a P e r f e c t S t r a n g e r - new chapter up
lilroselou:
i feel so sorry for harri lol shes a lovely character, well the first one that died lmao the new one has a diff skintone so i think i might redo her with a norm maxis one
lilroselou:
sorry again for no pictures but i have fixed it now and so the next updates will come with images, sorry if this one is a bit sad. please leave any comments and feedback as it makes it all worthwhile.
It had only been 2 weeks since she had agreed to give marcia and carl her baby but already marcia would not stop fussing around her, the night after she agreed to it marcia started talking about the price that she would pay for it - like a toy or a doll. Harri kept doubting her decision but it was too late, she’d already said yes. She couldn’t change her mind now, let down so many people, most of all Carl.
She was actually quite looking forward to being a mum, but she needed the money. She couldn’t afford to look after the baby and the new money was given on the premise she give her baby away.
There was something missing. She needed to tell the father, as irresponsible as he was he was still the child’s dad.
She slipped out the door at breakfast and although The couple heard her, they didn’t worry.
She wandered to the bus stop and from there, caught the bus into town.
Wandering up the high street she felt guilty, what if he had changed his mind like she had, maybe it could be her excuse to keep the baby - but there was shock, as she waited outside the arranged meeting point she saw him, coming forward, but not alone.
On his arm a slightly chubby blond, with eyebrows shaped so that they always look pissed off, she was intimidating. Although feisty, Harri was small and petite. She was also pregnant.
“Dan?” harri questioned as the dark haired looker turned around.
“hey har.” he said facing her and smiling awkwardly “I need to talk to you.” said harri, Dan already full aware of the baby which harri was starting to show. “erm could you jus leave us alone for a min babes.” he said turning to his blonde as she rolled her eyes and walked away.
“so what’s up.” he cheeked
“Dan, its about the baby.” harri replied
“wha abaat it cos Y’kna I got a girlfren naa” he defended
Harri stepped closer and held his arms “Dan I need ya, I didn’t have no where to go so I found a couple who’d let me stay and they can’t have kids and they’ve asked me for mine - ours.”
“what?” Dan asked
“well they’ve offered me money to keep the baby and I said yes because I cant afford to keep it anyway and you don’t want it and they do!” she cried
“well how much do I get?” he said cautiously
“what? You don’t get any of the money!” she said angered.
“well its mine too innit.” he shrugged
“oh now it is! Now there’s money involved, I had no where to go because of you. My parents were right! Your lousy, I don’t know what to do Dan I came to you for help, I - please.” she pleaded. Dan stood forward, he words tugging on his heart he cupped her face with his hands and kissed her, before pulling away with a sorry expression on his face. “c’mon we can start a life together you, me and the baby…please.”
“im sorry har” he said “im jus not ready to be a dad lyk.”
Harri started to cry silently as she watched him walk away, she knew she had no choice now and that she would have to give the baby away.
All of a sudden a blinding pain went right through her abdomen, rolling around inside her, her back ached and a jabbing feeling felt like she was being stabbed through her belly. She had been feeling weird all morning but this was more intense than anything she’d ever felt before. She grabbed her phone and dialled Carl’s number.
“help” she mumbled
“what is it?” carl questioned
“baby!” she shrieked,
“oh f-”
“Toscana’s in town” she groaned
“no get to a hospital right away I’ll meet you there-”
“no marcia.” she moaned
“what?”
“NO MARCIA!” she gritted her teeth as she let out a stifled cry which was heard by other diners at the restaurant.
The phone cut off and she breathed through the pain until a blinding stab went through her stomach and all the way through her back as she collapsed to her knees and screamed in pain.
A few customers got up and came to her aid but her mind was blank, she heard muffled versions of ‘dial 999’ and ‘help her someone’ ‘anyone a doctor?’ ‘what’s your name love?’ ‘what’s wrong?’ ‘is she having an attack?’ they swirled around her head and all she can remember answering with was ‘harri’ 'losing' and 'baby'
Tears were rolling down her cheeks as she screeched in agony, everything went fuzzy and she felt like she was looking through kaleidoscopes, everything was spinning and suddenly it all went black.
She heard a smash, felt a bash on her head and felt cold concrete. But saw nothing.
to be continued....
lilroselou:
i have edited the flashback one with big pictures so hopefully i will do the rest soon
ktggoodnight:
wow- i love it- and the way you got Dan's voice!
it all sounds so true, even in such a surreal situation.
keep writing - because you made my weekend with this update
lilroselou:
aww thanks i have a plan of where the end is heading but i still don't know whether people want carl and harri to be together or marcia and carl
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