Perry's Story *New Chapter*

[ryannrules86]

I have started some stories before but never got into them. This one I really am sure about it. I've though it through and I'm excitied to see what happens. So Here goes.
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My name is Perry.

I am fifteen years old. I live with my mother and my sister in a three story apartment building.

This is my mom, Ana. She's very blond, in a figurative sense. She likes everything tidy but she can't clean.  Therefore I have to do most of the cleaning. She believes owning a car is pointless. If you don't have a man to fix the car it doesn't run. Although I took auto shop last year as an extra curricular activity and it was very interesting. I learned how to recalibrate the pistons and valves in the engine. So I guess you could say my mother and I are opposites.

This is Aubrey. She's very blond too. She's my twin sister. Don't we resemble each other? I'm also very sarcastic. We are fraternal twins, as in we look nothing alike. Anyway, I don't have a dad. Well, I suppose he might be out there somewhere but I gave up on the dream of meeting him ages ago. Anyway, on with the story I'm going to tell you.

I woke up the other day thinking about cars. About the engine and the transmission. I hardly ever think about cars but lately it's all I can think about. I was in my yellow pajama shirt. I wanted to do something. I went out to the apartment swings.

I swung on the swings at sixth thirty in the morning in my yellow pajamas. I saw people walking by giving me strange looks. I could care less about them. That's one of the things I like about my self, I don't care what anyone thinks. I sat there thinking for a long time until about nine o'clock I guess because Ana came out in a fuss.

"Where were you? Do you know how worried I've been?" She yelled.
"I bet you were terrified." I mumbled under my breath.
"What was that? What did you say?" I didn't say anything. "Huh? I'm waiting?"
"I said I'm tired." I was almost sure she could she through that.
"Oh. Well, consider yourself grounded. Grounded as in confined to the lot." I hadn't left the lot since school let out three weeks ago. Not because of being grounded but because I didn't feel the need to.
"Ok." I said back. She huffed and stormed away. I sat down in the grass looking up. I heard a big noise and a moving van pull up. The van stopped and out of the van came a young girl about ten. After her came a boy about my age, he was attractive. Aubrey went out to greet him and gave him a friendly hug. He hugged back. He wasn't attractive anymore.

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[Astral Faery]

I love it!  I think it's off to an great start, with an interesting set of characters.  I like Perry, and her attitude and differences from her mother and sister.  And I loved that line at the end when she said he wasn't attractive anymore.  I hope you decided to continue.  Did you get this idea because of Freetime?

[ryannrules86]

I have two ways I want to go with this story. I am going this way.
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Aubrey and I have a weird relationship. At times we can be friends. When we go to visit grandma in the nursing home were friends but most of the people there are in diapers. At other times when we are around people she knows, I'm transparent. At this point, sitting in the front yard in my pajamas, I was transparent.

 I saw the boy look over at me and then ask Aubrey a question. She brushed the question off and continued with her conversation. Then probably out of annoyance he came over to me and sat down beside me looking at the clouds.

Aside from the fact that he had just hugged Aubrey he was sort of, in a weird twisted way, cute.
"Hi" He said.
"Hi" I said. I looked at Aubrey. She had marked her territory and he was it. I was not going to interfere. I figured he just sat down out of pity for the poor girl sitting in the grass in her pajamas. I was not going to do that. I set up a simple trap. It was perfect. It would let me loose the guy and mad Aubrey agitated. "What's your name?" I asked.
"Josh" He answered. "and Yours?"
"Perry" I couldn't help but smile because my plan was unfolding perfectly. Aubrey was in spite of me at that moment. "You look hot." Aubrey's eyes widened as I said hot but she wasn't prepared for what I did next."You should come inside."
"Yeah. I guess it is hot out here." We walked inside. Aubrey hot on the trail. Her face was almost green with eny and red with rage. She looked like a christmas tree but that was only in my mind. I walked to the stairs. Josh followed me. Before I went up I asked. "Your apartment is on this floor. Thats too bad mine is up. I guess I'll see you later then." I walked up so proud of my self. My plan worked, perfectly. It worked better than I thought.

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[ryannrules86]

There's only so much stuff to do when you cooped yourself up in your room. You can chat with everybody on IM.

