Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
Monnie66:
I Love this story u should make a youtube account but i think pics are better for storytelling but keep up the good work
Tenshii~Akari:
Now I see it. I do sense a little resentment from Junior towards his mom. (And of course his dad, as he's the catalyst for the situation.) I really don't see how she could let Raheem "discipline" him like that, and break up with him over another woman. I would've broken the relationship off the first time my kid got hurt.
It's amazing how many eyes Satan has, isn't it? I wouldn't have expected... well, scratch that. I should've expected that he'd have someone tailing really close to Raven. I'm sure it's partly through her lawyer, though, but I wonder who else... ;)
vita4all:
Monnie66 - I'm honored that you've been a member at inseminator for nearly a year, and left your first post on my thread. Thank you.
Tenshii - As we've PM'd privately, people who are used to being dominated in relationships often don't perceive occassional abuses of power as reason to terminate them, particularly if love enters the equation. Their lover or parent's behavior is seen basically as normal with a few anomalies that overlooked. Think of any boss you've ever had the bad luck to work for, but you remain in that job despite the occassional misery he or she dishes out, even though you can find a new job with some effort. The familiar feels safer than the unknown. Abuse in relationships also make it more intense, and that intensity is confused for love. This is especially true with children, who also, like Junior, don't reveal all that has happened to them even to the other parent, like the rooftop scene. Secrets find fertile ground in this garden of madness...
Elven_Song:
With these last parts of 'Freedom Ain't Free', I finally really understand where Junior stands with Raheem. It's interesting that despite everything he's done Satan still has so many people who do love him. And also how he somehow makes you feel secure but scared at the same time. It really gives a lot of insight on him and all the people who associate with him, especially his kids and their moms. It would be really scary, just to know someone like that, who you can't help but love and hate at the same time.
Also, I loved your pictures in this last chapter. Very well set up and the editing definitely makes a difference. I like it how some of them almost look like puzzles being put together.
LissaS:
Man I don't even know where to start, like eleven song said it's like a puzzle and I love puzzles, so I'm slowly but surly piecing this together. I see and understand where juniors coming from, he already knows how his father is and how certain people roll. Although I don't think he should punish Rita for whatever he thinks she might do since he knows how persuasive they are and sneaky. It'll be like her getting caught in a trap that she as no knowledge of cause she's so sheltered and innocent and evil seems to like to prive on the innocent . As far as his father they all said it^^^^^^. Satan is the father of trickery and lies and deceit ect..
The pics were sooooo good and I meant to tell you this before but I love how you use other pics you used earlier to refresh our memory and let us see it a different way. As in you used the pic to tell one side of the story then later on use it again to tell a different side of the story. I LOVE IT!
YESSS Ronnie's coming back can't wait to see what happens!!!!!!!
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