Xenophobia: Pride & Prejudice - Chapter Twenty-four
Sam the T-man:
@steelguy: Yeah, with the so-called Pleasant twins ranging from two to three in nice, that would be about right for them to act like that (IMO anyway). And yes, she was sitting next to them, although with the pair so close together they wouldn't be so squished, especially when Ripp was on Johnny's lap ;) It is a bit of a squeeze, although thinking about it, there usually is room for three in the back, complete with seatbelts, so I don't know why Maxis only gave us room for two :oogle:
@Cynara: Thanks... clean your chair afterwards? Um... any particular reason, or did I miss something? :oogle:
Thanks for your comments anyway, glad you like it :)
joe_mulcahy:
You can't find the file borking the ability of a sim walking to another lot, eh? Well I have the same problem, and still haven't found it after six months of searching.
Anyway, I am nearly bereft of words at that Jack-In-A-Box paper. It was just so beautiful, and summarised the plight that is Ripp Grunt's perfectly! You're quite the talented writer, I must say!
I love how not only Ripp, but Tank also bolted from their father to go with the Smiths! Good on them, and good on you for writing it!
Ha hah! I loved the part where their romantic interactions are witnessed by Dirk and Lilith, and Tank stood up for his brother. Good on him yet again!
I love this story! Keep up the great work!
Sam the T-man:
@Joe: Re. the walk to lot problem... that's not encouraging in the slightest :P So happy to read your comments on the first part - as for who wrote it though, mm... was it Ripp, or maybe someone else we know? ;) Ah yes, Tank - turning out to be quite the hero, he is ^_^ I know others say he's horrible, but I love him to bits :D You know, in one game he rejected a hug attempt by Ripp, but then apologised for it - all on his own. They actually get on pretty well once they get chatting (which they do quite a lot!) - there's one in the eye for Maxis's back-story! :laughing:
Thanks for your nice words, they're all so encouraging :D Regarding other comments though, my tongue's starting to ache from my incessant biting on it, so I may have to update pretty soon ;)
AxelVal:
So it is tears and cries welling up inside? I thought so, but the wording is just a little awkward because it says they're gone.
With the Johnny/Ripp drum session it was just that in the previous line I wasn't sure if Johnny or Ripp was talking, so since it said Johnny's name most recently my mind was still on him. This means I was imagining him saying they'll be taking to a spaceship and then drumming.
It's the wording and punctuation in the last sentence. The "who's just sat there" seems like a question instead of a statement. Not to mention the wording is extremely awkward for me.
I got it. Johnny was talking about if Tank was really the same person who had accosted him earlier or if, more or less, he'd been replaced by some body-snatcher thing. *grin*
I understand that part now.
Sam the T-man:
... Okay, yeah it was Ripp talking - he was mocking his Dad over "he probably thinks we'll get taken up to a spaceship" ;) I do apologise for the wording - I proofread it a gazillion times.. which was probably a bad idea, 'cause my eyes started to glaze over :lol: That last sentence you mention - it was half-question, half-exclamation, so you were close (like he was saying WTF? ;)) And yes, you got that last part just fine :D
Right, any other questions before we move on? :lol: *looks around wondering if asking was a good idea*
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