After a while you get bored. I was keeping myself in my room because I wanted to avoid Aubrey's "Territory." I had been looking out my window. I saw Aubrey cheaply flirting with Josh. I could tell he didn't like it. Aubrey saw my eyes following Josh and shot me the "Stay away or I'll kill you" look. I'd been in my room for about a week when I went out to the game room to watch T.V.  I watched for about thirty minutes until I saw Josh coming up the steps. He saw me and his face lit up.
"Hey Perry! Where have you been?" I dreaded the moment I would see him again. My heart wanted to talk to him, so bad. My head said, "Don't you dare." I knew I had to compromise.
"I've been sick, the flu. You should probably go because I might get you sick." I didn't It. I talked to him and I kept it casual.
"It's ok. Anastasia has the flu." That's great. His little sister had the flu. "She's been sick for a while." He can down and sat beside me. "She has a weak immune system."
"I'm sorry." What was I doing? "I should leave!" I thought "And Now!"
"It's ok. She's still really happy." He smiled.
"So, Why are you here?" I asked.
"Well, My dad lost his job in New York. We moved here because his family lives here." I was so happy to see his smile that I smiled too.
"What about your mom?" I wished I haden't asked because his face looked pained.
"She um.... commited suicide two years ago." I felt bad for him. I scooted closer to him. He put his arm around me. I looked into his eyes.

"What about you mom and Dad?" No one had ever asked about my mom and dad before.
"Well I never knew my dad. My mom, she doesn't really understand me." I leaned my head on his shoulder and I felt tears burst into my eyes. They were silent tears. They had no purpose they were just there. Then one slid down my cheek. Josh took his free hand and wiped my tears away. Eventualy my head caught back up with my heart. I started wiping away my tears.
"I'm Sorry, I just burst out like that." I loved looking in his eyes, It was like looking into his soul.
"Don't be." He let me go eventually. I didn't want to. We walked up the stairs to the third floor and to my room holding hands. I wanted to stay that happy forever but I knew it was to good to last. I hugged him and he hugged back for a long time. Then I went inside to my room and flopped onto my bed. I was so happy. I loved evey part of that night. If that wasn't the best night of my life so far I didn't know what was. I fell asleep happy but not for long.

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[Astral Faery]

Aw, can't wait to see her sister have a hissy fit over this.  I'm glad Perry let down her defences a little and let Josh into her life.

[ryannrules86]

I woke up to yells. Aubrey and Mom's voice rang through the apartment. I woke up. I sat there for a while then mom, Ana, barged into my room.
"Where were you? Huh? Tell me? NOW!" I had no clue what she was talking about.
"I was in my bed."

"Oh. I bet you were!" Her voice was so loud I thought the whole world could here. "Get out of my house! You filthy...dirty...evil...child! Out of this apartment! Now!"
"What?" I was yelling. I don't really remember anymore because it was really loud and a lot of yelling. I do remember starting to cry.

I also remember Aubrey with a smirk on her face. She had told Ana we had done something far worse than what we actually did. We didn't even kiss, for God's sake! I left.  On the way down to the door. Josh stopped me.
"Whats wrong?" He asked. Oh How I wanted to tell him everything. I wanted to just jump into his arms.
"Everything!" I felt tears burning in my eyes. "Just leave me alone!" I walked off. He stood there.

Eventually when I was in front of the school. I saw Josh chasing after me. I stopped and waited. He gave me a hug. I hugged and cried.

"Are you OK now?" He asked after I was done crying.
"Yeah." I sniffled.
"So you want to tell me whats wrong?"
"OK. Well my mom is mad at me because she thought I did something really bad last night." I left out the detail that she thought I lost my virginity, to him.
"I'm sorry." We hugged again. I rested my head on his collar bone. He hugged really tight. I looked up at him. He looked down at me. He kissed my forehead. Then slowly his hands rested on my hips. His warm embrace was comforting. I wrapped my arms around his neck.
"I have to go." I walked away. Where I was going I didn't know. I was just going away.

[Stelio Kontos]

This is pretty decent work, not bad at all.
(I think you have enough upskirt-ish shots of Perry. Not an issue, just me noticing the most random details about a story.)
I'll consider reading onwards...