Louie it's going to be a long night I'm thirsty would you like a drink?


I'm having a soda....would you like one?
Louie:.......Yeah I would
Agent Hayek:  Here you go Louie have soda.
Agent Cruz:  Louie tell us about Leeza and her bad drug deals we want to hear all about that.....

Later that evening....


Detective Alvarez:  Detective Alvarez here.
Sargent Ryland:  OK this is bad Louie Thomas just keeled over in lock up he's dead Juan!  Had a heart attack apparently.
Detective Alvarez:  What?
Sargent Ryland:  Yeah about an hour ago the medics were trying to revive him but no dice he apparently had a masive coronary!
Detective Alvarez: But... I just saw that guy he looked as healthy as a horse!
Sargent Ryland:  Yeah I know it's too weird...



Detective Alvarez:  Rosemary I came to give you some disturbing news..Louie Thomas the man accused of raping you is dead he suffered a heart attack while in lock up it was very unexpected.
Rosemary:  He's dead?
Detective Alvarez:  Look I'm off duty as of right now will you join me for dinner otherwise I will just go home to a frozen pizza and my dog.
Rosemary studied Detective Alvarez handsome face and she wanted more information on the rapist as well.
Rosemary: Ok Detective let's go.
Detective Alvarez:  Rosemary my name is Juan.  Please call me Juan Ok?
Rosemary smiled Latino men were wildly attractive to her...
Rosemary:  Ok Juan let's go get a bite to eat.  I have a taste for chinese.


Detective:  Rosemary I suppose this ends your ordeal with Louie Thomas dead you will not have to testify, there will be no trial it ends before it actually started.
Rosemary:  I am not happy that this man is dead it gives me no resolution as to why he did this to me.  But if I am pregnant at least no ties exist between myself and this horrible man.


Detective:  Have you confirmed that you are pregnant?
Rosemary:  Not yet I have an appointment with an obstetrician but I'm fairly sure I'm late, sick and other symptoms as well.
Detective:  Let me guess Dr. Hall?
Rosemary:  Yes how did you know?
Detective:  Well he is sort of the only obstretician in Pleasantville unless you go to Veronaville where all the Doctors seem to be.
Detective:  You know that guy was fine Louie Thomas until the FBI questioned him today I wonder if they did something to him?
Rosemary:  The FBI?


Detective:  Yes they questioned him today for like 6 hours I had to stop my own questioning of him I was pissed because he had an attorney I was afraid he would make bail and then it would be harder to question him.
Rosemary:  So you never got to question him?
Detective:  I started to and they took over.
Detective:  Rosemary he denied everything he said he had never seen you before.
Rosemary:  I see.

[hotrod50s]

hmmm seems as if the feds poisoned the suspect lol no great loss and a very interesting twist.i agree with you about the pictures do bring the story to life.

i will be on the edge of my seat waiting for another update i'm really hooked on this story,sort of reminds me of a csi miami type storyline with some occultic undertones always make good stories in my opinon.

i almost forgot to ask where did you find FBI stuff?

[starlucid]

hotrod here is the link for FBI jackets
http://www.modthesims2.com/showthread.php?t=96956

[hotrod50s]

thanks for the link don't know how i missed them lol.*goes back to waiting for update to story*

[starlucid]

hotrod I'm enjoying doing this story.  Yes I watch a lot cop shows I guess it shows LOL!  I have learned a lot doing this story what works and what doesn't so I think my next story will be better.

I'm already downloading a bunch of stuff for my next story....it will be very occult with Caribbean witchcraft and hopefully interesting characters that draw you in.
But one story at a time...

[hotrod50s]

lol now you got me wanting to read the next one and this one isn't finished yet lol i watch almost every cop show that comes out csi miami is my current favorite.

i love the way they thread little pieces of evidence together to find the killer and the twists lol well you know how to do those just find on your own.

and when magic or cursed items or something along those lines are added and anyone mixes in ts2 then you get a really good sim story just as you have proven,others as well but since you are new to doing this you have already developed a unique style.

everytime i think there are no new type of stories to do someone comes up and proves me wrong lol which is great it keeps me entertained for many hours.

if i could find the rough draft of a story i started back in the late 80s i would turn that into a simstory of my own.

i stopped working on it because i had no form of visual aid back then but it is fairly easy to sim the characters but getting them to behave like i want to get a decent screen shot is almost impossible i keep forgetting that i can turn freewill off lol.

the few friends i allowed to read the rough draft all said all it needed was visual since i was having a lot of difficulty painting pictures with words.

many many authors can but i have always preferred to see pictures of what's going on,you are doing a great job and it does look like you are having fun doing so.

[Sleepycat]

I love to read *has hundreds of books* but I perfer sim storys to have lots of pictures. I feel pictures really add to the story and can at times say more about whats happening then the words do.

[starlucid]

Me Too!  I read everything even the boring stuff well actually I skim the boring stuff and then end up having to come back to it for reference later. LOL!
I have read a lot on the occult so my stories will usually have an occult twist to them.  It's been a morbid curiosity of mine for years not a religion.  I agree on the visuals we live in a very visual society we are impatient and overstimulated so it's hard to really sit still long enough for text to kick in our imaginations I'm finding that just glimpses of what the author wants to create in these photos with our Sims is a good way to pull people into your story so to speak make them grab a cup of coffee in take a closer look and imagine what will happen next.
I wish I had the patience and expertise to learn to do the videos  maybe some day.....

[hotrod50s]

lol you and sleepy cat are my kind of people i find it funny that the only people that ever thought i was weird were only people who hated to read at all lol.

starlucid noooo way do you use occult references in your stories lol j/k it does show as a passing interest at least and is pretty interesting stuff in itself.

i wasn't allowed to learn anything about it for years some wierd taboo on the whole subject then a friend gave me a book on it that gave a definition of the word occult that made sense the word actualy means the hidden.

lol i thought wow i am not supposed to know about the hidden in short he lifted the taboo for me and only enough to get my interest.

another phrase i liked was magic is not magic but the illusion of magic is.

given some of the mods and hacks we now have for ts2 creating that illusion is getting way easier i will try to put a pic of it in sims pics this weekend to bad i haven't found a way to do fog and smoke yet

[starlucid]

photoshop hotrod for smoke and fog I'm not good at it all but sometimes I get lucky! LOL!
I tried it for that nightmare photo and it came out looking really evil like ectoghost type things not really fog but something else weird!