I loved your previous stories raven, they even reduced me to tears at some points, and this one is shaping up to be on the same level of excellence
Your pictures are fantastic, I want your graphics card! xD
You're a fabulous writer, keep it coming
^ well, I want a new computer... graphics might be good, but playing sims is slower than anything. Took me 36 hours to take the last four pics for the third round of the contest. at least it didn't turn itself off while I was playing. Today, It's done that four or five times already - and everything I've done today, is surfing the net.
I'm glad you all like the story - so far at least. (and yes, there is a kleenex warning here, just so you know...)
Yeah,I want your graphics card too!Mine is sh*t.The water in neighbourhood view is just a solid blue strip and it crashes all the time on residential lots.