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« on: February 11, 2008, 02:52:58 pm »



















And so ends my sucktacular prologue. Less angsty characters*, coming soon (um, maybe**) to a forum near you! ...I mean, here.

*Is it possible for me to write about non-angsty characters? Hah, this should be a challenge!

**Followthrough, don't fail me now...! T_T
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« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2008, 03:22:00 pm »

this sounds promising Cheesy. I want to read more, at least. (I really like cartoon-ish sims stories Cheesy)
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« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2008, 09:55:16 pm »

It think it starts off with a pretty good bang.  Your words flow nicely and are set at an even pace, which would make reading this story enjoyable.  I love the warped stairs picture, too.  Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2008, 11:58:02 pm »

*makes mental note to read this sometime in the future*
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« Reply #4 on: February 12, 2008, 06:38:02 pm »

Very nice start! I love the last two frames, with the transition from his world to the fantasy world.
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« Reply #5 on: February 13, 2008, 07:06:27 pm »

Chapter 1--The Very De-Monologued Chapter!













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« Reply #6 on: February 13, 2008, 07:09:08 pm »

Drrrrrrrumroll, please! Introducing, my favorite character ever in existence cause awesomness hullo!!!1!oneone! =D





















End of Chapter 1. =D
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« Reply #7 on: February 13, 2008, 10:24:42 pm »

Very nice!  Fantastic settings.  Your pictures are very well done.  And I love your storytelling style.  Looking forward to more!
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« Reply #8 on: February 13, 2008, 11:14:22 pm »

This is looking really good Cheesy Not to mention weird, which makes it even better in my books Wink
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