Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
Astral Faery:
Quite true - that would thicken it up a little bit. What about you, Sadie? Any plans for pursuing that with Xeno? You're a gorgeous writer - I'm sure you could do it!
Sam the T-man:
Thanks! :D You're actually the second person to suggest that - and as it happens, I did decide to do that in the end. Only the way it's been shaping up, it'll turn out to be a trilogy rather than the two-parter I had planned - it was getting way too long, as I explained in my own thread. Half the things taking place in it hadn't even occurred to me when I started it!
Rosebud1773:
All I can say for both is...go for it, you never know what's around the next corner till you take a peek.
ZAYURY:
My dear Ari, I could not resist any longer, I had to come and read this last update, lol! :D I'm telling you my friend your stories are seriously addictive! :wub:
I really enjoyed the new look we got into Shirra's motives and emotions. What caused her to be what she is... I feel sad for her and for the horror she witnessed by her grandmother's death. :( BTW: That really was messed up of the villagers to do that to her! >[
Wonderful chapter my friend! :wub:
Astral Faery:
Thank you, Zayury! I'm happy you liked it. There will be more about what happened to Shirra in the next chapter - the showdown part of the story is really long, so I had to break it up into three chapters.
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