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« on: April 12, 2007, 08:40:59 am »

This is my first story.  Commits, constructive criticism, and suggestions welcome.

Chapter 1 - New beginnings























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« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2007, 03:26:26 pm »

Good start, It sounds very interesting.
Please update soon!
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« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2007, 07:49:09 am »

Chpt2--Adulthood begins























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« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2007, 01:45:38 pm »

This looks really good! ^^ I can't wait to see what's going to happen to these girls.
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« Reply #4 on: April 15, 2007, 09:48:22 am »

Chapter 3--Celebration















Chapter 4 - A new relationship?































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« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2007, 01:04:18 pm »

Chapter 5--Suspicious Minds











Chapter 6--Relationship builds





















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« Reply #6 on: April 20, 2007, 08:27:01 am »

Chapter7-Tragedy begins













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« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2007, 08:53:29 am »

I'm not sure if anyone is reading this or not.   If you are thank you and enjoy.


Chapter 8 - Love begins?









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« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2007, 09:55:58 pm »

eep. this is good. =D
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« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2007, 10:38:53 am »

Thanks for rating my story! *Happy happy dance*

Chapter 9-Protective Interferance























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« Reply #10 on: May 01, 2007, 08:32:36 am »

Chapter10-Desperately searching













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« Reply #11 on: May 03, 2007, 07:26:38 am »

Chapter 11-Moving forward























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« Reply #12 on: May 04, 2007, 07:42:27 am »

Chapter 12-Pieces begin to fit














Chapter 13-Success!









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« Reply #13 on: May 05, 2007, 02:39:40 pm »

Chapter 14



























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« Reply #14 on: May 07, 2007, 04:53:25 pm »

Short update this time...sorry.  Hope someone is enjoying this.



Chapter 15-Deep Suspicions





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