Opportunity Knox take 2
steelguy:
Hey, auntiejo - don't let one person put you off, please? This was looking like a good little story. I mean, I understand why you're feeling upset - that little 'review' was a bit like being back in highschool having your essay graded by a really over-eager teacher - but I read this thread and I count three people liking it and one... not.
The numbers say you're doing well. And as this isn't high school, you don't have to be letter perfect, you just have to be enjoying yourself, right guys?
Leporidae:
As I said, I DID like it. I was just trying to help her out :/ And she took it the wrong way. Sorry.
EKozski:
Leporidae, did you know that the author of this story is mentally disabled? If you didn't, it says so in her signature. When you gave her your constructive criticism, she took it as an insult, and I can understand why. She already suffers from low self-esteem, and by adding your feedback, may have brought it down lower. She's only human. Just be careful.
We may never see the ending of this brilliant story. Personally, I liked it. It had an interesting plot behind it. I thought she was doing a fantastic job with her talents to the best of her ability.
Only time will tell if we see an ending.
phishfood1301:
good job on part 2!
auntiejokisses:
i do want advise. i don't want to be criticsed about my work. and when someone say's don't put myself in the story i'm only trying to put a little of me in. not awhole lot as you see in the story the kids have Downs Syndrome. i don't... and it's too late. i threw my story away. i don't know where i left off.
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