Opportunity Knox take 2
Tenshii~Akari:
Auntiejo, Leporidae really was trying to help you though... although it seems a little harsh to you, I'm sure she really meant well. :(
Sometimes, you just have to accept or ignore what people say about or to you. Some of the tips she offered I find to be quite helpful, even to myself. :smile bi: You did have a nice start to the story, and there was no indication that she said she hated it. She just wanted to help you grow in storytelling, just like trl and weetzie were trying to help you grow in your picture taking. :angel:
I just wish you wouldn't give up every time someone has something to say that you don't want to hear... it makes "them" win, and you "lose". Always remember that a quitter never wins, and a winner never quits. I know you're a winner, because I read somewhere that you won some blue ribbons in your Special Olympics events. C'mon back and finish that race for us. :smile bi:
Don't let us all down now by stopping your story now. I'm sure you can always improvise on the next part, even though you kinda deleted what you had before. It's what builds creativity. ;)
auntiejokisses:
i'll have to start over. i don't know where i left off. the story will still have down syndrome kids in it... helpful adivse is welcomed. the story will be enjoyable. but please let me write in words that i can understand that spunk of winning will come back when i'm not in so much pain. the pain isn't in my heart. it's in my side going across my belly and underneath.
phishfood1301:
NO NO! A story is all about your feelings! Who cares if other motherpoopers put you down! Write my friend, write! It's a really good story! If you need help with ideas ask me, I'll help! Pick that story up where you left off!
idea 1: does he teach the kids something new like how to stand up for themsevles?
Idea 2: Does the mother get a raise and they buy a better ________ (you fill it in here)
Idea 3: Does he and the mother fall in love?
Idea 4: MAKE IT UP AS YOU GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
In this world theres always going to be somebody who doesn't like you, your ideas, or your hair or anything that's not their "way". But for every 1 of those people there are ten other peolple who like you for you! They like your hair, your ideas, and your story!!!!!!! Look at those comments, LOOK!!!! most of them are nice comments! Everyone does like your story! I do too! So where does the story 'Knox' go next? Keep write writting my story friend! Write on!
dr.e
EKozski:
If you thew it away, start on a different story line where you left off. Change it a little bit. If you do, this one might even be better than the one you had started. Wouldn't that be great!
Like Tenshii said, you are winner! And, you'll keep on being a winner.
Show us what a winner like you can do.
Tenshii~Akari:
Quote from: auntiejokisses;1263696
i'll have to start over. i don't know where i left off. the story will still have down syndrome kids in it... helpful adivse is welcomed. the story will be enjoyable. but please let me write in words that i can understand that spunk of winning will come back when i'm not in so much pain. the pain isn't in my heart. it's in my side going across my belly and underneath.
You don't know where you left off? I think it's easier than you think... :toothy8: To me and everyone else:
Quote from: auntiejokisses;1262357
well i guess that you could call this chapter 2.
to help to pay the rent and the bills and seeing that my job takes me from the time my kids left for school til 10:00pm i took in a boarder. he seems to be a nice enough man. his name is TuPac Grey. he's very nice to the kids. the kids like him. i told TuPac that the kids have special needs. and they have downs syndrome. that their needs are differantly than what we need. their needs are a constant attention. he told me that the kids with special needs didn't bother him. the children to seem to adore him. they love the camera.
... This is where it ended for us last. You may not remember where you left of in what you originally had, but either way we don't know what you had in store for us, so we'd never know it wasn't what you wanted. :happy8: Try going from this point above (when you last posted that part of the story) and see what happens. You don't have to start completely over. :lol:
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