Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom

[LissaS]

OOOO I like how this is turing out so far. I wonder...will Ronnie and Raven or Cheena patch things up again? Or is he gonna finally turn 100% gay (please no..it's always the real cute ones) and stay with chan? *sighs* Well we'll see happens. There's ALOT of downlow brothas out here........... which sucks big time. Oh well................... I'm so curious as to how Kareem will turn out as soon as he gets better. Oh goodness a thought jus came to my mind, why am I seeing Ronnie and Chan getting together then adopting Kareem? Man I can't wait for the next chapter

[Veckah]

Vita....I love your writing, the way you are able to draw me in to the story and make it real. I can honestly tell you I get excited when I see that Murda has been updated.

[xoJessi]

Amazing updates Vita!! The direction your taking this story is really suspensful and exciting, I can't wait for your next updates and I really can't predict whats going to happen next. Great job.

[Tenshii~Akari]

I just read through all of the story so far.  I must say I'm definitely hooked!  I'll be looking out for the future updates!  

[antitheftmilk]

I really enjoyed the backstory to Raheem's life. It explains alot about why he is the way he is. This is a really good story! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

[Veckah]

*sigh* Oh Ronnie.

Amazing once again Vita.

[vita4all]

Elven_Song, Applekisses, TenshiiAkari12, Moon22T, Xoxok9, Antitheftmilk, Diesel, Angelyne, Veckah. Phoenix_rising, and those who PM'd or emailed me and readers in general, thank you for your comments, compliments, support, thoughts and critiques in your enjoyment of the last few chapters.

I posted a new chapter after midnight today, called Descent Into Hedonism.

Heh-heh, Veckah, I see you shaking your head over Ronnie in that one.

Growing up is a b*tch, ain't it?

Hint for those scratching their heads:
Babies don't try to be heroes and they fall a lot before they get the hang of walking, especially when their footing is slippery. Young adults in general, and Ronnie particular, aren't any different.

Heh-heh.

::smilieiforgetwhi:: Readers: Find New Chapter Updates on Page 1, Post 1,
never at the end of this thread.::smilieiforgetwhi::

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[LissaS]

AAAwwww Ronnie Ronnie Ronnie *sighs* Again please don't make me cry.

[vita4all]

Hi Friends and New Readers,

Our favorite gangsta, Ronnie, fell hard in the last chapter, Descent Into Hedonism,
disappointing some of you and himself.

Here's a new chapter for you enjoy and think about,
Ronnie: In My Descent, I Discovered A Different Shade of the Color Purple.

If you've ever seen or heard of the old, fairly famous movie,
The Color Purple, you'll instantly have an idea what the title suggests.

And as always, thank you for your support and comments. They are always appreciated.

::smilieiforgetwhi:: Find my new chapter on Page 1, Post 1,
never at the end of this thread. ::smilieiforgetwhi::

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[Veckah]

Vita I would love to give some kind of grandiose speech about how wonderful this is, but at the moment, words leave me. Amazing.

[kevinlipimp]

Your story is blowing my mind, from the history, to the way Ronnie is finally sinking into drugs,to the last chapter on incest. Just amazing. Thanks for keeping it real.

[Tenshii~Akari]

Poor Jessie... so deep into her problems that she can't even truly admit them.  :icon9:

I'll be looking forward to seeing Ronnie jump his current hurdle with guilt and grief.  :angel:

[LissaS]

WOW that was deep, aawww jessie.....man this is sooo good

[vita4all]

Hey Friends and New Readers!

First, thanks again to those for taking a moment to leave a comment since my last chapter update a few days ago. For those who don't know, I PM people a private thank you whenever I get a comment; it makes it more personal. Thanks also for your PMs and emails.

Veckah - Sooo glad you're enjoying the story. Comments and PMs like yours make me smile and wanna keep writing.

TenshiAkari12 - Re: A Different Shade of the Color Purple... You hit the target on your point about Jesse - so deep in her problems that she doesn't even know it. This chapter on emotional incest took a lot of thought for me to write.

Moon 22T - Yeah girl, I agree. It was deep, and it happens a lot.

Kevinlipimp - I appreciate you're appreciation that Ronnie is finally sinking into drugs himself. Nearly all dealers do. I wouldn't be honest to keep him immune from this, so yeah, I'm keeping the story real. That's why it's so dark and gritty. Ronnie (and the others) is painfully human and vulnerable to the stress and temptations that cause most dealers to eventually sink.

We'll see soon if Ronnie and others can swim against the current. Bring your lifejacket. Heh-heh.

New Blockbuster Chapter Today!

Kareem - Even My Doctors Wish I Was Dead

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Come see how misunderstanding, miscommunication, and problems in the system creates the drama we call problems, and that the underclass and the unfortunate call life.

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[LissaS]

*Real deep sigh* Kareem.........