Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
xxJessicaxx:
Wow, it took me a while to read the whole story, but great job! :D
Elven_Song:
Awesome story! I luv it! :D
The whole idea was a bit confusing at first, figuring out who all the characters were and that, but now it's really getting interesting. Keep going! ^^
starlucid:
This is a very good story It takes awhile to get a hang of all the action but once you do your hooked!
vita4all:
Umacee, Jessica0410, Elven_Song, and Starlucid - Hugs for your feedback yesterday!
Readers in General - For a couple hours yesterday, I apologize for a proof-reading error. Remember the chapter where Ronnie was sweating over Cheena dumping him and having the abortion? A few times I mistakingly used the name Chilli (Raheem's girl), instead of Cheena. This was undoubtably confusing. Sorry!
Elven - the point your made about it taking awhile to figure out who all the characters are was helpful. I'm working on a cast of characters photo-thingy for the beginning of the story. This feedback was valuable - and helped me catch the proof-reading error. Thank you!
Veckah:
I just found this story today Vita and I must say, WOW. Truly fantastic.
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