Devilfish! Yer back! BRILLIANT!
I was getting kind of sick of reading the Million Dollar Challenge over and over again anyway, 'bout time.

Awesome! I can't believe I didn't see this. :O That's great that Jai is coming out of his shell. And Anju knows now that not all men are bad! I look forward to the next update!

1. Do you depressed or upset/sad as often as____ many times a week:
   a. 0 days
   b. 1-2 day
   c. 3-4 days
   d. 5-6 days
2. On a regular basic do your friends talk about hurting themselves?
    a. Yes
    b. no
3. Do you physically hurt yourself?
   a. yes
   b. no
4. If answered "yes" to number 3, why do you hurt yourself? If "no"
   move on to question 5.
5. Do you eat to comfort/cheer yourself up?
  a. Yes
   b. No
6. Does your family have a history of mental health issues?
   a. yes- little to none.
   b. yes- mild
   c. yes- many members
   d. no- none
7. Did you grow up in a unsafe neighborhood?
   a. yes
   b. no
8. Did you feel threaten a family member growing up?
   a. yes
   c. no
9. Were you sexual abused?
   a. yes
   b. no
10. Do you starve yourself?
   a. no
   b. yes, why
11. Did you grow up in a single parent home?
   a. yes
   b. no
12. Do you believe that you have a emotional issue?
   a. yes
   b. no

14. Was a parent(s) an alcoholic?
   a. yes
  b. no
15. Has a family member ever commit/attempted suicide?
   a. yes, they were closely related to me (parent, sibling)
   b. yes, they were a distant relative (cousin, aunt, grandparent etc)
        c. none

A "Stranger" I get the title. Soo, still more secrets to be uncovered! That was great, looking forward to the next chapter!

 


Thats all I can say.

OOOH YES! Just what this forum needs!  I can't wait!

Woah, I missed that update! Wonder why, I usually follow this story with bated breath. Great update! And now we know for sure Johnny's true colours!

Seriously? Omg, I had no idea she could look so pretty. What skintone is it?? 

Melanie's so prettyful. I like Alex too. Yayyy for new characters! 
Well, I...I've said this in, like, every post...but...teeenssiiiooon! I love your props, and wallpapers and everything, you must put loads of effort into them! :O

Mystery substance... :O Say no to drugs!
You introduce a new mystery every chapter.  Sooo muuuuch teeenssssiiiiooon! I  mean, tension!

So there was a baby?? The plot gets more and more mysterious every time! O:
Great chapter.

Thank you so much, much easier to read now!
That was a cute chapter.

Uhm...I have really bad eyesight and those paragraphs didn't help at all.
Maybe try this - everytime someone says something, put it on a new line.
For example...
"Ellie, hey, are you alright?" Lola asked, waving her left hand in front of my glasses. I brushed back my unkept caramel hair and huffed my bangs out of my eyes. "I'm fine, Lola, what's up?" Lola's face fell as she brushed my hair out of my face. "You've been standing there for five minutes, Els. One of your eyes rolled back." I blinked, getting my eye proper again.
could be changed to...

"Ellie, hey, are you alright?" Lola asked, waving her left hand in front of my glasses. I brushed back my unkept caramel hair and huffed my bangs out of my eyes.
"I'm fine, Lola, what's up?" Lola's face fell as she brushed my hair out of my face.
"You've been standing there for five minutes, Els. One of your eyes rolled back." I blinked, getting my eye proper again.
"There. Let's go, then." 
"Wait," Lola sighed, gripping my shoulder. I turned.
"Ellie, you look paler, and those purple rings around your eyes look darker. Do you feel ill? You're fourteen and only weigh ninety pounds. I'm worried about you." I shook my head.
"I'm okay, really. It's just all the cramming for the maths test."

This makes it A LOT easier to read. Especially for me.
It's a great story otherwise. i look forward to new updates.

I've had a look around and I couldn't find any mods that stopped the snoring sounds sims make when they sleep.
Can anyone help me? Thank you in advance.

The Plot Thickens! 
Deborah is very pretty!