The Box Ending up Now!
starlucid:
Third installment
Maggy: Yes Steven she is sleeping she is upset but I think she will be fine...
Steven: Do you think I should come back? I know she was in love with that guy she must be a mess..
Maggy: No stay there I'm here and although she seems to be a little in shock I gave her a mild sedative and she is sleeping now call her later when you get a chance honey ok?
Douglas's death had been horrific his body was not suitable for an open casket She made Ali go and he said his widow and children seemed to be in shock. Rosemary didn't attend out of respect for Douglas's family he was the love of her life and now not only was he dead from a horrible death but she couldn't even go cry at his funeral...she felt like death warmed over herself...she would wait until some time had passed and she would go to his grave and talk to Douglas and tell him all that was in her heart it would help purge this pain and give her some resolution to his horrible death.
The auction was a big success she made tons of money and Mr. Beal was happy she got her huge commission but the idea of going anywhere to celebrate only made her want to sob....
She noticed the box on her desk it was the last thing her and Douglas shared this creepy evil box maybe it was an omen of what was going to happen.
She decided to open it she had pretty much ignored the box ever since coming to own it. The artefact just never appealed to her it was ugly gaudy and weird and not worth being included in the Beal Collection...
She decided to opened it and examine the inscriptions and formulaes on the exterior it was truly a white elephant thats for sure. But somehow the fact that Douglas had looked at them just for her made them special she decided to display the box she would keep this hideous thing in rememberance of their love.
She opened the top to take a look at the infamous Enochian inscriptions as she opened the box her eyes lost focus and she felt a wave of nausea she saw black cloud enveloping her next thing she knew she was falling........
Everything went black..........
Thats when she awoke to find Maggy screaming at her she had called the ambulance they were on their way....she went in and out of concioussness during the ride there and the emergency room she awoke in a small private hospital room her whole body ached she could barely get out of bed she had to go to the bathroom a small door looked like it might be the restroom it seemed like it was a million miles away why was she so weak? What the hell happened?
hotrod50s:
this story just got a lot more interesting just a suggestion here a few more pics like you had in 3rd installment will help.
the storyline is great and well structured.only needs a few more pics:) good job of getting my attention though i will follow this one.
starlucid:
yeah I know hotrod i'm working on it will replenish photos having some issues with my game and photobucket but hopefully I will get installment one and two full of pics tonight please look again and let me know!
SimulatedDork:
Wow, this is growing into a good plotline, hopefully with lots of twists and turns. The poses they strike in the photos really suit it :D :P A few tips:
1) More pictures, good luck with sorting out photobuck! 'Tis a nightmare!
2) Maybe break the text/chapters down a little bit? It's a bit intense to read, I had to take a few breaks.
Overall, great work + will follow it as it grows!
Sleepycat:
a blog might work better for you, you can upload the pictures right to it (depending on what blog you use) no needing bhotofucket!
I use http://www.blogger.com for my sims story - it's free! see the link in my sig for a look at mine.
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