I...I...I'm speechless.

LOL, great job Astral!

Lol, such a great story. )

The family is so cute!!

Such a great story, wow. It didnt really seem choppy or sloppy. =))

Such a great chapter )

Agreed with steelguy, we are a quite amusing group here .

Lol, good luck come summertime and like steel said, dont stress! We'll be here for you patiently awaiting the cliff

Wow, great update as usual! I can't wait to find out what happens.

Time to go back to the edge of the cliff.

Lol, i love it!

Same here, I hope you feel better! And you do deserve a break!

It almost looks like she's the Grim Reaper itself...wow O.o

But that's still cool. I only know english. But im trying to learn Spanish at the moment :]]

Oh wow, that's pretty cool :]]

i agree with Astral again And you're welcome. Your story is very good and it'd be a shame to NOT compliment it =]]. I can't think of a single bad thing to say about it, it's that good.

Keep up the really great work!

awww it's like fate brought them together again.

Wonderful update!!

I agree 100% with Astral, it is VERY interesting and it's such a great story.

Oooh, great update!!

Love it!

Lol =]]

Excellent job on this Astral