What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13

[tophatdan]

well it may be your first story you wrote but its the first i read and its pretty good, lol, great job so far

[SimKween]

Say what now?
“Er, uh, Jake? Can I talk to you in the kitchen?”
“Sure.”
I closed the door to the kitchen.
“What the hell do you think this is? A hotel? You didn’t even tell me you had a daughter!” I yelled.

“I’ll explain if you just calm down and listen.”


“This had better be a good explanation!”

“When I graduated from college, I was at a bar celebrating. Naturally, I got drunk. I was drunk when I met Jill’s mom. We went back to her place.”
I scoffed.
“Whatever. Look, I didn’t know I had a daughter until two days ago. I got a phone call from the hospital that said Jill’s mom had died from an overdose of drugs. I couldn’t just leave Jill all alone with no parents! Please let her stay here Lex, please!” he begged.
“Oh fine.” I said. “Besides, Kista will have someone to play with now. But what about out other suprise?”
“I’ll take care of that.”
Jake walked back into the room. “Okay girls, go in the basement, we have one more suprise!”
The girls went downstars

Jake brought out a ball of balck fur.
“Girls, meet Skori.” he said.

The girls squealed with delight. Kista ran and scooped him up.

“Hi little kitty!” Kista cooed.
“Aw! He’s so cute!” Jill said.

I got used to having Jill around. It gave Kista someone to play with.

They became the best of friends.

They even told secrets to each other. How cute!

At first, I thought she was going to be just another mouth to feed, but she turned out to be a sweet little girl that we all loved.

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[Mooncat]

This is sooo awesome!  I can't wait for more!

Update soon!

[SimKween]

Thanks!

[Medagic]

I can feel it... There's another twist coming!  It's too peaceful...
Great job!

[kristi8589]

WRITE. MORE. NOW!!!!!!!

[SimKween]

lol. I will.

[Astral Faery]

I really like that picture at the end of chapter 4, after Jake just sort of springs his daughter on Lex.  And her reaction to the situation is quite realistic.  Jake should have said something first.  I mean, I know the guy was in a bind, but that wasn't right.  But now, with a new kitty, the family has grown quite large.  I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

[Skori]

Oh, yay. You named the cat after me. I hope you're not trying to imply anything. . .

But I really like it so far! I usually don't like soap operas, but you've got me hooked.

[SimKween]

Thanks guys. I really appreciate the comments you've given me. But we're renovating  our house and it's hard for me to get on the computer with my parents always telling me to do stuff for them. But I do not give up on sims! The new chapters will be up soon and warning: you're in for a shocker later in the story!

[SimKween]

Months flew by, Kista and Jill became the best of friends. One night, they were asleep early, so Jake and I had a nice dinner. We were talking when he slid a blue box over to me.

“Omigod!” I whispered.

“Lexie, after we graduated, I never stopped thinking about you. I loved you and I still do. Will you do the honor of marrying me?”
“Of course I will!” I cried. I tried on the ring. It was beautiful.


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We married a month later, just as night fell.







And what would a wedding be without cake?





The girls couldn’t be happier to be sisters.  Kista finally had a dad and Jill had a new mom.

Life was perfect.

Or was it?

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I'll update ASAP!

[SimKween]

I can feel it... There's another twist coming!  It's too peaceful...
Great job!

Thanks. And you're right! It's a super shocking twist! Hold on to your hat!

[Skori]

I'm getting anxious 'cause I know something big is gonna happen. WRITE MORE!!

[SimKween]

Here's a preview of Chapter 7:

The day Kista and Jill turned into teenagers, was the day we had new company. Our newly bound family woke up to the beeping of a moving van.
Bleep! Bleep! Bleep! Bleep!
Kista raced to the livingroom window, with Jill not far behind.
"Omigod! There's new kids moving in next door our age!" Kista said.
"No way! Where?" Jill replied.
"There! A boy and girl!"
"I see them!"
"The boy is so hot!"
"Let's go meet them!"
They raced out the door.

[hiiammregg]

wow
 
great story!!!
 
hurry with the next chapter!!!!