Insimenator.org
May 04, 2024, 04:39:33 pm *
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
News:
 
  Home   Forum   Help Search Calendar Login Register  
Pages: [1]
  Print  
Author Topic: Meeting Alaska  (Read 3832 times)
0 Members and 1 Chinese Bot are viewing this topic.
supersonic.
Member

Posts: 13


View Profile
« on: September 13, 2007, 05:56:03 pm »



Alaska had it all as a teenager, her parents where fairly wealthy and completely in love. Yet one day, her mother just disappeared. Alaska's father went into a depression, working harder then ever only to keep his mind off Alaska's mom. On her 19th birthday, her dad got into a horrible car wreck coming home late that night and she ended up living with her grandparents, who all knew they where quite old. Her neighbor didn't want poor Alaska to go through that pain again and again so he offered her a house far away once she turned 21. Now, Alaska Coleman is finally free. Free from her town. Free from all the people feeling sorry for her, free from everything.



Should I continue?
« Last Edit: September 13, 2007, 08:06:00 pm by supersonic. » Logged

oh snap!
[/SIZE]
vickylougrl
Member

Posts: 505



View Profile
« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2007, 06:18:55 pm »

yeah go on looks good so far!   A small request can you do a bigger font it's really small and hard to read.
Logged

Coptic Text
Now, when you come under their power, one of them who is the overseer will say to you: "Who are you, and where are you from?"

You are then to say to him, "I am a child of humanity and I am from the Source."
Hidden~Secret
Member

Posts: 1610



View Profile WWW
« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2007, 06:22:12 pm »

very good and I did what you said or someone said and added a chapter dedicated to the lives of Jade and John of what they were before they married.
Logged

If you waist time then you can't get that waisted time back no matter how hard you try.
(used to be ShiningStarSim)
supersonic.
Member

Posts: 13


View Profile
« Reply #3 on: September 13, 2007, 08:07:51 pm »

Thanks! I also chaged the font back to regular sized. =)

ShiningStarSim- Cool! I'll check it out in a second, I hope it will clear things up a bit because it's a really cute story.
Logged

oh snap!
[/SIZE]
Astral Faery
Member

Posts: 873



View Profile WWW
« Reply #4 on: September 15, 2007, 03:06:34 pm »

I like the beginnings of this story so far.  I'll be looking forward to an update to see how Alaska's life turns out now that she's free.  So yeah, I think you should definitely continue. Wink
Logged

Visit me on my blog - Astral Faery's Magical Tales
-For some awesome reading try SimTales:  http://simtalesblog.blogspot.com/
-Need high quality downloads?  Shop Sugah's Place.  A wall to suit your every need, plus much more.  Stop in today!
supersonic.
Member

Posts: 13


View Profile
« Reply #5 on: September 16, 2007, 11:34:51 am »



Meet Bret Lewis.
The hottest thing in Hollywood these days, but not anymore. After his big break he decided to get away from all the scream fans and blonde heiresses of California and move to Bellview, a small suburb of LA.



Soon, he met Alaska. Almost instantly, he grew a liking to her. She was sweet, down to earth, and fairly pretty. But after a few days in his new town, he bumped into Chris, the fortune lady. Bret quickly remembered Alaska but his wants over ruled and he asked for a blind date where he adapted a crush fro Rita Wilson.



While Bret did admire her personality and love for him, Alaska was less needy and more accepting of his fame. Over the next few hours of his date, they hit it off. Then Alaska showed up and noticed their little love fest. Bret quickly apologize and persuaded her that it was nothing.



Rita was angry, but kept her cool around Bret. When Alaska finally left she walked over to him, "Let's dance." She wispered. They walked out onto the pourch and danced. The moon as their spotlight and the crisp night air their soundtrack.


Who will Bret choose?
Will he choose one, or give up and move back to Hollywood?

Logged

oh snap!
[/SIZE]
Hidden~Secret
Member

Posts: 1610



View Profile WWW
« Reply #6 on: September 16, 2007, 12:05:58 pm »

wow I think he should choose her
Logged

If you waist time then you can't get that waisted time back no matter how hard you try.
(used to be ShiningStarSim)
supersonic.
Member

Posts: 13


View Profile
« Reply #7 on: September 16, 2007, 01:22:17 pm »

Sorry it was so short!
Next time will be bigger.
Logged

oh snap!
[/SIZE]
vickylougrl
Member

Posts: 505



View Profile
« Reply #8 on: September 16, 2007, 10:40:17 pm »

I think he needs to stay away from the fortune teller!  Update us soon!
Logged

Coptic Text
Now, when you come under their power, one of them who is the overseer will say to you: "Who are you, and where are you from?"

You are then to say to him, "I am a child of humanity and I am from the Source."
Pages: [1]
  Print  
 
Jump to:  


Powered by MySQL Powered by PHP Powered by SMF 1.1.21 | SMF © 2015, Simple Machines Valid XHTML 1.0! Valid CSS!
Page created in 0.037 seconds with 30 queries.
SimplePortal 2.1.1