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oddball011
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« on: November 26, 2006, 12:46:44 pm »

Sorry for the thought bubble things in some of the pics , Im kindof new at taking pictures

Constructive critisizm needed!!!
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"MOOOOOOOOOM!", screamed a small boy about 10,"I NEED my shorts now!
Are they done yet?"



   "No David, how many times do I have to tell you to be patient?"



   "But Mo.."



   "But nothing,stop panicking we dont have to be there until 1"

   "Well its already 11",he said with a smirk.



   "Honey your shorts will be done soon enough, whats so special about them anyway?"



At that moment there was a knock at the door.

   "Shoot. I forgot that Chelsea was coming over to watch the twins", Kiera said to herself.



   "WAAAAAAAA *sob* WAAAAAAAA"




   "David do me a favor and  check on your sisters," she said as she tossed him a warm pair of black jean shorts.



   "No prob"

As David ran through the small one story house,



 Kiera went to answer the door. As she oppened the door her jaw dropped and she nearly fainted.



For the person standing before her was definetely NOT Chelsea.
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« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2006, 03:03:53 pm »

*wants More!* :lol:
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« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2006, 03:29:05 pm »

Dont worry Sleepycat I'll update tonight because right now I am cleaning
dont worry it wont be too long!!!
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« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2006, 03:29:32 pm »

Nice intro! Since you comment on my story, thought I'd return the favor.

Constructive critiscim? Hmm... I like the pictures, and they help, but maybe a bit more dialouge/description? Dunno, I'm not a good example!
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« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2006, 04:15:44 pm »

Nice!  Those sims are really pretty!
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« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2006, 11:52:38 pm »

Good intro! It's got me wanting more, that's for sure!
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« Reply #6 on: November 27, 2006, 04:00:26 pm »

Ok I wrote a good sized update and right now Im going into my game to take pics
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« Reply #7 on: November 27, 2006, 08:13:12 pm »

*trys to wait quietly*
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« Reply #8 on: November 27, 2006, 11:32:23 pm »

your sims are beautiful!
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« Reply #9 on: December 01, 2006, 10:20:44 pm »

Hey Oddball you can't still be cleaning.....
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« Reply #10 on: December 03, 2006, 09:54:44 am »

No Im not lol, I just put Pets on my computer and my game keeps crashing does anyone know what may be wrong?
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« Reply #11 on: December 03, 2006, 02:31:31 pm »

oh man....you know at first I was green with envy when I saw all the cute pet pictures out that I didn't have pets but now I'm sort of thinking I don't want it if it's going to crash my game anymore than it already does...have you seen the pets thread it's full of mostly dissapointed ppl.
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« Reply #12 on: December 03, 2006, 03:54:57 pm »

OK well I fixed it and my dog had pupies so I have to get everything together because the doggies wont eat:(
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« Reply #13 on: December 03, 2006, 10:36:19 pm »

boolprop ControlPets on
boolprop PetActionCancel true

make them eat Wink


edit - I really like pets and haven't really had any problems with it (or any of the EPs and stuff packs) BUT I also have a very good computer.
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« Reply #14 on: December 10, 2006, 10:48:23 am »

ok well i accidentally deleted this family while organizing my neighborhood soory so that means i have to cancel the story Sad
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