*Watches the game to make sure nobody cheats/steals anyones cookies* =]]

It's been over 3 hours since I read that update and I'm STILL shocked, I just can't get over the fact that Gertie is dead and Tim might be, at least temporarily.

Wow...not many stories leave me this paralyzed and shocked really, really, REALLY good job!

Have I mentioned that I'm hooked and love this story? LOL I think I have, but it wouldn't hurt to say it again, would it? =]]

First of all, I can't believe Gertie is dead!! She was such a sweet old lady

Tim...can't...be...dead....can he?...but he can't, he's the main character....but...but...but....wow.

Im on the edge of my seat, great job Astral!!

*sits back down by the cliff edge to wait for another update*

*steals some of ImpishParody's cookies*  No problem, Astral,  your story is just so great I had to comment it from the beginning, I couldn't keep my mouth shut LOL *bites into a cookie and goes to sit by the cliff edge*

Oh wow, Arthur sounds like a pig! But it's a really good story!

Oooh, I cant wait! I love your story, as I said earlier, Astral! It's so unique =]]

Yummy, cookies! And dont worry steel, we wont let you fall down the cliff...or will we? j/k We'll make sure you stay up here with us =]]

Wow, this is really good. Keep up the good work

Ooh, I can't wait to read it! =]]

Oh, and im bringing extra coffee in case SecretAgentZero doesnt share

Ooh, shiny! LOL

Now im scared LOL, but i cant wait to read the next update--cliffhanger or not! =]]

3 words: wow, wow, wow!

I thought Tim would've been stronger than that, but what kind of a story would it be if he just beat Shirra right then and there?

Anyways, lovin your story Astral!

I'm glad to be back

O.o Wow. I've missed alot.

But anyways, I just got caught up and...

wow...

LOL, Great story Astral!

I still love it

Oh wow, just read that last chapter, and it was simply amazing!!! Love it! =]]