Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
Stelio Kontos:
Quote from: DenimDolphin;1199323
Er...Ari...Throw me a rope please...I can't hold on to the cliff...
Nice writing! Your :blob6:...Tim better not be dead...permanently.
Any chance of some spoilers...:shh:...considering I can't wait 'til next update.
^Good luck on your spoilers quest. From what I can tell, Astral Faery NEVER gives out spoilers.
As for me, I've got a game of pool to play.
*plays pool with the Notorious B.I.G, Jimmy Hoffa, and Bigfoot*
mpb4l1fe:
*Watches the game to make sure nobody cheats/steals anyones cookies* =]]
It's been over 3 hours since I read that update and I'm STILL shocked, I just can't get over the fact that Gertie is dead and Tim might be, at least temporarily.
Wow...not many stories leave me this paralyzed and shocked :p really, really, REALLY good job!
Have I mentioned that I'm hooked and love this story? LOL I think I have, but it wouldn't hurt to say it again, would it? =]]
Astral Faery:
WOW!! Tons of responses! Boy, I sure stirred up some stuff with this chapter, didn't I? Does everyone hate me yet?:angel:
Vicky - Hey, girl! Glad you could take the time to stop by. Yep, things are moving pretty fast now. Hope you stick around.
YHSims - thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Make yourself at home. There's cookies and espresso, a campfire, a fishing hole, and someone probably has some drinks around somewhere.
mpb - LOL! It must have been something if you're still in shock three hours later! And you can never say you enjoy it too many times! It's like music to my ears. And the feedback encourages me to continue.
SAZ - Semi-Trout *snicker* I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
Sadie - thanks! Looks like you've joined the cliff hanging party, lol.
hotrod - welcome back! I'm glad you're still reading.
Lola - Lolaaaa - someone throw her a rope - she's falling off!
Looks like Denim Dolphin could use one, too! Thanks for the compliment, DD - nice to see you here. I'm honored that your first post on Insim was made on my thread! Spoilers? That would spoil the fun, don't you think?:-P
Thank you all for reading, I really appreciate all the comments! I'll start working on the next chapter - have a couple of shots done already - and will try to have it up before next weekend. My kids are on Spring Break next week, so I'll have a full house. I'm afraid to make any promises, because they're all getting sick (again!), but I'll try to get the next part up.
discowhipped:
NO! *gasp*
I was all excited when I saw chapter 19 in stars... then Tim dies! Well, if anyone wants to know my opinion (= big mouth) -takes deep breath- Tim can't really be dead! Gertie most likely is dead but Tim... NO! Then again, I watched this old 80's TV show when they killed off a main character in the first episode (why? no idea) so yes?
I thought it was shocking when he lost his memories... but THIS it's a whole new level of hanging off cliffs. :-P
Ok, I talk too much. Shutting up now.
PS: just randomly saying Astral, I think it' so nice and thoughtful that you always comment back individually to people instead of just a general comment. :angel: So thanks.
steelguy:
Wha??????????
NNNNnnnoooooooooooooo!!!!!!
*Flails hands wildly. Ooops. Plummets down cliff. Scrabbles wildly at cliff face. Grabs new fingerholds (dislocating arm.)*
Mutters Ben... Ben... why didn't you tell m- no. Wait.Tim... No, Hang on...
Right. Astral. What - are you getting tired of your characters, with the killing and the dying and the... *Flails. Gently.*
Love it. And nice trippy psychadelic dream sequence, too. :)
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