Skin Deep [UPDATED 7/19]

Medagic

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« Reply #15 on: July 20, 2008, 08:52:08 pm »

I had a feeling when I saw Casper's eyes that he was blind.
Good so far! I wonder why Louie is like a celebrity to them though... Hm.


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ZanarkandFayth

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« Reply #16 on: July 20, 2008, 10:09:26 pm »

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I had a feeling when I saw Casper's eyes that he was blind.
Good so far! I wonder why Louie is like a celebrity to them though... Hm.

Oh, you'll see why. She's not as much a celebrity as a huge help, but Mrs. Balk is a very excitable person and Casper kind of takes after her. ^^


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« Reply #17 on: July 21, 2008, 03:16:43 am »

Aha! *waves finger* And this is why Mrs. Balk was worried about moving the chair! Because of Casper.

Very nice little beginning here. Keen to see where it's going.


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« Reply #18 on: July 21, 2008, 01:14:31 pm »

Ah, now I understand the orderliness. Good story so far, well written and easy to follow. Looking forward to more.


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« Reply #19 on: July 26, 2008, 05:31:44 am »

Hey, didn't see that coming! Guess I'm just daft. Cheesy

I though Mrs. Balk moved the chair bcause she was a freaky perfectionist or something... lol


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ZanarkandFayth

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« Reply #20 on: July 26, 2008, 07:59:52 am »

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Hey, didn't see that coming! Guess I'm just daft. Cheesy

I though Mrs. Balk moved the chair bcause she was a freaky perfectionist or something... lol

Yay, I actually made a twist and someone didn't see it coming! *feels proud* Thank you for the comments, guys. Sorry for the lack of update, but I've been in band camp all week, and by the time I get home from marching and playing the clarinet from eight in the morning till five in the afternoon, all I want to do is eat and sleep. ^^

Oh...and just so I can gush, though no one here probably knows what it is, I just got back from DCI (Drum Corps International) a few hours ago after leaving to see the show at five yesterday and still am not tired! Whoo, for long trips in the back of a van!

Back on topic... there should be an update sometime soon, I just don't know when. I have band camp again next week from 8 a.m. to 8 p.m. ><


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« Reply #21 on: July 27, 2008, 07:52:43 am »

lol poor you!
Thanks for reading my story! more twists to come.:smilebox:


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discowhipped

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« Reply #22 on: July 28, 2008, 02:31:29 am »

*ahem* yes... I never notice the twists until the last minute. Happens everytime!
Ooh how lucky, Band camp lol, it just gives me images of American Pie 2.. :lol:


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ZanarkandFayth

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« Reply #23 on: July 28, 2008, 08:53:57 pm »

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*ahem* yes... I never notice the twists until the last minute. Happens everytime!
Ooh how lucky, Band camp lol, it just gives me images of American Pie 2.. :lol:

XD Band camp is not like that, I swear! But the Mud Gator is awaiting sacrifices...

Updates will hopefully be soon.


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discowhipped

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« Reply #24 on: July 28, 2008, 11:08:19 pm »

Lolz... I'm waiting for that update.. Cheesy


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Bookfreak

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« Reply #25 on: January 26, 2009, 09:25:42 am »

Loving It So Far... Cant Wait to Read More


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DemonOfSarila

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« Reply #26 on: January 26, 2009, 10:12:42 pm »

yeah, it's good..... will there be updates? i mean this isn't the fast moving forum in the world, but since July is kinda a long time....

I hope it's a yes though, it's a great story.


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ZanarkandFayth

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« Reply #27 on: January 27, 2009, 09:46:15 pm »

Quote from: 2*B~Weird on January 27, 2009, 05:21:32 pm

Great story so far! Very interesting and unique storyline [so refreshing to see a character that's different without being inhuman, what with all those vampire stories out there, riding the Twilight bandwagon] and some great writing. It flows almost like a poem in a way, very smooth. And very realistic encounters between the characters, very natural modern day people, especially between Louie and her dad.

Oh.. I just saw the 'Updated 7/19' thing. July. Um... will there still be updates? I hope so!

Ah, hah. Yeah, I really need to re-do this story. >< I have such prettier sims now (not that I don't like these, they're just...old). Anyway, I really like this story. Just kind of got out of my rhythm after marching season. I usually sim on the weekends since I use the family computer and the sims takes FOREVER to come up and shut down on my computer. Since football games were on Fridays then I'd have competitions the very next day, I usually wasn't up to much more than eating and sleeping Sunday.

I'll try to do some more with this later, hopefully. ^^


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« Reply #28 on: January 28, 2009, 01:32:05 am »

oooohhh.
that story sends shivers up my spine *shudder* [it may be just that i'm cold...]

but either way.
this story is really good.
the writing is really smooth, and i'm really enjoying the "teen attitude-ness" about the story.
it has really unique story line and has a tremendous amount of potential.
keep at it! Happy


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« Reply #29 on: January 28, 2009, 02:09:18 pm »

Yeah, I love it! I especially like the plot twist-Casper being blind...

Update soon, honey! Cheesy


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