Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
vita4all:
Thanks for the very thoughtful and insightful comments, ElvenSong, Moon and Diesel, and thank you readers who are enjoying the story but haven't left a comment.
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From Diesel: what might have been easily mistaken for assault and battery can actually be a display of love and concern in the hood...lol.
Agreed, although I think you have to grow up around it to fully understand it.
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From Diesel: ...Junior still got madd love for that man.
Yep, and many abused kids do, 'cause your mama and daddy is all you've got growing up... but it's mixed with hate, as you see, which intensifies the relationship.
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From Moon22T: Junior ...knows how his father is and how certain people roll...
Rita's so sheltered and innocent and evil likes to prey on the innocent ...Satan is the father of trickery and lies and deceit...
Yes, and notice how Junior chose someone totally different from his family and the people he's grown up around. As he said in the chapter where he met her, "Jump with me Rita. Let's do life differently." He's got a little baggage, though.
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From Elven_song: (Raheem) somehow makes you feel secure but scared at the same time. It really gives a lot of insight on him and all the people who associate with him, especially his kids and their moms. It would be really scary, just to know someone like that, who you can't help but love and hate at the same time.
There are many people like this, and they not only lead their family, but some lead nations. And of course, Lucifer, God's most beautiful angel, may have said, "it's better to rule in Hell than serve in Heaven."
Been in the Pirate Contest, guys, and took a break (some of you know this already.) This took up far more time than I imagined, and will be my last one for a long time, even though I've enjoyed it. I just finished R1 and will try to get the Ronnie and other chapters this weekend.
Here's a pic of my pirate, and he's a gangsta, too, who changed jobs. :pirate: Swing by and read his mini-story. It's good. And no, that's not Ronnie in one of the photos; he's a relative y'all never heard about.
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Tenshii~Akari:
:drool: *heads to check out the contest*
Man I hate my game for not working right now... I sure would've loved to be in the same contest as him!
vita4all:
Whopee! I kept my deadline and have this chapter ready for you on schedule!
Thank you readers and fans for your comments and patience.
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please let me know how you like the story or chapter.
New Chapter Update!
Ch. 73 Continued - Freedom Ain't Free - Part 5 - Ronnie
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7586 on 6/21/2007
8076 as of right now
Tenshii~Akari:
Jamal's shirt = Priceless. :laugh:
What Ronnie did at the end is enough to mess with anyone. He certainly pulled the unexpected with everybody in the cell by telling them to show Jason mercy. I'm so proud of him! :bawl:
Veckah:
*Cheers* Yes, Ronnie did the right thing, I'm so proud of him. *giddy* Excellent update as always Vita.
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