Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
Sugah Sim:
Oh, Ari!!! Well done, my friend! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. This story will always be one of my faves of yours. 1goodjob
I am saddened this fabulous, engrossing tale must come to an end, but at the same time, thrilled that poor, dear Tim has the happy ending he so richly deserves.
Your colorful screenshots ... with all the stunning flowers ... were simply gorgeous.
You had me going there for awhile. I had a feeling Tim was going to be asked to lead the people of Jbeu. I actually thought he would reign as king with Ileeya as his bright, beautiful queen.
It was great seeing Gertie one last time, both as she appeared in Tim's dreams AND how he remembered her in life. It is sad that he will not be returning to earth, so that he may see his folks and beloved pooch once more.
Perhaps, after all he's been through, it's true what they say...once you leave, you can never go home again...it's never the same, is it?
The piece de resistance was seeing lovely Ileeya with child. I LOVED that.
And I love that our hero and heroine are living happily ever after. YESSS!!! 1glomp
Astral Faery:
LL - thank ya, hon.
steelguy - thanks. That really means a lot. :kiss:
Sugah - Thank you. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Finally! It was hard going sometimes, but I finally got through it.
Being a ruler is not Tim. He likes simplicity. He just wants to live a quiet and uneventful life. He's not the type of person that really wants to be noticed. And although things aren't perfect, he's happy. :)
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