Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
Lola136:
:jaw: he hit an old woman, that was mean!
anyway that was a great update, you never stop amazing me with your hiding of Tim's bits lol
Eeeek another cliffhanger!
Astral Faery:
WOW!!! This is fabulous, you guys! Truly fabulous! I leave for a couple of hours and come back to so many beautiful comments - thank you all so very much! I'm floating on top of the world right now, thanks to you guys.
mattitje - yes, Sadie and I have discussed our evil plan to torment our readers - but you know you love it! ;)
Cluedo - thanks for reading! Yes - I had to get pretty creative with the camera in these last couple of chapters - later I was asking myself why I didn't just put him in underwear, lol.
Sadie - LOL - yes, you can draw more flies with honey than vinegar - but poor Shirra just hasn't figured that out.
mpb - so very true - it would be a short and boring story if it ended so quickly.
YH - thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Bumpy again, yes? It makes it more fun, though, doesn't it?
Lola - yes, another cliffhanger - but it gets worse, I promise!
Thanks again, everyone! You inspire me to plunge forward and work!
Sam the T-man:
LOL Evil plans? Us? :angel: Now would we... Who am I kidding? :twisted: It's far too much fun! :muahaha: Oh, the ideas running around in my own head lately... but I'm not gonna hijack this thread ;)
steelguy:
Agh! Aieeee!!! And also: Whaaaaaaaaaggghh!!!
Sex and Violence and Drama and... and... and... yay!
Okay, question now, who the heck is Gertie? Or is it Gertie, or someone else using her image in the dreams? Or... or... or...
No, I realise you're not going to spill anything, just generally wondering out loud.
Okay. Calm now.
Astral Faery:
Sadie - it's okay to hijack for a little evil plotting!
steelguy - LOL! You didn't skip the first chapter, did you? That's where you first meet Gertie, then she pops back up in a dream later on. But, I'll tell you - she's Tim's housekeeper/friend.
I'm glad you're enjoying the sex/violence/drama (great story elements, eh? - for me, anyway, lol) - more to come in the next chapter! Thanks for reading.
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