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Author Topic: *~I'm Already There*~ Updated for rewrite 1  (Read 18950 times)
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« Reply #15 on: August 13, 2009, 09:48:46 pm »

well I wanted to get the prologue over this, since I am so impatience. off to go take some pics, and then I will have the first OFFICIAL chapter up. Cheesy the best part is about to come! (check my thread, I'll put some tot pics... **whistles**)
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« Reply #16 on: August 14, 2009, 02:49:55 am »

haha, double posting again...

                         

So my name is Chase Kadence, and I am six years old.



My sisters, Rosie, Belle, and Izzy are five, three, and one.



My mom's name is Kacey and my dad's name is Sam, but usually my daddy is away at war.



Last week I fell out of the big tree in the backyard, that's why I have two broken arms. I also have one cracked rib, but you cant see that when I have a shirt on.

"Hello?" I said into the phone
"Hi. Chase?"
"Dad?"
"I miss you buddy." he told me.
"Daddy when you coming home?"
he coughed, then paused.



"I'm already there. I'm the sunshine in your hair, so don't forget that Chase, just keep me in your prayers, okay? I love you buddy, and, I'm already there."
I stood silent listening.



"I'm there Chase, I'm there."
"I'm with you too daddy. I'm your sunshine too!" I laughed.




Mom walked in. "Chase, Is that your dad?"
"Yep," she took the phone from me.
"When are you coming home?" She asked him.
"He's already here!" I told her, walking away, but she didn't hear me.



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Later that night, I sat on the edge of my bed, in just my rib brace and a pair of pants.



"Chase" Mom said "Are you all right? Does your back hurt?"
"Nah, It's not so bad."



"Are you sure? Your doctor's appointment is tomorrow,"
"I know, It's on the calendar."
"Yes, it is, well, Just remember, You have to wake up early, so get some sleep okay?"
"Okay, I will, promise."
"Goodnight, love you, see you in the morning when the sun comes up," She told me.
"Night love you."



I woke up at two AM. I had been having a dream, well, a nightmare really, in which my dad had died. I walked out into the hallway, and I didn't feel good at all.









I was about to knock on mom's door, when,




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« Reply #17 on: August 14, 2009, 11:02:36 am »

It's good that Sam and Kasey stayed together and such. I hope daddy doesn't die for the kid's sake. He seems to really like his dad. Poor little fella.
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« Reply #18 on: August 14, 2009, 11:57:26 am »

Thank you Senko, we'll see where the story takes us...  Wink
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« Reply #19 on: August 14, 2009, 11:15:29 pm »

well I really hate to double post but I have the next chapter ready so,
           


When I woke up that morning I found myself lying in a hospital bed.



Just then a doctor walked in. "Are you okay Chase?" He asked
"Yah, but why am I here?"
"Because  you blacked out, and became unconscious."
"H-h-how?"
"Were not quite sure. Were looking into that right now."



Then I noticed my mother, in her uniform, had walked in. "Hi Chase."
"H-hi,"
"Rosie has been wanting to see you,"
"really?"
"Yah, here, I'll go get her."



She walked down the hall and then back again with Rosie and Belle.



"Chase sick?" Belle asked.
"Yah, Chase sick," I told her "Very sick."
Rosie looked worried.
"Chase are you gonna be otay?"
"Yah, I'll be okay Rosie."



She smiled.
She sat on the bed and we talked for a long time.
Belle fell asleep and was lying in the stroller along with little Izzy.



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That day they did a few tests, first they gave me an MRI, I got to wear video goggles and the made me sit still.



Then they took a couple x-rays


I was then taken into another room where they did some more tests.



and then they pulled out a large needle. Again my stomach did a back flip and I fell backward onto the cold hard table.



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« Reply #20 on: August 15, 2009, 12:10:05 am »

Man I know how the poor kid feels. I have had to get all those tests done, and I get all flimsy like that when the needles come out. Good chapter, hope the little dude is okay.
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« Reply #21 on: August 15, 2009, 12:15:15 am »

thank you, and I'm already onto chapter two right now! so you will get to find out soon!  Cheesy
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« Reply #22 on: August 29, 2009, 04:40:41 pm »

okay, well, I can't exactly add the pics yet, seeing as I have no game, but, I CAN post just the regular story if you'd like, so just say the word and I'll have it up!
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« Reply #23 on: August 29, 2009, 05:22:49 pm »

Great story looking forward in reading the rest of this story Wink
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« Reply #24 on: August 29, 2009, 07:10:32 pm »

Why thank you Pierre, shall I post the next chapter, minus the pics until I get them?  Cheesy
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« Reply #25 on: August 29, 2009, 07:15:37 pm »

your welcome and its a great story Wink
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« Reply #26 on: August 29, 2009, 11:02:12 pm »

AHHH NEEDLES lol. i dont have thet problem Cheesy
poor kidd
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« Reply #27 on: August 29, 2009, 11:03:52 pm »

yes, still wondering about posting the next chapter, minus pics...  Undecided
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« Reply #28 on: August 29, 2009, 11:10:03 pm »

oh lol, i dont think you should i like the pics. Cheesy
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« Reply #29 on: August 29, 2009, 11:11:48 pm »

Well then you have to wait a whole two weeks!  shocked
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