Little Fire Burning (Ch. 85: Till death do us part *23.Apr 16*)

[kstradleigh]

TheRaven, you said a while ago that there were a lot more chapters coming. Will that mean we still have a lot to go, or are we coming near the end?

[thedragon]

Just another great chapter from raven.

Keep up the good work my love....

And after what I know kstradleigh, there is over 30 chapters in total. So I believe that we have much more to look forward to...

But if Aidan survives.... hm.... that I guess we only have to wait and see (and no I don't know what will happen, she won't tell me nor let me read the rest of the story either).. So I have to wait like every one else here to see what will happen...

But anyway I love this story more and more for each chapter...

[Theraven]

that's right, Thedragon (everything... except that it's 32 chapters - for now, at least - and not 30... )

[kstradleigh]

Thirty-Two?
*slips into happy land*
Yay! This story..... must....never....end.....until........magical.....32...

[Eimz08]

right i'm crying my eyes out here kill them boys now her hurt him

[elpemmy]

I just read the whole thing from start to finish.
O Em Gee.
A) You're such an awesome writer, I want to steal your skills!
B) Poor, poor Aidan.
Where did you get Aidan and Tony's hair? lol
This family has been through such a lot. I hope Aidan makes it out okay.
Please don't kill him!

[Theraven]

thanks for the comments, everyone
and you just have to read on if you want to know how it ends...

their hairs are Raon 16 and 17 (and that's the last time I say that...)

[Madison-Simple-As-That]

Ooo. Love their hair! I can't wait for the next one, hopefully Aidan is okay.

Good job theraven.

Keep it up!

[Theraven]

Thirty-Two?
*slips into happy land*
Yay! This story..... must....never....end.....until........magical.....32...

maybe even 42...
you know - the answer to life, the universe and... everything
(though, I don't know if my story ideas reaches that far...:happy8:)

[kstradleigh]

Oh, I can't stop laughing at the number 42!
It's mainly because my english teacher (who was a big fan of Hitchhiker's Guide) held a pop quiz one day, and I put "42" for every answer. (She ended up not recording them because so many people flunked it) When she looked at mine, she started laughing like crazy. Ahhh, good times.

[Tenshii~Akari]

Finally, after several months of putting it off, and today alone server overload issues hindering progress, I have finally caught up on the progress of the Brooks family.  Superb story so far!  :smile bi:

Those little knuckle-headed hoodlums should've been busted, expelled, and sent straight to "Camp Juvi" as soon as that teacher came and saw what happened, especially concerning his condition and all... (heck, in fact, where was the prinicpal and the 5-0 when you needed them?)... poor Lily seems to be the only one on the school grounds with some sense in that situation, and I'm glad she's a very bright and sensible little girl for her age.  Had it have been me in that type of situation, I'd have gone beyond berserk on everyone there, so much respect to her on handling it as best as she could.  :lol:  

And at the rate it was going, poor Aidan wouldn't have had a chance of surviving... all of those boys should rot for being so rock-headed.  I just hope he's going to pull through alright... :bawl:

[katiexbug5]

ohmygodd =[

[Madison-Simple-As-That]

I can't wait for the next one..

[imaeatyaface]

*gasps* Thank you, theraven, for making me cry again with your stories! :bawl: Seriously, you ever consider being a writer? Cause your stories are great. Anyway, send those boys to jail, if Aidan dies...Please make him live, for a pixel boy he's sweet looking. :smile:

[Madison-Simple-As-That]

Calico I couldn't agree with you more.