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Neeri:
Only updating on modthesims2 now, Take care and good luck.
Devomuffins:
I'm pretty sure you meant maternal feeling not maternity.
Neeri:
pretty much.
vickylougrl:
Aww...what a sad story Alex is starved for affection and seeks it in any form she can get it.
I'm a little confused since you had her pass out as to where she woke up? She is seen sneaking back home but what happen to her one night stand guy?
This is a good start to your story don't worry about language I understood everything except that part where she wakes up a bit unclear.
Astral Faery:
I really like it. I think your errors are minor and don't detract from the story. I read a lot of stories from people who aren't native English speakers, so a few mistakes here and there don't bother me, as long as I can understand the concept of the story. So, I'm not going to correct anything, I'm just going to enjoy it. :) I like Alex and sympathize with her position. I love the dreams/memories, because that gives us a mystery as to how things got to be like they are now. Your pictures are expressive and fun to look at. Nice job! I hope you decide to continue.
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