Finding faces, Updated 02,13,09

[Devomuffins]

Hey all! I have a new story for you that I hope you will enjoy! I'm still working on gifted with grace don't worry enjoy, and tell me about any errors you notice please.
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This, is me.



Why I’m sitting on the toilet crying, you’ll have to find out. Sara (my half sister) is yelling that she has to take a shower so I quickly brush the tears away from my eyes and fix my hair. I rush out, as Sara walks in, dropping the test in the trash as I leave. I lie on my bed, tired, just allowing my thoughts to run free.



 A door slams. Sara walks into our room, stone-faced and holding my test. Oh no.
 “Is this yours?”
“No.” I lie quickly.”
“Is it?”
“No.” I lie again, and I can hear the uncertainty in my voice.
“Don’t lie to me Anya!”



 I can’t hold back the tears, burning behind my eyes any longer, and they rush through me in a flood of sobs. Sara puts her arm over my shoulder. “Is it positive?”  
“See for yourself.”



“I can’t boo, its already changed back.” Her voice is comforting now.  I now say the words that even I, am refusing to believe. “It was positive.” The tears come back so hard, my whole body shakes and for hours, Sara just holds me in her arms.

[ZanarkandFayth]

Aww... Poor girl. Can't wait to read more. I've always liked teen pregnancy stories, don't know why though.^^

[Stelio Kontos]

Aww... Poor girl. Can't wait to read more. I've always liked teen pregnancy stories, don't know why though.^^

It's the same reason people watch Cheaters, Maury, etc.
People's suffering is somehow strangely entertaining to some people.

*will wait for update*

[candy.floss]

she's pregnant? aww cant wait to read more..

[Devomuffins]

“When are you planning to tell mom?”
“I’m not sure.”



"Is Bill the father?"
"Yes." Bill is my ex boyfriend, we broke up two months ago. I have no idea how to tell him that he's a father.
“When did it happen?”
“Three months ago.”



“But you just took the test yesterday, how come?”
“I was scared.” Sara lay back, temporarily pacified by my answer. I lay back and shut my eyes, hoping to fall asleep. I opened my eyes again as a wave of nausea hit me. Then I ran to puke in the sink.
“Are you okay in there?” Oh crap, Mom.
“Uh, fine Mom.”
“I’m going to the store, do you need pads?”
“Uh, oh, uh yeah, sure.”
“Kay, I'll get you some.”
Sara walks in after Mom leaves. “Eww. Please flush that.”
“Oh, right, sure.” I put the seat down and sit on it.
“You can’t keep lying to Mom, Anya.”



“I know.” Its been nagging at me for months. I reach down to touch my belly. No one but me has noticed, but I can already see the little bump.

[erica_jean698]

Hmm, good start.  Entertaining or not teen pregnancy is a serious and often tramatizing thing.  I hope everything turns out well for Anya.

[ZanarkandFayth]

I feel really bad for her. I wouldn't know how to tell my anyone, let alone my own mother. It's not that I like these kind of stories because I like watching other people suffer, I just like...real stories with real emotions and the such.

Can't wait to see where it goes!

[Glamily]

luv it so far!

[Devomuffins]

I hear a car door slam in the driveway, telling me that mom is home.  



“Are you gonna tell her?” Oh god.
“Yes.”



“You look kinda like you’re going to puke again. Do you want some water?” My mouth is dry.
“Yeah, thanks.” I hear my own voice sounding kind of distant. Mom walks in and judging by her face, my eyes are still red and puffy.
“Oh, what’s wrong sweetie?”



 I look into the face of my mother and wish that I deserve the love in her eyes. “I’m pregnant.” The shopping bags hit the floor.

[ZanarkandFayth]

>< Looks like its about to hit the fan... VERY awesomely awesome so far. You've got me hook, line and sinker. Hope for an update soon!

[Devomuffins]

Thanks! the next update will arrive either tommorow or the day after.

[ZanarkandFayth]

Good. So should the update of I'm Not There.

[Astral Faery]

This is very good so far.  Great pictures and realistic exchanges between Anya and her sister.  Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

[Amira]

More! LOL

[Вероника]

Cool!