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Author Topic: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes!  (Read 4022 times)
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kenji
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« on: November 16, 2006, 06:52:07 pm »

Hello,

I wanted to share a story, Its about a group of people, who become "cursed", or even born with their well gift. I got the inspiration form NBC's Heroes. I going to share it as chapters, tell me what you think, I'd love to hear your suggestion/comments. Okay this story is going to be posted at random times, and when ever I get a chance.

~kenji

Enjoy! :happy1:

Season 1
Chapter 1: Helen Schmidt
Chapter 2: Days Ahead
Chapter 3: 3 weeks earlier
Chapter 4: 2 months ago
Chapter 5: TBA
Chapter 6: TBA
Chapter 7: TBA
Chapter 8: Station
Chapter 9: United
Chapter 10: The Dream
Chapter 11: Reality
Season 2
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"I know what I need to do with my life now. Life is so precious, so beautiful and to be able to protect that, that's an amazing gift.
-Lana Lang

"Then they dragged you in here kicking and screaming, because you claimed you saw a man with super powers swipe a bullet out of thin air...."
-Lex Luthor
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« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2006, 07:02:26 pm »

I can't wait to start reading it!
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« Reply #2 on: November 16, 2006, 07:13:31 pm »

Waiting with bated breath.
 
If you need a beta or any help at all, please don't hesitate to PM me.
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« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2006, 07:19:14 pm »

Location: Huh?? Time: 8:00 pm
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Two best friends are driving to school for the big basketball game.
Helen and Sasha took a wrong way, and became lost. Unaware that their lives will be forever changed.

Sasha: Are you sure you know where you're going?

Helen: Yes I'm sure.

Sasha: Come on Helen, we're going to be late.

Helen: Chill out, we will be their on time.



An hour passes, and the two friends are still lost. Now frustrated Sasha begins.

Sasha: That's it Helen, forget about the game. It's probably over by now.

Helen: I'm too much worried about the game, I'm worried about getting out of here.




The girls drive down a dark street.

Sasha: Whats that ahead?

Helen: Whats what?

Sasha: No! Helen! Stop the car!

Helen Why?......Oh my gosh!!!!!!!



As the car falls off the cliff the girls scream. The car immediately bursts into flames Killing both of the girls. After the fire dies out, Helen awakens. As she gets up she finds Sasha, dead!

Helen: Oh no Sasha!!!!! Why? No, this isn't what happened, why am I.....













She runs off. She reaches a lake, and sees her true form.

Helen: Ahhh!! a monster! Is this me?





Many things are unclear to Helen, but her story will unfold.


To Be Continued....




 

« Last Edit: November 16, 2006, 08:55:19 pm by kenji336 » Logged

"I know what I need to do with my life now. Life is so precious, so beautiful and to be able to protect that, that's an amazing gift.
-Lana Lang

"Then they dragged you in here kicking and screaming, because you claimed you saw a man with super powers swipe a bullet out of thin air...."
-Lex Luthor
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« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2006, 07:32:05 pm »

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Waiting with bated breath.
 
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I second that. I'm happy to test run anything for you.
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« Reply #5 on: November 16, 2006, 09:28:39 pm »

Looks good Kenji!  Can't wait to see more.

~ Syn
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« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2006, 04:37:20 pm »

looks cool
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« Reply #7 on: December 22, 2006, 04:13:21 pm »

Look out for chapter two! Who are these people, well in the next chapter more monsters will be descovered. All leading up to chapter two's devastating finale, A monster will die. The new storyline will keep you on edge. :happy1:



~kenji :lol:
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"I know what I need to do with my life now. Life is so precious, so beautiful and to be able to protect that, that's an amazing gift.
-Lana Lang

"Then they dragged you in here kicking and screaming, because you claimed you saw a man with super powers swipe a bullet out of thin air...."
-Lex Luthor
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« Reply #8 on: December 23, 2006, 01:07:50 pm »

ooh looks wonderfull!  Looking forward to this.
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« Reply #9 on: January 07, 2007, 01:14:24 am »

Love this!
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